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Abbreviations / Meanings
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These notes may not be entirely correct, i'm simply stating them by my memory and knowledge so, if you see anything wrong, feel free to correct me!
General translations - So you can understand it all better
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Lao - Old
Da - Big / Older
Xiao - Little / Younger
Jie - Older Sister
Mei - Younger female
Xiong - Bro - Neutral
Ge - Older male
Di - Younger male
Shu - Uncle / An older male.
Ye - Grandpa?
Nai - Granny?
Ba - Dad
Ma - Mum
Bei / Bei Fen - Rank
Qian - Forward / Early
Wan - Later
Extra Notes :
Da - Big and Lao - Old - can literally be added to anything and can be interpreted as either Respectful or Disrespectful.
For example
Da-Ge - Boss --- Da-Jie - Boss ( Female ) --- Da Fei Zhu - Big Fat Ass / Big Fat Pig
Lao Da - Boss ( Unisex ) --- Lao-Ye - Old Grandpa --- Lao Fei Zhu - Old Pig / Old Fat Ass
Unisex / Gender-less
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Waffle' Er - ' Er can be added to the back of a shortened name to make an intimate nickname. Only used by someone older or equal in status or age but never used to refer someone older unless they are your life-partners.
Qian-Bei - Elder - Used to refer to someone older whether it be in terms of age or ranks etc.
Wan-Bei - Junior - The opposite of Qian Bei but can also be used to refer oneself before an elder, for example ( Wan-Bei is honored to receive your teachings? )
Lao-Da - Boss - A respectful term to refer to someone of a higher status or someone that you admire, a person that you look up to i guess.
Male
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Ye-Ye / Lao-Ye / Lao Gong-Gong - Grandpa - Can be used to refer someone older than you in terms or seniority.
Lao-Tou - Old Man - This term can be interpreted as either a disrespectful or intimate term depending on the situation or the relationship you have with one another.
Pa / Papa / Lao-Die - Dad
Shu / Shu-Shu / Jiu-Jiu - Uncle - Can be used to refer your blood relative and also strangers that are middle-aged.
Ge / Ge-Ge / Lao-Ge / Da-Ge - Older Brother - A fairly intimate term to refer someone that is older than you, but keep in mind that Ge-Ge shouldn't be used by men as it's straight up weird. Imagine a grown man calling another man Oppa or Oni-Chan * Vomits*
Di / Didi / Lao-Di - Younger Brother - Someone younger than you be it blood related or not.
Shi-Xiong - A senior under the same master.
Xue-Zhang - A senior within the same school as Xue can be translated to Studies.
Shi-Di - A junior under the same master.
Xue-Di - A junior within the same school.
Female
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Nai-Nai / Lao Nai-Nai / Lao Tai Po - Granny / Old Granny / Old Woman
Ma / Ma-ma / Lao-Ma - Mother / Old Mother
Gu-Ma / Gu-Gu / Ah-Sao - Auntie - Can be used to refer those middle-aged woman whether they be blood related or not. Ah-Sao can only be used to refer someone that is unrelated i think.
Jie / Jie-Jie - Older Sister ( Intimate )
Da-Jie - Same shit but the Da ( Big ) acts like a respectful tone to it? Used mostly by gangsters but sibling can use it too..
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Mei / Mei-Mei / Xiao-Mei - Younger Sister or Little Sister..
Shi-Jie - Female Senior under the master.
Xue-Jie - Female senior within the same school.
Shi-Mei - Female Junior under the master.
Xue-Mei - Junior under within the same school.
These notes may not be entirely correct, i'm simply stating them by my memory and knowledge so, if you see anything wrong, feel free to correct me!
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Information
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Updated as of 2/12/2015 ( Information not be up to date )
Locations
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◊ City
□ Districts / Respective areas under a specified city
● Locations under a certain area or district
• Specific place within a location
◊Binhai City
□ Linzhen Area / District
● Lin’s Wet Market ( Wet Market - Chapter 4 )
● Luo Apartment Building
└ • Room 302 ( Li Feng’s Rented Apartment – Chapter 4 )
● Xuyan Road ( Shopping District – Chapter 7 )
└ • Qing Yi Pavilion ( Herbal Store – Chapter 7 )
└ • Xuyan Night Market ( Chapter 8 )
└ • Ou Wan Qing’s Eatery ( Chapter 8 )
□ Renyi Area / District
● Renyi Hospital ( The Hospital Where Li Feng Woke Up In – Chapter 1)
● Renyi Police Station ( Local Police Station – Chapter 13 )
● Renyi High School ( The school Li Feng attends – Chapter 14 )
└ • Class 3-1 ( Li Feng’s allocated class – Chapter 14 )
└ • Basketball Court ( Chapter 17 )
Characters
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Main Character
□ Li Feng
● Male – Age 17 – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 1 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Li Feng is the main lead of the story, it is known that he had been reborn after living 38 solitary years under the identity of a member belonging to the Chinese Special Forces with the highest prestige known as the Jade Dragon ( YuLong ) Group. Upon waking up, he found himself in unfamiliar body of a 17 year old which marked the beginning of his journey.
Related to MC
□ Li Xiao Long
● Male – Age 9 – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 4 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Without any parents, Li Xiao Long was raised by his blood related brother Li Feng ever since he had been born. Although he had a little misunderstanding that caused Xiao Long to hate his older brother, it had since been dealt with which actually allowed him to mature in terms of mentality.
□ Yun Xue
● Female Feline – Age X – Nationality X ( X ) Appearance – Chapter [ 3 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Taken in by Li Feng after she was found to be abused in a park by a few hoodlums within the vicinity of the hospital.
Close Acquaintances
□ Ouyang Feng Ling
● Female – Age 17 – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 2 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Not much is known about Ouyang Feng Ling’s background but it is stated that she is a close friend that he made during high school. Right after she left Li Feng’s apartment after a dinner full of “ Mishaps ”, she got into a Rolls Royce vehicle with a chauffeur.
Renyi High School
□ Zhou Jin Xing
● M – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : A classmate of Li Feng, also known as one of the tyrants of Renyi High notorious for his delinquency. Looks overly matured for his age and towers over anyone of the same age, often teased by his cousin Zhou Da Er for being too hairy and has a nickname called Gorilla.
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□ Zhou Da Er
● M – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : A classmate of Li Feng, also known as one of the tyrants of Renyi High notorious for his delinquency. His ears are larger than normal and has quite the small stature. Teased by his cousin often for having big ears, has a nickname called Monkey.
□ Feng Qing Yun
● M – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : A classmate of Li Feng, also an acquaintance of the Zhou Brothers. Not as notorious as them as he keeps a very low profile but has showed his prowess once in chapter 14 when the brothers are about to get into a fight. Has a pretty silent and calm personality.
□ Da Wei
● M – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : An elite student but has an ongoing dispute with the Zhou Brothers and seems to dislike Li Feng for being close to Ouyang Feng Ling. Also an interschool boxing champion.
□ Miao Jin Gang
● M – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : The Renyi High Basketball Club captain. Has a dispute with Li Feng over Chen Ling and actually fought with him but lost afterwards.
□ Wang Han
● F – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 15 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Not much is known about this girl except for the fact that she is Li Feng’s deskmate.
□ Chen Ling
● F – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Used to bully Li Feng for unknown reasons but was comforted by him afterwards after being heavily traumatized. Known to wear revealing outfits, heavy make and also a female punk at school.
□ Miao Jin Gang and Chen Ling’s Lackeys ( Minor Character )
● M – Age 17– Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 14 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Four basketball club members are known as followers of both Miao Jin Gang and Chen Ling. The only named one is called Ponytail but not much is known about him other than the fact that he has close relations to Miao Jin Gang.
□ Buckteeth and his lackeys ( Minor Character )
● M – Age 18? – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 17 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Students of Renyi High running around pretending to be bosses of the delinquents but was taught a lesson after trying to flirt around with Ouyang Feng Ling.
Renyi Police Force
□ Ling Da Hai
● M – Age Middle-Aged – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 13 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Seemed to be a high ranked officer, gave Li Feng his name card after he helped his son.
□ Ling Fei
● M – Age 20+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 13 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Ling Da Hai’s son, also working as an officer. Almost got into trouble but was saved by Li Feng who he gave his name card to.
□ Chen Bing Bing
● F – Age 20+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 13 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : The person in charge of interrogating Li Feng. An A grade beauty in Li Feng’s eyes and teased by Li Feng several times during the interrogation.
Xuyan Road
□ Ou Wan Qing
● Female – Age 28 – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 8 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : A beautiful woman famed throughout Xuyan Night Market for both her beauty and her culinary skills. Got into a scuffle with Jin Mao that had almost gotten her kidnapped but was thankfully, saved by Li Feng when he just so happened to pass by the area. It is known that she is a widow with a child but not anymore than that.
□ Hou Xing ( Minor Character )
● M – Age 30+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 7 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Works at the Herbal Store known as Qing Yi Pavilion. Was taught a lesson after trying to flirt around with Li Feng thinking that he is a naïve woman.
Renyi Hospital
□ Meng Qi Er
● Female – Age 20+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 2 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Not much is known about Meng Qi Er except for the fact that she was the nurse responsible for Li Feng and the fact that they had gotten close pretty fast after a chat.
□ Dr Wei
● Male – Age X – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 2 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : A doctor responsible for Li Feng during his stay at the hospital after getting into a car crash. Shown to have great interest in how Li Feng had miraculously healed within a short time period.
Organizations ( Underworld )
~ Sirius Brotherhood ~
□ Ao Cang Tian
● Male – Age 20+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 3 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Seems to be a high ranking member of Sirius Brotherhood ( Tian Lang Bang ) which happens to be one of the top dogs of the underworld in Binhai City.
□ Blood Wolf ( Xue Lang )
● Male – Age X – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 3 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : A servant (?) working under Ao Cang Tian.
~ Black Dragon Society ~
□ Jin Mao
● Male – Age 20+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 3 ]
└ • Spoiler : Seemed to hold a leader status of some sort within the Black Dragon as he was seen with a few skilled underlings. Had a scuffle with Li Feng twice which made him hate him to the bone.
□ Iron Triangle Brothers ( Freckled Face, Sausage Lips, Spectacled Delinquent )
● Male – Age 18+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 10 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Followers of Jin Mao, Known as the Iron Triangle, they are notorious for their great bond and teamwork during fights.
□ Da Tou , Er Tou
● Male – Age 20+ – Nationality x ( x ) Appearance – Chapter [ 10 ]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Members of the Black Dragon Society, under the commands of Jin Mao. Da Tou is the heavily tattoed older brother while Er Tou is the younger. Er Tou is known to be an expert of the Muay Thai combat style and speaks choppy Chinese unlike his fluent older brother who hasn’t shown any of his skills but is estimated to be a combat expert as well.
□ Blonde Crew Cut
● Male – Age X – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [9]
└ • Information : Spoiler : Not much is known about this character as he has not shown any skills whatsoever.
???
□ Li Hong Wei
● Male – Age 20+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 4 ]
└ • Spoiler : Seems to have a rich background which provided him with branded goods from head to toe.
□ Tattooed Baldie
● Male – Age X – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 4 ]
└ • Spoiler : Shown to have interacted with Li Hong Wei in Eden’s Paradise but not much is known about him.
□ Scar Face
● Male – Age 40+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 4 ]
└ • Spoiler : Ouyang Feng Ling’s dedicated butler but is actually placed alongside her to be a surveillance tool by her father.
□ Jiang Qiang
● Male – Age 16+ – Nationality Chinese ( China ) Appearance – Chapter [ 3 ]
└ • Spoiler : A student of another school. Used to be a follower of Jin Mao but left after the cat bullying incident. Was scared away by Li Feng soon after he was awed by Li Feng’s prowess and asked to become his underling.
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