《Terror Infinity - Side B》How I would change the original up.
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How I would improve the original Terror Infinity if it were say rewritten into a Light Novel. As a Light Novel Zheng would have to get more enhancements to stand out more and missions would have to be longer as well. Tell me your opinions.
Mission 1 - In volume one add 1 D rank reward for surviving. Lan picks up a gun. After the doors are broken Lan by dumb luck killed the Creeper with a single bullet. They have to rejoin the main characters and fend off more monsters. Doesn't matter how it ends, but Zheng doesn't need much more points and rewards. In God's Dimension Zheng get the same enhancements and made the same stupid mistakes with a lack of guns, but with a D rank reward he get Qi knife, a High end military knife that can absorb Qi to can increase sharpness, maybe a small life steal power attached as well. Lan and Jie don't matter.
Mission 2 - The same, but a increase of rank rewards. Not giving the Queen a C rank reward for Zheng was a mistake and doesn't fit the risk and reward system of Terror Infinity. With those rewards Zheng should get a Vampire Hunter gun that uses Blood Energy, and make a joke about a Vampire hunter gun that can only be used by Vampires.
Mission 3 - Keep the same, expect Zheng will get a Qi defense skill along with Red Flame. He had a C rank reward he never used, and in volume 7 it was just used for the movment technique he could have gotten earlier.
Mission 4 - No need to change.
Mission 5 - Can't change as it effects the Mission 6.
Mission 6 - Give them three hours and have them explore more. The medics's axe should be stronger. It a C tier weapon like a Infinite ammo EMP Rilfe, yet it wasn't too great even if its close range. The explosion is fine, but it needs maybe a heat blade option.
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Mission 6.5 - Add a Team Battle, but a team they can work together with and a leader Zheng finds a rivalry in. A friendly cooperation to show not all team are enemies.
Mission 7 - Same. Destroy the Qi knife here. Zheng and Clone Zheng can cross blades with each's Qi Knife, but Zheng's get his cut in half.
Advance plot - Have Zheng master the Golden Red Flame more and make it into his standard.
Mission 8 - Same, but Xuan said that wiping out the dinosaurs should have been a Bonus Mission. Wipe out the two islands, each rewards members a D rank reward. Maybe get in contact with the character to learn about the mad scientist.
Bonus Mission - Same, but maybe some insight on how to improve Zheng's mutation.
Mission 9 - Make Team Africa stronger. Xuan guess the factions of Team Africa just because they were going to probe doesn't make sense. His plan to locate which ship they were on was good, but a weaker team probing a stronger team doesn't lead to a conclusion like there are multiple faction in Team Africa. Have Xuan find a clue to this conclusion or scrap the scene that is just there to make him look smart. Also, have sword hater Zheng get a sword skill, instead of being stupid and not enhancing. Lastly, have some scenes where the main character of the world actually matter.
Bonus Mission - Make the arc bigger. It was made a big deal, but it fell short. Getting the G Virus and Nemesis should have greater risk, but if Zheng didn't trip into a Bonus Mission it would have ended as just stealing a item and no mission or risk. A powerful zombie, the half girl half creeper given Zheng's blood should have mutated into super monster who could beat Zheng in Destruction. She also has a psychic bond with Zheng. Have her and Zheng fight a sorrowful battle where he regrets killing the little girl despite it being her salvation. There was actually foreshadowing when they were injecting his blood with a scientist smiling evilly. Then make a ending scene of the corpse getting picked up and higher ups of the organization saying they will clone her, but discover that her heart still beats, and custody of the girl is given to the villain of the third movie. The guy wearing shades who smiles as he thanks Zheng (talking to himself) for killing a high level boss of the organization for him and providing a interesting new test subject.
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Mission 10 - Richard should just be much more powerful, to the level Zheng says his max power is superior in physical strength to Destruction. He had four Missions and multiple bonus Missions to improve with and the experience of facing Zheng in Explosion and Destruction, yet his power was basically the same except getting a new axe. Gungnir's standard power should just be higher. It's just odd if with a A tier mutation of the ice power and Second Stage, he can't turn his own arms into ice or do more. Also give him a energy. Almost everyone except Zheng only have one energy.
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