《The Necromancer Sol (Rewrite in progress)》Announcement/Update
Advertisement
2 Years ago I decided I wanted to write a System apocalypse Necromancer story. I have a personal rule where I don't ever want to write in a genre if I can't add something. I want to have a take that adds something. So I tried and people liked it. It did way better than I could have possibly ever imagined. At one point I made it to top ten trending. It went better than I ever could've hoped. My problem with writing is that I do way too much world building that never makes it to the story. I will write out a plot that wont appear for hundreds of pages. I make character sheets and google docs fifty pages long instead of actually writing. I waste all my creative energy on theory crafting. Over the last 2 years I've had a ton of different ideas and my google drive is filled with prologues and a couple chapters of stories I never posted.
I always stop before I get to the point where I feel comfortable posting it. Back to this story though, so for rambling. I wrote myself into a hole. Truthfully I hate so much about The Necromancer Sol. It has a ton of problems and inconsistencies. Here are some that irk me.
1. Why the fuck is control a stat? literally makes no sense for summons to take up points in your stat sheet.
2. Why do warriors need mana to use abilities? Thats dumb as hell.
3. Different classes giving different amount of stat points. (Ive always hated this).
4. MC gets random bullshit unique skill
5. That weird rogue part I wrote with the first miniboss.
6. He gets his arm cut off and somehow runs a fuckton without bleeding out.
7. He didn't plan his build well.
Advertisement
8. Control Undead is the stupidest skill I ave ever came up with.
9. How does the Big bad necromancer get his undead stolen? I wrote him as like a huge level guy and he gets his summons stolen from a level 20?
10. Greg levels up WAY TOO FAST,
11. The stats I picked for the system suck.
All of this is just to say that I am in the process of rewriting the story. I have a prologue and 3 chapters done right now. I changed a lot, it's a very different story than before. But its finally the story I wanted to write and tell.
I won't take down the original chapters because I want to preserve the history Of what I wrote.
There will be no set schedule for updates this time, I work significantly more than I used to. I am rewriting this story as well as another story that has 2 chapters out right now. (link will be below.) I want to take my time and be happy with what I post instead of rushing to meet a deadline.
Advertisement
- In Serial13 Chapters
The Dreaming Sceptre (Completed)
Endless nightmares plague the desert city-state of Zabyalla.The Merchant Prince Cas wields a vile magic to control the dreams of all those that sleep within its walls. A pair of thieves break into his palace to take his secrets and treasures, yet a grisly fate has awaited all those that failed in the past.There will always be heads for Cas' pikes.A fast-paced dark fantasy adventure.This story has a sequel called The Ogre's PendantAll stories and characters - including The Dreaming Sceptre - written by Traitorman are created by and are the intellectual property of J.M. Clarke
8 74 - In Serial23 Chapters
Fantastic Advancement
Waking up naked, alone, and confused, Vincent finds himself on an alien planet with an environment and rules he does not understand. Join him in his process of discovery and mastery of the inscrutable and ill-understood laws and principles that will come to govern his new life. Right now (Aug. 2019), each chapter is an average of ~3.5k words, and I update two or three times a week. NOTE: Cover art is a Creative Commons image, from https://www.photosforclass.com/search/insect/1 EDIT: I am not Kate Banner. I did not publish this work under the title "Advancing in a Legendary World".
8 219 - In Serial589 Chapters
Modern Patriarch
When Yao Shen, Patriarch of the Heavenly Sky Sect, ascends and regains memories of his past life on Planet Earth, he realizes that he can no longer allow himself to accept the cruel and violent ways of Eliria, the realm of cultivation. So he decides to change it. It was time to found a new sect. One based on the values of honor and equality over senseless violence and discrimination. A sect where all, from the mortal farmer’s son to a sect elder's daughter, were held accountable to the same rules. Welcome to the Modern Sect. Copyright © Daoist Enigma. Cover by the Talented Vitaly S. Alexius
8 322 - In Serial46 Chapters
Re:Shard - Due to RL issuse uploading is very slow, but still undergoing and not yet dead
An abusive bastard of a father and a mother who never cared. A life in crime, used as a human shield and an assassin and what not. Our main charter’s life is not the best. But he doesn’t complain, he has seen worse after all the is the one to deliver it to others. So his death doesn't come as a surprise, but what comes after does!Cast into a world of magic and monsters, how will he fare in his new life?Cover: [The Ice Barrier] by Horriso.NOTE: This story is for MATURE readers only meaning 18+ (Or what counts as mature in your country!), It is NOT a story for the faint of heart.It contains violence, gore, evil, sexual content + rape - might put them as spoilers, for thoses who want to semi skip them. Utterly brutal and vile. Murder, Slavery etc.2th Note: This is my first posted fantasy story. English is not my first langue. So there will be grammar poops along the way. Will try my very best not to get to much of it in. Will try to get at least one chapter in each week hopefully more.
8 355 - In Serial19 Chapters
A God's Pub
A god's pub is place of mystery, full of wonder and adventure. Those who wander inside shall find another world, both familiar and unknown. Enter through the door and find out, just what awaits you on the other side. Gods, spirits and demons live together in the one city that houses them all. A city with as many names as there are beings inhibiting it- the city of a billion names! Located inside this extraordinary city which few mortals ever sat a step into is a certain pub in a certain city with a certain god serving as both it's owner and bartender. What happens if this god decideds to keep a young woman that mistakenly entered his pub? The cover image is not owned by me, the artist is: https://www.artstation.com/waynechan If the artist want's me to take it down I will immediately do so. Sadly I could not contact her to ask for permission. If anyone can do so in my stead I would really appreciate it!
8 92 - In Serial55 Chapters
Abused
Read and find out!
8 117

