《Rose of Thorns and Blood》Chapter Five
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Early Childhood part 2~
~Narumi pov~
This week was very painful, with the death of our mother, monkey went to retrieve us and put us in an orphanage, but word got out of our tenant so one of the workers tried to kill us but...
"hah finally demons we have a moment alone, the ANBU guards are outof the building" she said weraring a butcher knife in her right hand.
"Do you know what have stolen from ME? MY SON WAS ONLY 5 MONTHS OLD, but he died because of your poisonous chakra, that whats the medic said, DID YOU HAVE ANY MERCY WHAT DID WE DO TO YOU TO ATTACK US LIKE THIS!!!" she was trembling in rage, well although i am not kurama her rage is kinda justified, if someone killed naruto i would be pissed.
"And then you assume these forms do you really think looking that beutiful will save your life, think again THIS IS FOR MY SON!!" she brandished the knife in a stabbing position and was about to bring it down, but in the next instant a shining light in the dark room forming a line went from me and passed the forehead of the caretaker, a giant hole was in place and brain matter was splashed in the wall across us, that's what a normal jounin might see, but if you'd were a kage you might have seen a white chain with a purple aura going at extreme speed stabbing the lady right in the forehead then dissapearing just as quick, even if you could see whats happening, avoiding it was another problem altoguether.
(Narumi)[Huh so thats the adamantine sealing chains, it seems to use my chakra as a fuel, then it acts as an ultimate protection, guided by the will of kushina, it was so quick if i didn't have rinne i would have missed, even so her chains shouldn't be this fast or strong, it must be because of the density of my chakra, i mean it's as dense as a neutron star, that is scary!]
the density of chakra is another aspect of it, as it increases the potency of everything it utilizes, so for example if a person were to make a katon: goukakyuu a C-rank katon jutsu it would be a large ball of fire that can do medium burns in enemies but a person who had twice the density in chakra would make the ball larger, the fire hotter, and the speed which it travels a little faster making it a higher rank, but usually people with high density have less chakra and its more dificult to gain control over it as its heavier to move so not many people with dense chakras can become ninjas , so i guess we are paradoxes in the fact that our chakra is nigh unlimited, our control makes it as easy to move it as breathing, and we have such dense chakra its scary.
(Naruto)[That is very scary indeed i was waching with my rinne and it only used a tiny fraction of your chakra for a split second then your recovered faster then possible]'sigh'[i hope mother doesn't end up destroying konoha with our chains in her 'overprotectiveness']
that is true she could end up destroying konoha, no maybe the fire country if she uses all the available chakra we have now if i remembered well a neutron star have a density in order of magitude 10^17 'gulp' its no joke.
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well it seems the ANBU quards are coming back from their shift
well the monkey learned of our defense but he didn't do anything as he is not a seal master, and jiraya has abandoned us here to wallow in his grief of losing his student, what a godfather, we will probably only see him in the chunnin exams
well other than that there were two funerals we attended, one was our father, the other ...
we were carried by the monkey-sama for the funeral of our dear naive and stupid father, the whole village was dressed in black doing homanages in the streets and paying respects to the late leader, we wre on top of the hokage tower, where a select few of clan heads, elite ninja, a few anbu,and the elders were attending the funeral.
(Narumi)[We are lucky that fugaku is in attendance with his famlily, ne onii-chan?]
(Naruto)[How right you are imouto-chan, fugaku, mikoto, itachi, and sasuke, i can't believe how easy it is]
I activated rinne
[[Hachiman!]]
after copying all of their powers that they might had if they achieved the mangekyou and the rinnegan we deactivated our doujutsu
(Narumi)[Even so most of the konoha 12 are already here, the only one that wasn't born is hinata]
(Naruto)[ Yes she will be born in december i believe]
(Narumi)'even so the original wife to naruto canon' i lick my lips.
(Narumi)[W-what is this]
(Naruto)[grrr...]
we were also present in the funeral of our dear mother and it's only the monkey, and kakashi they aren't even burying her in konoha w-wha
(Sandaime)" they didn't want to bury her in konoha, beindg the mother of the two jinchuuriki and an 'outsider' not even mikoto came to her funeral" he was cluching his hat down not to show the displesure he had in his village
(Kakashi)"T-this is not fair they refused to put her name in the memorial stone, even after all she did in the war, stoping the mist fronlines by herself, just because she was not born in the village and the mother of the two containers, have they forgot the history between konoha and uzu, have they forgotten with our vest has that spiral, the symbol of their clan" he was cluching his hand so tight it bled a little
(Sandaime)" they are erasing the name uzumaki from every book, every record, they are pretending to erase their history altoguether, at least the coumpond is protected, not even me and jiraya can enter it"
(Kakashi)"Why go that far..."
(Sandaime) " their hatred and pettyness go far it seems... kakashi can you dome a favor and be their anbu protector when not in missions, while they may have a powerful defense, i would be glad if you can watch them in your spare time"
(Kakashi) "Hai, but i will be out doing missions for a long time, konoha still needs to recover"
(Sandaime)'you said that but in reality you want to die in those missions' he sighed "Okay but at least look after them while you are not on missions" '14 years old and he lost everything, wanting to die in this age, the world needs to change.'
While they were discussing this, my mind went to overdrive
(Naruto)[THOSE BASTARDS HOW DARE THEY, those villagers won't even give her a proper burial grrr i won't forgive this]
She was the Anbu commander, she sacrificed more than anyone for this village, and they repay her with this, i am so angry, wait a few years until i am ready, i am going to kill everyone sitting in the civilian council they will never even find the bodies.
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the sandaime carried us back 'home' leaving an unmarked grave in the forest ba few miles off konoha.
grr.. remembering makes me so mad but i got to be patient, good thinngs come to those who wait.
the months went by and most of the assasination attempts were brutally ended by my or naruto's chains, and the usual neglect, like forgetting to feed us, forgetting to bathe us, and forgetting to change our diapers, at least we have kamui for the last one.
at least the assasination attempts staved my bloodlust, naruto is his aloof self but i can see that he is irritated by the council, don't worry onii-chan narumi will kill them for you and serve their heads on a plate
while thinking this we started exercising, working our speech, walking and training stealth so we can invade all orochimaru's labs in a year so we can find something useful, for that we will need to evade the monkey, and the disgusting snake while they confront each other, so at least high kage level skill, huh with our cheats we can make it work
a year and a half passed by and we got our bodies to the level of a high genin, pretty impressive for a couple of almost 2 year olds,i am taller than our peers by an inch or two while onii-chan is a little bit taller than me, we already sensed the monkey preparing his unit to confront his wayward student, so we have no anbu guards at the moment.
(Narumi)'kamui' 'i never knew why the hype of shouting the tecnique out loud when i can easily activate it in my mind' with that thought we leave the room of our orphange through the tear in space.
hmmm the monkey really needs to grow some backbone, he let his student escape so easily, when he could have ended his life right there, well the snake did have some interesting tecniques but most of it was medical ninjutsu and his research into immortality, i am kinda disapointed but we copied everything into mind with our rinne, even that jutsu he used to escape, hah high kage stealth is something else, i wonder why nobody works on this branch, we were there in the room with them and they didn't even notice, we then sank on the ground with the intangibility and disapeared from his last lab.
We are three years old our bodies resemble 5 year olds but we aren't complaining, well our speed is now compared to a fresh jounin, and the strengh of a high chuunin, it seems monkey recognizes us as genius, well aparently learning to read and write as a 2 year old screams prodigy, he also reached the conclusion that having the kyuubi in our stomach develops our bodies faster than normal
today is december 27th the third birthday of hinata it snowed pretty bad last night, so we had to sleep together to endure the cold, while we are in the sense of the word invincible, the cold is pretty annoying some times.
we leave early to witness the kumo ambassador arriving, i sense greed oozing off him, another thing we have in our sensing skill, negative emotion sensing, i signal to my brother and he dissapears
i am going to keep watching the ambassador all day while naruto will watch hinata
~~Naruto pov~~
I am bored, and slightly irritated why do i have to watch this old man training his daughter, she is cute, but not as cute as imouto-chan, she gets more beautiful every year, oh killer intent coming fromthe other guy twin is he going to attack the heiress, o it seems hiashi notices it, he then activates a handsign, oh the guy dropped the floor, man that birdie seal must be painful, i would almost feel pity if you weren't going to attack a 3 year old. Well at least it will be a party today, i hope i can steal some candy, well with my steath skill reaching ss- rank i doubt the byakugan can hope to locate me.
its finally nighttime a am carrying varios snacks in my arms while eating a lollipop, ah here comes imouto-chan
(Narumi)"hey where did you get all of theses onii-chan?"
(Naruto)"I stole during the party want some?"
(Narumi)"A-arigatou" she picks some snacks and start eating with a blush, heh she's more cute when she blushes, but to everyone else she is a complete ice queen, she only opens up to me it seems.
(Naruto)"So how was your side?"
(Narumi)"pretty boring the guy only discussed some terms of agreement that were a little bit unreasonable, hah like kumo can attack konoha when they have their hands full with iwa they don't have the manpower left to spare and they will lose their sandaime raikage soon, man saru has a nonexistant backbone, he is led by the nose by those councilmenbers, and doesn't have the guts to face another war"
we then looked in the room where the girl was sleeping, i put a genjutsu on her, and hiashi, no matter what they won't wake, i also killed hizashi for trying that stunt earlier we are just going to put the blame on the ambassador even if he will not survive, speaking on the devil he already entered the room picked hinata and put her in a sack, he then escapes to the edge of konoha, a few hours later he crosses the fire country frontier, i got to give it to this guy he is fast but...
we are faster, i reached behind him and kicked his back breaking completly breaking his spine then picked the sack containing hinata then used kamui and transported her to my pocket dimension, while i was doing this narumi activates her chakra chains, they wrap around the guy and brings him in aa crucified position
"W-hat i-is h-holding m-me" he asked, a second later he is completly crushed and turns into pieces by the pressure of the chains, well can you really call them chains when thei are celular sized? yes narumi has done it she made the damn things celular sized, so the naked eye can't see, huh you need at least a rinnegan to see those things, it uses very little xhakra but it's very dense and probably unbreakable, huh those are deadly thing i tell you she can wipe out an army without them knowing what killed them.
Anyways we go back to konoha with kamui plant some evidence where hizashi was killed drop hinata and go back home to sleep.
~next early childhood final part~
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