《Rose of Thorns and Blood》Chapter Three: The Birth of The Children of the Prophecy~ (Revised)
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The Birth of The Children of the Prophecy~
(Kushina)"THIS HURTS TTEBANEEE"
she groaned in pain as she was delivering her children in a torch-lit room some miles off of Konoha, the place was infested with ANBu units patroling and various seals to alert and detain any intruder, in the room there was the Yondaime Hokage and husband to Kushina tending the seal he had a height of 5'11''(180 cm) with sun-kissed blonde hair and blue eyes, while normally composed he was sweating bullets at the sight of his wife in pain.
(Minato)"Um, i never seen her cry out in pain like this before, is she okay?" he asked worried
(Miwako)"Of course she is! Anyway, you're supposed to be watching the kyuubi seal!" An old woman said annoyed at his question, this woman was Miwako Sarutobi, wife of the Sandaime Hiruzen Sarutobi.
(Minato)"B-but she's" he got worried as another scream of pain hit his ear
(Biwako)"You're the fourth hokage show some composure any man wouldn't handle the pain, but women are strong"
Just then they yondaime heard a roar coming from the seal, the kyuubi was putting all the effort to escape and with the birth of twins, minato would be hard pressed to win against it and keep the seal from breaking, but he didn't have any dificulty, it seemed that someone was helping keep the beast away, that was the feeling he had.
(Minato)"Hang in there kushina, naruto, narumi"
~Outside~
Outside was the man in the black cloak and orange mask strangling an ANBU in a nearby river he then let go of the neck and he looked around where all the ANBu that were stationed to protect the Kyuubi container were dead, he then looked up to see the cave and then started walking slowly to the mountain and then as if he was a ghost he entered the mountain side and dissapeared.
(Minato)"So this is naruto" he had a happy grin as he saw the baby being held by the second midwife, he had blond tuft of hair and teal eyes and with a face that promised heartbreaker and ladies man 'i guess kushina will have a hard time beating the fan girls of this one' "Come on kushina now only narumi remains, then i will reinforce the seal and we can go home celebra-"
(Kushina)"EASY FOR YOU TO SAY YOU BASTARD!,I WILL NEVER LET YOU TOUCH ME AGAIN! ugrhh"
(Biwako)"The head is out, just a little bit more kushina" 'I never saw babies so beutiful like these two'
A second set of baby cries were heard that night
(Minato)"Welcome to the world narumi"
Miwako then brought two of the most beutiful babies for kushina to see, one had blond hair and teal eyes, and the other had a mix of colors that formed the sunset with royal purple eyes both were incredibly beutiful and cute.
(Kushina) "Naruto ... Narumi" She said with labored breath as she sent a gaze full of love towards the small bundles.
(Minato) Ha .. Ha from today i am a father" He then looked at his daughter and instanly thought 'Um, She will not date until she is fourty i will not allow it' "Now let's reinforce the seal and go home kushina".
Just then 2 thud sound were heard he looked and saw both Biwako and Taji dead with the masked man having picked up both his children.
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(Obito) "Fourth hokage, Minato Namikaze, get away from the kyuubi jichuuriki, otherwise these babies will die at the ripe age of one minute" he was momentarily stunned by the beuty of the two babies but quickly gained composure " now choose your wife or your children" he then threw the two bundles in the air and prepared two kunais ready to strike both of them.
(Kushina)"NARUTO ... NARUMI"
In a single second minato showed that he deserved the title of the fastest man on earth and grabbed the two bundles and went to the other side of the wall, but mot before noticing the explosive tags on the blankets, he then used his hiraishing marker on one of his safehouses outside of konoha and discarded both blankets destroind the small home in the process, he then landed outside in the grass and quickly pulled the stray piece of wood that pierced his leg.
(Minato)'This man easily passed all of the protections both me and sandaime-sama have put and managed to sneak in undetected, and furthermore he managed to separate me and kushina, he is very dangerous' as he was thinking this he teleported to another safe house this one a little bit far from konoha, he then laid the two babies in the bed "Wait a little bit i'll be back with your kaa-chan, be back in a flash" he then disappeared in a flash of yellow.
~~Narumi pov~~
(Naruto)[You know what to do don't you Narumi] He then activated the rinne-sharingan, it was a sight to behold, varios concentric rings with three tomoes each with a teal color
i never imagined the amount of pain we had when we we were delivered birth is very painful for the baby as well so painful both mentally and physically that we already unlocked the rinne-sharingan straight away but it was hard hiding it from our parents, we had to deactivate the chakra in our eyes while crying nonstop from the pain.
(Narumi)[Hai i know, we will be defenseless without chakra pathways for a while so we must keep mother alive until she gives us an ultimate defense, her chakra chains] while thinking aqbout the special power in our eyes, this is really a cheat, Hachiman(God of War) allow us to copy any mangekyou sharingan, rinnegan, or rinne sharingan tecnique just by looking at those with the potential to wield those types of eyes, this is seriosly op, i mean we already did copy kamui from obito, and having it in both eyes powered by our eyes we can rip tears in space wherever we want in varios sizes we can become intangible whenever we want but the time limit is still 5 minutes but we don't need to focus with our eyes to use kamui, i guess with training we can activate it without activating our doujutsu, and the best part of Hachiman is the ability to strengthen any tecnique we copy, for example if there was another uchiha who had the disposition to acheive kamui and we copied it again it would become two times more powerful and would add diferent characteristics to the jutsu.
(Naruto)[Good now the ability we have is a pleasant surprise and our Hachiman has acheived lvl 2, we can save our father and mother by ripping the claw out in a tear of space it would still not be enough because the extraction will still kill our mother and the sealing will kill minato, we need her alive for more then a few days so she can see the village hatred up close so she can 'bless' our chakra chains and work the same way as gaara sand when it was 'blessed' by karura in the anime.
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when we ended our conversation a flash of yellow appeared and mother was being carried bride style by minato
(Kushina)"Naruto ... Narumi" She seemed so relieved to see us it wasn't the same look i received from my previous mother who was all fake smiles, but a look of love, i felt warm inside, at least onii- chan promised to resurrect her later on when we meet her in the fight against kyuubi.
Minato put his signature clothes on, the modified Jonin vest and the cloak with the Yondaime Hokage written in the back or at least that's what the anime said, here is a different language from Japanese, we were able to learn the language by listening to our parents talking from the womb, kudos from learning things 10x faster then any prodigy and super intelligence and comprehension
(Minato)"i'm leaving in a bit" Ah there he goes again, i am salivating in the prospect to lear, master, and upgrate the hiraishin, and his rasengan too i have a few ideas to make it a very powerful jutsu, hooray for perfect chakra control, but i probablywon't learn it until the tsunade retrieval mission, after all while kage bunshin will be easy to copy due to most jounin knowing how to do it, the rasengan isn't and there's 2 people other than minato and kushina who knows how to do it and they are jiraya and kakashi, anyways with our sensing abilities reaching 50 km we can sense kurama wreaking havoc but it's being pushed back by what it seems the sandaime, ah it seems minato finished his fight with mask man and will probably flash now.
The third flash in the night appeared and the Yondaime he looked at our mother in surprise, with all signs of exhaustion gone, of course, baka we fed our chakra so that she survives for at least a day.
Kushina looked at him and nodded.
He picked us up and we flashed again into the middle of the forest close to Kurama.
(Minato)"I have to put a barrier soon" 'I'm Almost out of chakra'
(Kushina)" I can still do this" just then six chains went from her body and restrained the nine tailed fox" please let me drag the Kyuubi with me to death, with doing so i will be able to save all of you and delay the Bijuu return"
(Minato)"Kushina there is another way i can make my children its Jichuuriki i will divide the Kyuubi in ying yang chakra and seal the yang into Naruto and the yin into Narumi you don't need to sacrifice yourself, that's my job and even then they will need a powerful weapon to defeat that masked man, please don't argue with me on this"
(Kushina)" they will be hated for what they contain"
(Minato)"No they will be treated as heroes, that will be my last wish as a Hokage of Konoha, we are not like the other villages in that regard" he said smiling, hmph naive and idealistic fool that's why i dislike you.
Minato then summoned an altar and put us in there he the made some hand signs wich we copied and understood the technique with ou Sharingan abilities that went to the Rinne
(Minato)"shiki fujin" a white clothed monstrosity with black teeth and purple skin appeared behind him and sliced the kyuubi in half separating in yin and yang"hakke fuin shiki" he then sealed the yin part in me, it hurt a little bit but nothing i can't handle, he then prepared to seal the yang part in my big brother but before he could one of the chains of the claw broke and kurama prepared to strike both of us, our parents seeing this jumped in front to protect us from the strike but then they heard a big noise and saw the entire hand dismembered from the kyuubi in a small crater, they looked at us and saw both our rinnes with diferent colorations, mine being purple and naruto being teal.
(Minato)" -Tthe r-rinnegan u-unbelievable on both of them no less" ' a child born of great parens will save or doom the world, huh, so you both are the children of the prophecy Jiraya-sensei'
(Kushina) "they protected us"
(Minato) " One more time Hakke Fuin Shiki"
the rest of Kyuubi was sent to the seal in the stomach of naruto
then we deactivated our eyes and went to nap a little to recover our lost chakra.
~~Minato pov~~
Ughh, i fell on my knees, oh god the pain it seems i will die soon, it seems the barrier is falling down so the Sandaime-sama will arrive soon.
(Kushina) "Minato" she said in such a sad tone, tears falling from her eyes.
"Hey don't cry at least you are still alive"
just then the Sandaime entourage arrived
(Hiruzen)"Minato"
"hey can you do me one last favor Sarutobi-sama can you please make sure that Naruto and Narumi are treated as the heroes they are, if it weren't for them konoha would be destroyed please can you honor this father's dying wish"
(Hiruzen) " Hai i will make sure" he the lowered his head and the people around started crying
"i- see-" then gave my last goofy grin to stop them from crying for me then closed my eyes.
(Hiruzen) ' he died with a smile on his face what a grim day'"Kushina can you get up?"
(Kushina)"H-hai" she said with tears streaming down her face she then picked up her children on her arms with a loving gaze only a mother could produce, however as she calmed down from the whole ordeal a deranged look appeared on her face as she looked at her heirs.
(Hiruzen)' i guess they became her lifeline now i need to deal with the aftermath, what a tragedy it was today we lost a lot of good people, it seems konoha will never be the same'
as he was walking back to the village he missed a ninja hiding in the forest with a white mask with the 'Ne' symble
(Ne)'i must report what happened here to danzo' he then shunshine'd out of the clearing.
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