《Silver Amelia》(Not a chapter) Questions, Recommendations, or Suggestions
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As the title says, this is not a chapter.
The goal of this post is to communicate with my readers. Well, this is my first time writing and I really want to show Amelia's story. So I want it to be as engaging as possible.
To get straight to the point, please feel free to ask a question regarding me or my work 'Silver Amelia'. Feel free to ask anything. I don't bite.
You can also bring up suggestions and recommendations you can give which you think may or may not help in improving my work.
Possible Questions:
-Why are you not detailing their height/appearances?
>That's because I don't want them to eat up a lot of word count in the story since the appearance is generally trivial in most cases (at least in this fiction, which I even used a Noble's POV to describe how Amelia looked). But I'll try to post a character data in the future so that the story won't be disturbed and it would be easier to imagine. I'll try to add my shitty drawings with it as well.
-Was the story supposed to be like this before it was published?
>No. The story before is more of a pure revenge kind of story.
-Why a female MC?
>Idk, the story regarding Amelia (her past) just popped in my head while I was taking a bath, then I suddenly thought that it should be heard. something like that.
-Do you have plans for intermissions?
>Yes I have. It would be entitled 'Teach me Amelia Sensei'. Some would include the POV of other characters.
-Do you plan to include topics relating to real life?
>Yes, I do. Maybe a little about economics every now and then. Some about ecology. Maybe logic too?
-What's a Formosa?
>It's a jellyfish.
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