《Galataea Crystallim: Chronicles of the Lonely World》Notes on the Restart, and where to find it.

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Hello gentle perverts. It has been asked frequently, "Have you died? Will there ever be more sexy goings on?"

The answer is no, I have not died. I was sick for a while, I became several backlogged with my stories, and some were sort of left to the wayside.

This particular story needed to receive better care and treatment, in my eyes, than I was giving it. So, I decided to re-release it with a massive upgrade in clarity, overall quality, and focus.

To that end, I started a wordpress site [Appearance still pending as I search for a theme]

I honestly intended to use it last year, but it's languished till now. However, for the handful of you who still hope and trust, here's the link.

Episode 1 List

I consider it to be edited to basically publishable quality. A few tweaks here and there are all that is further required before the episodes will be put on Amazon.

However, I intend to put them together into multi-episode books instead of individual sales. That way, people get more for their money, especially since some of you have waited for many months to see this start to happen.

I have a dedicated schedule for this story at the moment. I update every Tuesday and Friday. (The actual time varies, but I intend to keep to those days.)

So far, I have put up four new episode parts. They comprise a complete overhaul of chapter one's content, plus a new scene for the part 1.4. Part 1.5 will be up tomorrow. Chapter parts can be 1500-3000+ words, though most are over 2000. There are new scenes, an entire new part, and much more expansive imagery already.

What I need to know, from the rest of you fine folks.

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1. Do you want me to continue the current story arc where it left off, until the arc is finished. (The Mesa III) stuff, or mostly focus on the beautiful overhaul so that can mosey along? (This would be done in chapter parts as well, since I also have several ongoing stories to update.)

2. I also plan to start posting the revamped posts onto this site, but currently I am leaning toward starting a new thread for it much like I did with Nocturne -> Nocturne Version 2.

Honestly, I'd probably wait till [Episode 1] is done first (Another 4-6 parts left) Either way.

I'll probably put up a site for Nocturne, much like this so that the final version can start to be seen online (Also, it would help me when it comes time to actually clean it up and put it out on Amazon.)

If the site update 2.5 had stayed around, I would have put all of the current chapters into a 'rough draft volume' and had a Light Novel version volume for the newer stuff.

I've shopped the new versions around to people (Not many) and people seem to like it uniformly. I flesh out a lot of stuff. For instance, the original Chapter 1 had around 5900 words, and the original prologue was like 290 words.

The current revamp has cleaned that up and now it is nearly doubled in size though part of that is the new scene after Scott and Seventy-Two were forced to part.

A lot will change:

A. Mostly more character development as people instead of just as lovers [Though, the lovers parts will remain and be expanded as well]

B. The way the girl's stats develop will be different.

C. Some of the world-setting concepts will change.

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Some of those changes are already shown in the story.

Anyway, let me know if anyone is still interested. :)

Also, for those who want more [I Hate You Master...] Depending on the fan response that I get for this Crystallim overhaul, I think I'll put up a wordpress site for that story too, and reboot that in the same way. Greater clarity, more immersion, more STORY.

Let me know! :)

Currently, I'm considering wordpress sites for all of my stories, so we'll see if that's something anyone cares about.

What I need most of all is input. :) Tell me what you think of the revamped version (It's basically one step from publishable) and leave comments either here or on the site.

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