《The Legendary Class》Hiatus
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I started this fiction as practice . . . to see if I might eventually be able to write something more intricately plotted that I could actually publish. To that end, I picked a Lit rpg because it seemed easy to get into. A logical choice for a starter fiction I thought. I never wanted or intended to write 200 chapters as the MC slowly got strong enough to do something about the coming Age of Terror over five years. I was very happy with the plot twists I came up with, but the majority seemed to dislike them. I envisioned progress on two tracks, as Arn et al try to get ready for the Age of Terror and deal with the Endbringers, while Jennifer/Keana deals with things in the real world. To me, the idea of a pocket world that was just as real as our own, in its own way, made total sense. My inspiration was the pocket universe concept from Men in Black. But people didn't seem able to get on board with my concept that every "NPC" was an AI that could pass the Turing test -- a sentient. To me, that made Arn's world "real," but others didn't agree. So I clearly miscalculated things.
With folks mostly not liking the direction, I'm questioning whether I want to continue or put the time towards my next project. I've learned a lot along the day, and think I'm ready (hopefully) to try something more intricate.
I currently plan to continue on, in between other projects, at a much slower pace. Thanks for understanding!
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Classless Ascension
[ Climb the Dimensional Tower and have any wish fulfilled by the gods themselves! ]
8 236Forced In Marriage✓
•°•°Cover credit : @Sidnaaz23Sidharth Shukla who is most eligible bachelor is forced to marry a girl named Shehnaaz whom he don't even know who is she. He wanted his independence, he wanted to remain as a bachelor but his grandmother gave deaf ears to his pleadings•°•°•°•°•°Shehnaaz GillA student who want to complete her graduation is forced in this marriage by her brother who blackmailed her to marry SidharthSidharth is short tempered person wheras she is calm in natureSidharth wants everything perfect wheras Shehnaaz is ok with anythingwas forced in a marriageSidharth doesn't talk much even with his family who like in other city wheras Shehnaaz talks too much with people whom she adore and consider them as her friendTwo opposites forced in marriageDo you think that will accept eachother or not?Will love bloom between them?Published on : 17 January 2021Completed on : 3 April 2022
8 97The day I became leader of the Soviet Union
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8 106Someone Like Adam
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8 107HEALING | BANG CHAN ✓
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8 147(1) BEAUTIFUL // Edmund Pevensie
Edmund Pevensie didn't like girls. It wasn't that he thought they were disgusting, or had germs like the other boys thought, he just didn't think they were anymore special than anyone else. But then again, he didn't like people in general. And he only knew the girls from Finchley. Princess Catherine III didn't have time to like boys. It wasn't that she didn't want to get married like tradition said she had to or that the boys that she had lined up to chose from. But then again, she had her brother, Caspian, and that was enough. And she hadn't met the King of Narnia.[#1 Edmund Pevensie] [#2 Narnia]
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