I've tried guys. A lot of thinking went into this decision before I made it, as I didn't want a rewrite, yet it was bound to happen. But even that wasn't enough. Not with the setup I currently had. This includes both the setting, number of characters and the already existing chapters.

Too little planning went into writing Loiterous, and although discovery writing is fun, it isn't used in online publishing for a reason. Discovery writers rewrite their novels after they're done. Before they do, everything is out of place. Authors like me don't have that luxury.

Originally, I had this long post written explaining my reasoning, but I don't think that's adequate. An experienced writer would probably come up with one sentence that describes it all. I thought a little and I did come up with one.

I just wasn't good enough.

That's why I decided to announce an indefinite hiatus until I have a proper outline. A story about characters who are both alive and memorable.

From what I can say from the initial planning, there will be at least 3 main characters, including Jason (Icicle). This is all for now, as there is still much for me to learn. I hope to return to you guys with a story that will be both entertaining and original in a few months.

See you then.