《Eleknar's Heir, The Infernal Prince (Demonic LitRPG)》Author's Note - 7/30/21
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Author's Note - 7/30/21
Spoilers for Ch.3-6
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Hey everyone! Just some updates about the edits I've made.
I've gotten a lot of feedback from many of you readers and made the following adjustments, specifically to the early chapters 3-6:
- Trey is a lot less of a spineless wuss in the very beginning*** this is the newest of the edits. I've made some polls for the early chapters to see whether or not people still think he's irritating in those early stages and hopefully the edits will shine through and have fixed the problem! (I've also deleted comments relating to the old stuff that isn't there anymore to avoid any confusion with the new readers)
- Trey is only in denial of his situation in Ch.2, but after that he accepts his lot in life and does NOT continue through other chapters with this denial
- Jason's chapter was moved from ch.5 to ch.9 to avoid another POV before Trey's story really gets interesting
So please take a look if you have time at those early chapters and vote on the polls (one is below) to give me a heads up on whether or not it fixed the issues y'all had! Thanks in advance!
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