《Dust to Dust》Quick Poll, Q&A, Feedback
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I haven't done a dedicated Q&A/Suggestions thread yet, so I figured today was a perfect time due to the place in the story that I'm in.
Now that I'm at the first planned fork in the road for this story, I figured that I'd ask readers what they'd like to see. I have two general paths planned out, one involving Pile's dungeon, and one involving free adventuring. Putting up a quick poll to see what the general consensus is.
General feedback/questions are very much appreciated, I know that my writing is isn't near perfect, and would like to improve.
I'd also love to know what about this story you guys like. Is it the fights? The steady evolution of Pile? The characters? (I doubt it's the characters, since I've only really introduced 2.5 and Pile has imprinted off Travis so hard that he's basically a carbon copy personality-wise, at least for now.)
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