《Land of Ilragorn》Chapter 9-The Stables
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The void was around me again, this happens way too much.
"More High Chocobo Evolution lines have been added."
"Evolution Path 5: Adolescent High Chocobo (requirements: Live 3 months, have total stats be over 3000, have the Special Title Pride)."
"Evolution Path 6: Adolescent High Kweh (Adolescent High Chubby Chocobo) (requirements: Live 3 months, have total stats be over 2000, have the Special Title Pride, eat over 3 times your body weight regularly)."
What the heck, more were added, and the requirements, what are my stats.
Special title pride, what makes it special? And since when did I have it.
I guess it transfers over too Kweh as well, but I still won't go for it.
I don't want to be chubby if I can choose not to.
The red box dissapears, and I'm left alone again.
Wait, how long until I can evolve, it's been about 3 months.
Whatever, it will happen eventually, now the problem is how do I wake up.
I blink and then I see a big bird in front of my face.
I have gotten used to mom waking in front of my face.
"How did you sleep?"
I get up from sleeping on my side, I look down to see hay underneath us, then the smell hits me, it STINKS.
I look around their are multiple Chocobo's in what looks like stalls all staring at me.
Oh I need to answer mom, "I slept well."
"You have any dreams?"
"The system added to my evolution."
"Thought so."
"What?"
"You awakened a special title or skill right, it would be weird for the system not to add it, your father also had the same expierence, but he decided to stay on the main path of chocobo."
My dad does, wait my stats, I use analysis on myself...
"Target:Wild Infant Chocobo LVL 19, Name: Kwehzalcoatl" "Title(s): Memory Keeper, Kill Stealer, Friend of the Suvunktah's, undeafeated in duels, Damsel in distress, Pride" "Skills: Analysis LVL 5, Copy Entity Number LVL 2, Mind Acceleration LVL 5, Crushing beak LVL 2, Night Vision LVL 2, Foul resistance LVL 4, Magic Armor LVL 5, Recovery Magic LVL 2, pain resistance LVL 1, Heat vision LVL 1." "Stats: HP: 384, STR: 882, SPD: 406, VIT: 346, MP: 1100, INT: 784"
What is the new stuff?
"Title- Undeafeated in duels: You have not lost a duel (It buffs you in Sacred Duels)." "Title- Damsel in distress: You have been saved multiple times by the same entity (Buffs Entity's trying to save you.)" "Special Title-Pride: A deadly sin, given to one Entity who expresses their pride over their life and the determination to get stronger. (Doubles your stats and heals you when your opponent is more than 2x your level, but also increases the strain on your body). Skill- Pain resistance- resists pain Skill- Heat Vision- Sees heat off of entity's bodies.
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I guess I got the extra strength and heat vision from the snake.
"Mom, how old am I," I feel like I should have been 3 months.
"You should evolve tomorrow, congratulations."
That means tomorrow I will have been 3 months old, it feels much longer.
"What is your special skill?"
I didn't even notice dad, he is in the stall next to us, chained up.
"It's etiquette to tell your special skill first before asking mine."
"Well at least you know you shouldn't squawk your skills to any random bird."
"My special title is sloth, it's better than it sounds, now what is yours."
He must have gotten it because he is way too lazy, but are special titles that common.
"Mine is pride, doesn't really fit, but I will take it."
"Seven deadly sin?"
"Yeah."
"That's really rare."
"But you have one."
"Well, I do, but you are the only other bird I have found to have one."
That means it is rare, but for a father and son to have one, is their something special about our bloodline?
"Just saying, that was real manly for you too fight the snake."
"Don't start that, you literally put me too sleep when I tried to help him because you thought it was manly of him too fight one on one with someone stronger then him, our son could have died."
"Wait, yeah where were you when I fought the snake."
"I was watching your manly battle in which you fought with all of your pride on the line."
"What about you mom?"
"He put me to sleep so that I coudn't interfere, he was like 'you don't understand the manliness our son is radiating right now' and put me to sleep."
"Dad."
"Yes?"
I walk over to him, having to duck under the wall to get to where he is chained, and then I activated crushing beak and bit his leg.
"Youch, why does that hurt even worse than yesterday."
"Yesterday I didn't have 900 strength."
"WHAT!?!?!??" "Huuuuuughhhh."
"I didn't mumble."
"How?" "Why."
"A skill."
"What skill, is it a starter skill." "You didn't tell me about any skill?"
I almost explain copy entity number, but then I feel eyes on me from... somewhere.
I coudn't tell where, "Hey do you guys feel like we're being watched."
"Don't change the subject."
I had no idea where the pair of eyes was coming from, hey maybe my new skill could see them.
I activate heat vision.
I look around and what do you know it's a filolial.
It's the invisabrat.
I walk out of the stall and walk right in front of him and stare at his face.
"What are you doing."
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I use analysis LVL 5 on him to make fun of his titles.
"Target: Adolescent Assassin filolial LVL 13" "Titles: Spoiled to the Bone, Loser in duels, Sore Loser, Innocent."
"Hmmm what do we have here, spoiled to the bone, that makes sense, loser in duels, caused by me, sore loser, caused by me, and innocent, that's cute."
"How in Ilragorn did you cheat noooooooow."
He appears before me, maybe a little larger than before.
"Heat vision."
"Since when did you have that."
"Yesterday."
"Do you randomly get skills before you need them or something."
"Kind of, I have a question, when your invisibility hits LVL 10 what does it turn into?"
"Nothing, just makes me harder to detect."
"Better hope you can hide from heat vision, or else you lost your advantage against me."
"... I didn't think of that."
"OOoooooh a filolial, what takes you out of your castle."
A bunch of chocobos laugh.
"Yeah, what brings you hear to visit us lowly Chocobos.
They all laugh again, yet invisibrat doesn't seem fazed, maybe his innocent title is at play here.
He walks up too the stall with the two that made fun of him.
"Pleased to meet you, chocobo's with great eyes to notice that I was a royal filolial immeadiately, you must have the best eyes of your kind."
"Well I was always good at spotting things." "Nah, it's just it's really easy too see."
They were really easily flattered.
"Hey how do you train your skills?"
Well I usually just use them and they level up passively, but I'm not going to tell him that, I'll try to bring out the sage version of me.
"Have you seen how long you could hold invisibility for?"
"I haven't."
"Well first try to hold invisibility as long as you can to see if you gain any levels that way, and if that doesn't work try using it in real combat, it usually levels up faster in combat."
I hope that was sagely enough for him.
"Ok, I was going too duel you, but now that I lost my advantage, I'll be back once I get it back."
I walk back into the stall, invisibrat goes back into invisible mode and runs off, I hope the chief knows he came here, otherwise I'll probably get an earful the next time I see him.
"Who was that?"
I think for a minute, "A friend."
"A chocobo and filolial being friends, now the sky is going too fall."
"Don't jinx us."
"Too late, hmmm, I can't think of a joke with any atmosphere."
"That was bad."
Then the three humans that saved us came in.
"EEEEEEEEEE the babies awake."
Almost in one motion the skimpy clothed one flings herself towards me and summersaults into hugging me, then she rubs her cheek on me until it hurts.
"Dad is her defense high?"
"It would be around 400, why?"
That means I can't use crushing beak, but it should hurt enough without it.
"You have 3 seconds before I bite you."
"3."
"Rukra he's gonna."
"2."
"Bite you."
"1."
"So what, it won't."
I bit her arm at about half strength.
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW."
"That's what you get."
She rubs the red bite mark where I bit her.
"Why'd you do that?"
"Because you rubbing against me hurt, duh."
"What did he say?"
"Ummm he said rubbing ummm hurt and then ummm duh."
Why does she need her to translate, I can hear them just fine.
"Would you like to see the reason why humanoid creatures cannot hear monsters?"
Sure.
"Before the entity number's 40000000 all species shared the same language until, two humans, a elf, and four beastman, all riding phoenixes, attacked the original god of this world. They lost miserably. Before the elf died he was asked why this team was formed. The elf responded with that they wanted to tame you to make their lives easier in every way. Enraged by their selfishness of not only being some of the most intelligent creatures, but also the ones with the most potential he cursed the entire species of every humanoid with not being able to understand any monster. He also cursed the divine phoenix with taking away all of their immortality, their regenerative fire, and their flight for working with the humanoids. Then the original god hid in the center of the planet so that no one tried to fight him again.
That was way to much information, and why did the birds get a worse punishment then the humans.
"Answering commonly asked question for this story... 80% of humanoids were tamers at the time, as it was more efficient at the time to get a strong monster to protect you then get stonger yourself, most tamers got killed by their tamed animals from misunderstandings between them, all in all it was a much worse punishment then the phoenixes got."
Ok I guess that makes sense, wait am I glowing.
I am glowing, why am I glowing.
"Congratulations Kwehzalcoatl, you have officially lived 3 months, I am so proud of you."
"Wait I thought I was going to be changed tomorrow, is it night already."
"Did you hatch at night, no you didn't, you hatched in the morning, so you start evolution in the morning, see you tomorrow morning, hope you get a good evolution."
"Evolution process starting, choose an evolution path."
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