《Diary of Erica Kron》Day 51
Advertisement
I have decided to spend half of my time teaching people and half of my time trying to figure out how to make something that would teach people in the future.
A couple more people are ready to join my Paladins, and more have learned everything I can teach. The elf kid is doing well, really well actually. Under my direct guidance, they are thriving in a way that the vast majority of the other students simply aren’t, I expect great things from them. They are actually progressing slower than most of the others, but when you consider their lack of talent for the subject it’s impressive.
As for creating memories, I’m not very good at it yet. I am able to do it, but I fail more often than not. Which is more or less what I expected. I can maybe redesign the structure to be less complicated, which would do wonders for my ability to actually create it, but there would be several downsides with that. The most obvious is the fact that it would use up a lot more soul energy to create, as everything would be much more spread out. The second is that it would be more fragile, which means even more soul energy to reinforce the shell of the soul. It is possible to do it in a way that is both simple enough for me to do while also being durable, but they take much more soul energy than I have access to so it’s a moot point. Besides, even if I fail it is good practice for bigger and better things.
One of those bigger and better things involves expanding and improving my hivemind a little. I want to try and connect the souls of the members to myself and to each other, which should have a number of effects, the most important of which is an increased amount of control over the information and emotions that reach me from my hivemind. Really the other things are irrelevant when compared to that, but there are other things. It should make it easier to share information through the hivemind, which isn’t really necessary currently but still potentially useful. Plus if I do it right I can increase the amount of mental prowess each individual has while also dramatically expanding and improving my own soul, or at least the shell. Any improvements to the core is going to take a lot more control than I have.
Advertisement
There are a couple downsides, the most noteworthy being that it is going to take a little while before I’m at a point where I can reasonably do this. I’ve tested it a bit on a small scale and it’s just out of reach of my current skills, I imagine that doing it on a scale like this would make it harder. At the same time, it is going to cost a lot of soul energy, easily an order of magnitude more than I have available to me currently. That isn’t too bad as my soul is still rapidly improving thanks to the exercises I’m doing, but it will still be quite a while before I’m able to pull it off. Although, if I do it in smaller increments I might be able to get away with using less energy at a time, that way I could do it much sooner and not have to worry about exhausting or hurting myself.
I should see about trying to learn other subjects in the same way I learned about the soul, though I doubt anything will come of it. Very few people are capable of communicating like that, most of them being really old dungeons.
Other than that I spent my downtime with Jasmine, as she was in town again today. She complained about not being able to join my hivemind because the benefits would be super useful for her, apparently doing so would get in the way of the whole ‘preventing people from learning how to use nuclear fire’ thing. That actually spawned a rather interesting discussion about telepathy and other similar things. Apparently, one of the first things they teach newcomers who somehow managed to figure things out on their own is how to shield their minds from telepathy, which makes sense. They also do things like teaching them how to turn off pain or how to remove toxins from the body quickly, apparently so much as a slip of the tongue is enough to let some people figure out how to use nuclear fire, while truth serums and torture have been used on several occasions in the past to get their secrets. At the end of their training, they are all forced into contracts similar to the one I have with the older dungeon preventing them from revealing their secrets without permission from the others. They really take this censorship seriously, it’s kind of ridiculous actually. I can see how damaging it can be, but this is a level beyond what I was expecting.
Advertisement
As a side note, every single nuclear fire user is a somewhat competent healer or undead. You kind of have to be in order to do things like turn off pain.
Anyway, Good Night Diary
Advertisement
- In Serial71 Chapters
Nameless: Ascent
Everybody has a Name. Names are a path to power, a gift from a god. When a child receives their Name, they learn the path their life will take, and they can see the strictly defined system that lets them rise beyond human limitations. When Maiz receives his Name, he has the chance to become something he has only read about in history books--a God Chosen. But his path will force him to serve a dark master, and question what he will do to gain power. Shadar is the Dungeon King, a man who spent years earning the right to lead an army of monsters in their struggle against humanity. He holds immense power, but he is constantly plagued by unrest among his subjects. Two men poised to create new legends with ancient powers. Two men who must learn who they are in a world of Names. (Contains an RPG-based magic system)
8 164 - In Serial9 Chapters
An Unknown World
In the far future humanity begun expanding its borders and the colonization of the universe began. Many youths have decided to take on the opportunity of becoming the vanguards of humankind and Ward was no different.
8 224 - In Serial85 Chapters
Drops
Kidnapped from his country home as a child and raised by powerful government authorities, a young man born with hydrocyrokinetic abilities poses a serious threat to valuable water resources on his homeland, causing everything to crash and burn. It’s not until a blossoming friendship is born after years of isolation that he must do everything he can to protect those who he has betrayed, and face his complicated past as dangerous circumstances rise in war torn Plod. ————————— This fiction is rated R. Nudity is present. Violence, profanity, trauma, suicide, mental illness, and disturbing elements are prevalent. Gore is described in graphic detail that may be disturbing. The story is very, very depressing. Do not read if you are sensitive by heavy subject matter, including themes of suicide. It is a tragedy, which means that it has dark and disturbing psychological content that is intended for a mature audience. Do not read the whole thing in one sitting, as it may be emotionally draining. Read in small sections. Do not read if you like happy, light novels. Read at your own risk. Haitian Creole and Jamaican Patois will be sprinkled in rarely from time to time. The opinions and thoughts of the characters are not mine. If you are sensitive to traumatic content, please do not read. Do not read if you are sensitive to mental illness, genocide, graphic violence, or the reality of war. I ask that while you critique this story, you do it in a respectful way. If anyone harrasses me/ tries to discourage me from writing, I will report you. All feedback, critique and suggestions are welcome; feel free to comment. I am trying to grow and improve my writing, so constructive criticism behind advanced negative reviews are appreciated. Due to the fact that I am a college student and working part time , some chapters may come a little later than usual. If anyone writes reviews that don’t have anything to help me improve the story and attack me, the author, for choosing to write about these dark themes, kindly please leave, because they should not even be reading, let alone be anywhere near anyone's fictions. I am also interested in any ideas people may have for the drafting process. In other words, if you want to tear apart my story, do it properly, please. Negative reviews that respectfully point out any plot holes, inconsistencies with my characters, or writing style are well appreciated. Anyone attacking me personally will be reported and blocked, especially as the fiction gets longer. I do not need negativity or harassment. For those who take the time out of their day to read and offer helpful feedback, I truly appreciate you all, and you are the best. You have been warned. Read at your own risk. Thank you.
8 141 - In Serial12 Chapters
Who Fixes Books Anyway?
On the pretense of a raise, the relatively new employee Pernie is called in to talk with her superiors. NOTE: This is a short story written for a class I took recently. As a result of deadlines, it does not possess the quality (or length) that I would like and is rather thrunkated. Perhaps sometime far in the furture I'll fix it up. For now, I have much more important things to work on, such as my other fiction.
8 217 - In Serial13 Chapters
American deku ig idk
Deku in america very lazy why am i here
8 123 - In Serial61 Chapters
BTS Oneshot Book 2
This is my 2nd Oneshot book that will include reactions, fluff, and smut! *Also do ambw*I do accept requests so don't be shy to ask :)If you want to read my first book or any others just click my name darling :)🔨WORKING ON THIS!
8 132

