《My World To Live》Rewriting the Beginning

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I'm sorry to those who looking forward to a new chapter, >_

Although her backstory won't be poured out in the beginning still, the rewrite will substantially have more of it as well as her thoughts and emotions. Additionally, I noticed that in controlling her release of emotions or thoughts at certain times, she was becoming a stiff character that was hard to relate or connect to as a reader. This time around, I tried letting her "speak" to me more. In short, I got rid of some of the unnecessary mystery bits. I also tried balancing the visual descriptions more.

The events will basically stay the same, but I do reccomend checking out the rewrite as there is a considerable amount of new content. I don't have all of the beginning rewritten for today's weekly release (due to Easter and other work). I do plan to finish in the next few days, or at least before next week which will have a new chapter.

Please let me know your thoughts on the rewrite!  Whether that's through a comment, rating, or review, I'd greatly appreciate the feedback. Like any writer, the silence can be concerning, haha.

Rewritten:

- Chapter 1 (Prologue || Infinity's Spell)

- Chapter 2

- Chapter 3

- Chapter 4 (End of Chapter One || Determination)

- Chapter 5

- Chapter 6

- Chapter 7

- Chapter 8 (End of Chapter Two || The Mirror World)

- Chapter 9

- Chapter 10

- Chapter 11 (End of Chapter Three || Nightmarish Chaffeur)

- Chapter 12

- Chapter 13

- Chapter 14

- Chapter 15

- Chapter 16 (End of Chapter Four || The New Earth)

- Chapter 17

- Chapter 18

- Chapter 19 (title changed to "Cyrienne")

- Chapter 20 (title changed to "Timeless")

- Chapter 21

- Chapter 22 (End of Chapter Five || Heart of Layered Walls)

- Chapter 23

- Chapter 24

- Chapter 25

- Chapter 28 (Chapter Six - 4 || Resolution; chapters 26-27 weren't story content)

All chapters are rewritten to adhere to changes in narration style, but some revisions will be lighter than others. All rewrites will be done on Tuesday along with a new chapter.

Cheers! :3

[04.29.19] And with that I'm done! Whoohoo~! No more rewrites! Even if I find fault, it'll just have to stay put until the end of the first book.

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