《Silver Amelia》Arc 1-3 Afterword
Advertisement
I hope you don't mind me making an afterword so I can speak freely about the story.
Anyway, first, I was recently bored and took the personality test for Amelia, Kanna, and Celestia. I know it's one of the tools in order to differentiate one character from another in stories, but it's the first time I used it for my characters. Anyway, these are the results with their personality in mind. But mind you, the result does not entirely portray who the character is.
Results based on: www.16personalities.com
Amelia's result was: The Protagonist (ENFJ, -A/-T)
This was an unexpected result, but taking her personality, views, and ideals to mind, it made sense. Still, I have never thought of making Amelia as an actual protagonist type. I just had a mindset of 'This is her past. This the result of it. After the things she's been through, this is her now'.
Kanna's result was: The Entertainer (ESFP, -A/-T)
This one was an obvious result. Taking Kanna's personality, and how she often acts, it's an undeniable summary of her personality.
Celestia's Result was: The Executive (ESTJ, -A/-T)
This kinda fits into Celestia's personality of maintaining the status quo in Origin. And taking the rule she placed to protect her kin, and how she responded, Celestia does feel like an executive type.
All that aside, I'll talk about the story itself. So far, I'm glad I did not drop the story despite having the mindset of it for God knows how many times. Yes, I thought of dropping the story numerous times. I had so much to brood about the story especially when it came out until the latter part. Like how I failed to make it into WebFictionGuide, failed to garner a single response in Ficfun, and a lot more that it's too depressing to count.
Advertisement
Still, I kept on writing. I just kept on reminding myself that an unfinished story is not something that my readers would want. Besides, if I stopped now, I thought that all of Amelia's progress would be in vain. Which is actually the main reason why I kept writing.
I love Amelia. I love how she kept on facing her problems despite wanting to turn tail. I love how she developed and how she shows her concern for the people important to her in her own way. She might not be good with words when she's frank, but deep inside, she's still a little girl. Lastly, I love her silver hair (I have a thing for it lol)
My love for Amelia aside, the story is progressing in a crawl, which is on purpose. Sometimes, I wanted to increase the pace, but I kept on reminding myself that building a world is something I cannot rush. I have to place hints. Make reasonable, logical, and plausible scenarios. All to make a world that could stand on its own.
Still, I have to thank the pacing. And with how the story is progressing, I'm sure some of you had an unconscious hint regarding the gradual change of point of view. It was intended to build Amelia and the people around her before diving into the more chaotic part of the story. Like, I have yet to give details about the Divine Assembly. Who are the leaders of the church and their plans? The result of the fairies being missing in action in the war. Ragnell the dwarf. The three other Heroes. The Angels. Amelia's Brother Mark and his Mother Liz.
I could state more, but it might go to the realm of spoilers so I should stop there. Anyway, threads are still progressing and will connect soon. And with the foundations I have built into the story, and ceilings without them, I have so much to write about to fully realize the story. And I hope you're still here to read it.
Anyway, thank you for your support!
Fourth Arc incoming!
Advertisement
- In Serial42 Chapters
No Respawn
Rewrite of the No Respawn here: https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15941/no-respawn-patch-20 And God said: "Let there be light!"*DING!*and there was a blue screen...So God changed the world and screwed everyone living on it. Let the game begin!Oh.. and don't die. There is no respawn. French Translation by Yusuke_Takumi/takutrad: https://tradudimanche.wordpress.com/
8 247 - In Serial69 Chapters
Eodem: a Rifle and Sword Adventure
After a routine planet-fall on an Earth-like planet near the farthest recorded reaches of the frontier, a group of United Federation of Earth colonists looking for a new home has stumbled into a planet that is described as a "Fantasy World". Complete with Dwarves, Elves, Dragons, Orcs, Monsters and shockingly other Humans... A brave Special Observations Group code-named 'Stryder Group' must survive in this new world with their guns, wits, genre savviness and a few good cans of Spaghetti sauce.. (All cover photos on every chapter are not mine. They belong to their respective owners)
8 209 - In Serial12 Chapters
The Cycle of Resentment
Wu Tiangong’s birth caused an uproar in the Tiantang Kingdom. Born to the chief of one of four strongest powers, the Wu Clan, Tiangong was destined for greatness. However, nothing ever goes quite right in life and at the age of six, he was faced with betrayal. Gone were his prospects of greatness, of power and grandeur; a decade of misery taking their place. But nothing lasts forever and once the river of destiny changes its course, Wu Tiangong plunges onto the path that was once rightfully his.
8 200 - In Serial20 Chapters
Eringer
One man's quest for the greater good. Toren Eringer was a man that had everything, for a time. Now, he wields an ancient power he utilizes to right the wrongs of the world. That power comes at a price.
8 350 - In Serial115 Chapters
New Poetry Book
Well this is my new Poetry book so I hope you enjoy
8 250 - In Serial13 Chapters
NEET of God
Reveka Cardigal was a nineteen year old living in today's world. She was beautiful: big eyes, small nose, perfect face, a sweet voice and a slim figure to match. She could have easily passed for a model however there was a problem. She was a shut in NEET with serious conversational problems. The last time out of the house some freaking years ago was also the last time the world would see her…well, this world.After some """"crash and burns"""" she was sent to a planet of wonders with dragons, demons, elves and more and her first encounter in this magical world was a hurricane (figuratively) that went by the name Bride of God. ________________________|For those who might not know NEET is short for “Not in Education, Employment or Trainingâ€|
8 145

