《Immortal Soul》Info/Questions/Author
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Hello and welcome to my first small Info "chapter".
I wanted to inform you all that the first 6 chapters have been reworked. Some large errors like Lena not burying her friends and other small things have been rectified and improved. The chapters have not changed that much, a sentence here, a few words there together with a few precisions. It doesn´t change the story or give any super important extra, but it might be worthwhile for a few of you.
I think that it has at least improved the general reading flow of the chapters.
Some of you have pointed out that the chapters with Eshen don´t really allow people to grasp the relationship between Eshen and Lena, due to many time skips and unclear time frames. I Don´t plan to add another chapter to fix that or to lengthen this part. I just don´t want to write ten chapters with Lena and Eshen before the real story even starts. I am aware of the effect of these chapters can have tho.
BUT. Big but there.
These early years of training with Eshen will continue during the story. I want these training years with Eshen to be some sort of side story that pops up when I want it to. That way you will continuously lern more about their lives and what happened during this time. That´s the plan. If you have any ideas on this matter please let me know.
As for the early chapters, I personally think that there are better now, but if you still see things that seem odd please point them out to me.
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I am sorry that my chapter release is so inconsistent. I write whenever I have time and feel like it. So this story will sadly, not advance as fast as others. There are many great stories on RR so feel free to explore them and just come around here every once in a while.
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I don´t know if I´m allowed to name other stories or authors here, but trust me when I say that there are many hidden jewels on RR, mine included of course. (Don´t you dare say something against it!)
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Next on the list are things that I don´t know how to approach them.
- First is a Patreon or Paypal, that thing. I do this story for two reasons. Because I like to write my own story and invent my own story. I´ve always wanted to write a book and Royalroad has offered me a great way to test my writing skills and at least try it. The second reason is that I wanted to improve my English skills in general. (Yeah me no English)
My question is, is it worth creating a Patreon or Paypal account for this story? I´m currently using the free Grammarly, so with your support, I could get a better version and improve the story even more. Your thoughts?
- Second is for other Authors on RoyalRoad. Is the Author premium from RR worth it? Do I need it?
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The last thing I want to say is thanks. Big thanks.
Even if Lena is just a small character in a small story many people (many for me), seem to like her. Your comments are always great, and your support is astonishing. Without all the people pointing out mistakes, giving advice, and supporting me I wouldn´t enjoy writing it as much as I do now.
Thanks to all of you.
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