《Mana System - Hello, World! [Complete]》Afterword
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Hello everyone, and thanks for taking the time to read Mana System. When I first started this story, it was on a whim. I never really expected to be writing this for two years or for it to reach over 600k words.
Back before the November Writathon, I realized I had no good idea where to take the story after this arc. Sure I could have done a redemption arc and that might of been ok. But I decided it was time to bring the story to a close. So instead of stringing it along, I decided to complete the story with the end of this arc. Hopefully, you all enjoyed this arc as much as I did writing it.
It's probably for the best. This story had a lot of issues but it taught me plenty about how to write. Will my next story be a masterpiece of literature that will shake the world? No, probably not but you might find it interesting. I hope some of you will join in on the new journey with Kingdom of Rust, link in the post chapter notes. The story will be a bit lighter in tone than Mana System and while it will be fantasy, it isn’t LitRPG. If you are interested, check out the synopsis below. And once again, thank you for reading Mana System and all the feedback and comments and for the over 750k views.
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Ever since Bakus was little, he only wanted to be one thing when he grew up, a Chosen, a protector of humanity. So he trained diligently with that purpose in mind, until the day he came of age.
When he finally managed to fulfill his lifelong wish, he finds out not everything is as he thought and he isn’t nearly as prepared as he should have been. He must now try and survive while he unravels the truth and figures out who he can trust.
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The first chapters are already out with a Monday through Friday release schedule until I hit chapter 20 or until I meat the goal of the writathon. Then I will go back to my two chapters a week schedule as that works well with my available time to write.
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