《The Necromancer Sol (Rewrite in progress)》Announcement/Update
Advertisement
2 Years ago I decided I wanted to write a System apocalypse Necromancer story. I have a personal rule where I don't ever want to write in a genre if I can't add something. I want to have a take that adds something. So I tried and people liked it. It did way better than I could have possibly ever imagined. At one point I made it to top ten trending. It went better than I ever could've hoped. My problem with writing is that I do way too much world building that never makes it to the story. I will write out a plot that wont appear for hundreds of pages. I make character sheets and google docs fifty pages long instead of actually writing. I waste all my creative energy on theory crafting. Over the last 2 years I've had a ton of different ideas and my google drive is filled with prologues and a couple chapters of stories I never posted.
I always stop before I get to the point where I feel comfortable posting it. Back to this story though, so for rambling. I wrote myself into a hole. Truthfully I hate so much about The Necromancer Sol. It has a ton of problems and inconsistencies. Here are some that irk me.
1. Why the fuck is control a stat? literally makes no sense for summons to take up points in your stat sheet.
2. Why do warriors need mana to use abilities? Thats dumb as hell.
3. Different classes giving different amount of stat points. (Ive always hated this).
4. MC gets random bullshit unique skill
5. That weird rogue part I wrote with the first miniboss.
6. He gets his arm cut off and somehow runs a fuckton without bleeding out.
7. He didn't plan his build well.
Advertisement
8. Control Undead is the stupidest skill I ave ever came up with.
9. How does the Big bad necromancer get his undead stolen? I wrote him as like a huge level guy and he gets his summons stolen from a level 20?
10. Greg levels up WAY TOO FAST,
11. The stats I picked for the system suck.
All of this is just to say that I am in the process of rewriting the story. I have a prologue and 3 chapters done right now. I changed a lot, it's a very different story than before. But its finally the story I wanted to write and tell.
I won't take down the original chapters because I want to preserve the history Of what I wrote.
There will be no set schedule for updates this time, I work significantly more than I used to. I am rewriting this story as well as another story that has 2 chapters out right now. (link will be below.) I want to take my time and be happy with what I post instead of rushing to meet a deadline.
Advertisement
- In Serial151 Chapters
Inverse System
Abandoned by their mother and orphaned by their renowned father's mysterious death at a young age, Rein and Leona Alister lived alone in a small village happy with nothing but each other's company.
8 635 - In Serial16 Chapters
Ronin of Dust
Masami Hisakawa settled long ago into the calm life of a carpenter, hanging up her sword in favor of a saw and chisel. But when a herald of the demonic armies of old appears near her home, Masami realizes peace is no longer an option. And when several townsfolk go missing, Masami is forced to take up her sword once more. Now, it’s up to Masami to find the source of the demons and cut it off, once and for all. But there are some monsters on the road a human can’t kill...
8 170 - In Serial25 Chapters
Growing Puppets
A year has gone by since Verra was transported to this fantasy world. It is time to weave webs and grow puppets.This is a story of a simple man with a simple wish, to rule the world from the shadows.
8 121 - In Serial6 Chapters
Never heard of that god? Well, wanna convert?
I died and reincarnated like any other good little protagonist, let's just hope I don't have their troubles. What do you mean I'm your god? No, no, no that sounds too troublesome. Go worship someone else. Hey, what are you guys doing down there? What! Promoting my religion?! No, no, no. No thanks. Don't expect too much of me! and constructive criticism is always good!
8 272 - In Serial17 Chapters
A Wish
This is a story where there are no heroes and no villains. This is a tale about revenge, despair, and hope. This is a story where the truth is constantly hidden deep beneath the surface, and nothing is ever as it initially appears. The world is a stage. Every character has their part to play before their exit. They are actors, dancing on a stage set for them while searching for the truth behind the façade. Only time will tell whether they will be able to escape their predestined fate, to search for their happy end, or whether the promised end is nothing more than, a wish. Author's Note: Update will be very unpredictable as I travel quite a bit for my work.
8 169 - In Serial23 Chapters
The StormBlades
In the idyllic city of Athaldris the Elven people live, hidden away from humanity on their secluded island, protected by a magical barrier. That is, until one fateful morning turns their peaceful existence upside down. A young elf discovers a magical scroll in a clearing outside of the Elven city, protected by a powerful, dark magic. A magic so powerful that neither elf nor human could be responsible for it. The scroll was meant for Queen Elspeth of the Northern realm on the main continent, far to the East of the Elvish lands. A land ravaged by constant war and ruin, where humans fight each other over territory and food and everything in between. Reading the contents, Terandriell realizes he must act to change the outcome of the coming war. To save the human race from certain extinction, he knows he has to deliver the message himself. He has only to betray his own people and face his darkest fears in order to do so.
8 121

