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The match ended, as Dominic emerged victorious.
"That was..." Mr David was rather speechless. Perhaps Dominic might be the best gunslinger he ever saw. To suddenly switch into a sniper at close range in combat was an almost impossible feat.
"What..." Mitsuha's face flushed red from embarassment as well. Her previous ego was completely shattered, as she laid contemplating about her defeat.
"Were you always this good?" Benedict asked, suprised.
"Yeap" Dominic replied.
"Hey kid, why don't you go against me next?" Mr David asked. "You seem to be holding back after all" he continued.
Dominic took a look at his appearence, and deemed him to be an old man.
"I don't like harming the elderly" Dominic replied. With a voice somewhat tinged with pity.
"..." the place fell silent. It appeared that Dominic had been unintentionally taunting each person with his words.
"Then this old man will be going against you!" Mr David announced, as he rushed forward. A blur was all Benedict could see, and Mitsuha couldn't even see him move.
However, he appeared at a rather slow pace to Dominic, as he had time to grab his pistol, reload it and point it against Mr David's head, before he arrived.
The cold hard barrel was pointed on the top of Mr David's head, as a suprised look was imprinted on his face.
"Bang" Dominic made a sound effect with his mouth.
Awkwardly, the fight ended as soon as it started. Mr David was amazing, being able to move so quickly, and yet still lose out to a greenhorn youngster. The unfairness of the world.
"Heh" Mr David smiled.
"I guess you can really uphold thoese words of yours" Mr David said.
Other than that, Mr David was full on embarassed. He had planned on teaching Dominic to respect his elders, however instead, he failed rather spectaculary as well.
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"Mr David..." Usagi said lightly.
"That was rather embarassing" she continued in a gentle tone.
"Anyways, that was how fast you can move when you have mastered the art of qinggong" Mr David tried to change the topic.
"So, for today we'll continue honing your inner Qi" he stated.
Benedict and Mitsuha got down to meditate, while Usagi tried her best.
"Master! How did you get so good with a gun?" Risha asked.
"Practice" came the reply.
"What you want to learn too? But I'm already taking that role!" Dominic asked.
There was a rather dissapointed look on Risha's face.
"Alright then, why don't you use the bow? I'll go with you to buy a good one" Dominic suggested. As the two's voices were distracting the meditation.
In all honesty, Benedict was relived when they finally left. He who thought of his brother as someone he has to protect, instead found out that his protection target was stronger than himself. After all, Dominic didn't even have a shred of ability in the pisonic department. He had to get stronger. He was the eldest brother after all.
For Mitsuha, she could only be embarassed in a corner. Her brother who wasn't blessed with any natural talents was actually stronger than her who was blessed with so many advantages. She could feel nothing but embarassed about herself.
The two of them had always relied on him after all, and now, even protection wasn't something they could offer. Dominic had even endangered his grades just to work in the past.(they were poor in the past). And apparently his ranking was at the bottom end of the city alongside his grades.
The two had a strange resolution to get stronger implanted within them on this day.
"Target spotted" Titania muttered to Michelle.
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The two were leaned behind a building wall, in black shades and suspicious look coats. Their motive? Spying on Dominic and Risha.
"They are on a date?!" Michelle screamed internally.
"Risha is a good girl.... I like her but if she's after Dominic then...." Michelle muttered.
After spending months with this big breasted red head, Titania came upon the realization that the Michelle was actually intrested in Dominic. What gave it away? The pictures of him in her room? His toothbrush? A video camera spying from a bug planted on him? Who knew.
"They are headed towards point alpha, the weapon store" Titania announced.
"It appears that they are shopping for weapons" she said.
Michelle sighed in relief.
"A new event has occured! Risha has bent over to look at the bows on display, and Dominic is sneaking a peak at her panties slightly revealing from her short pants." Titania said something dangerous.
"What?" Michelle asked. Her voice was deathly.
"It appears that target A: Risha is unaware of this dangerous scene" Titania said.
"I have to warn my cute little fluffy bunny about this" she continued.
On a side note, she seemed to like anything that was cute and fluffy. And risha fits that criteria.
As Titania was about to rush out, Michelle stopped her.
"Wait a minute, we have to observe more, in case we are wrong" Michelle said.
"How rude, after looking for so long targets A and B has left the weapon shop empty handed even though they tried out so many weapons" Titania commented.
"The store owner appeared to be fine with this" she carried on.
The two of them followed along from shadow to shadow.
And then, suddenly, Dominic dissapeared.
"Alpha to bravo, Dominic is missing I repeat target B is missing" Titania told Michelle who was right next to her. And then, Dominic stood behind them.
"What are you guys doing?" he sighed. Both of them jumped, realising he was behind them.
"Alpha to Bravo we have been sighted! Abort mission!" Titania announced.
"Yeah, I know" Michelle sighed as well.
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8 136mist für denn ich aus Langeweile und Ahnungslosigkeit ein buch beginne ^^
okay aalllso ja das ist mein erstes buch in dem ich so Sachen wie wenn ich getaggt wurde rein schreibe ist nicht groß spannend oder so aber falls ihr zu viel Langeweile haben solltet würde ich mich trotzdem freuen wenn ihr rein schaut wenn nicht tja dann habe ich halt verkackt XD
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