Okay, the last arc has ended as you know. But I'm curious about something.

In your honest opinion was the last arc a good one?

The reason I asked is because I'm not confident that it was. In fact, I personally believe that I messed up the last two arcs and ruined the story.

I don't know why I believe that, I just do. This is the main reason why I started writing another story to take my mind off it.

There was a point where I had completely lose confidence in my writing and started to despise the story as a whole.

"What the hell is this?! I really wrote this garage?!"

That was what was going through my mind. However, I don't know if I'm overthinking or just being unreasonable harsh on myself.

If you were to ask me what I disliked about this arc, I wouldn't be able to give you a clear answer. I honestly don't know what's wrong with arc.

That's why I wanted your opinion.

To be honest, this arc and all the previous have been set up arcs in my head. To me, the story hasn't even started yet. Everything was just a long prelude.

The next arc is where the story really begins for me. However, it is also a set up arc.

Another thing I'm uncertain about is the characters. More specifically; Rihan and Sasha.

I wanted to say Momo and Alec as well, but their characters are suppose to be built up later down in the story, especially Alec's.

The reason I'm uncertain about Rihan is because I'm not sure what you readers think about him. And if I'm portraying him correctly.

As for Sasha, yeah. I rushed ahead on impulse and destroyed her character. Which I intend to fix over time.

In fact, now I think about it. I tend to be too impatient and rush certain things that shouldn't be rush because of impulse.

I did that a lot this arc, which is why I think it's a mess. But it could just be me.

As such, I would like it if you all share your opinion. I don't care if it's negative, as long as it's constructive.

Tell me what you liked and what you hated about the arc as well as the characters.

Also vote on the polls.