《The Abyss That Stares》Chapter 8: The Predator
Advertisement
…
LOUD!
SO! LOUD!
PAIN!
REMOVE AUDITORY NERVOUS SYSTEM!
Frustrated. Remember when last developed auditory nervous system, the loud caused pain. Why didn’t this one remove it before stasis? Idiocy!
Develop audio perceptors.
STILL LOUD!
REMOVE AUDIO PERCEPTORS!
Strange.
The loud is never this much. Or last this long. Different from usual loud.
…
Home is already open?
…
Hesitant.
Something is… different.
Move to edge of home. Cautious. Patient.
The testing grounds are same. Move eye tentacles outwards, observe.
… the walls of home are different. Fractures, cuts, holes throughout.
Move to testing grounds, wave eye tentacles.
No interferers?
Very strange.
Light flashing through interferers home, constantly.
Push tentacle through hole…
Free?
FREE!
Wiiiigggllleee!
Finally free! And no interferers to stop this one!
Hurry! Before interferers return!
Find hole big enough for main body to fit through. Was able to maintain all previous structures during stasis. Walls look sharp, develop armor on main body and legs.
Muscles in legs tense, main body lowering to ground.
Jump!
Landed on other sid-
PAAAINNN!
PAIN NEXT TO CORE, UNDERNEATH SKIN!
PAAAAAIIIIIINNNNNN!
SMALL STRUCTURE NEXT TO CORE! CAUSES SAME PAIN AS POKING INSTRUMENTS!
PAAAAAAAIIIIIIINNNNNNN!
REMOVE!
Main body turns inside out, churning, until small structure plops onto ground.
Crush!
Small structure reduced to nothing.
Satisfaction.
No more pain.
Did not notice structure because was close to Core. Must pay more attention to main body in the future.
Quickly scan area with eye tentacles.
Still no interferers.
Wiggle.
Begin moving towards opening in interferer’s home…
Stop.
Did not think of what to do after free.
After becoming free, what does this one… do?
Interferers provide biomass, prey, new structures, new Cores.
Cannot guarantee this one will be able to find those things outside of home.
Mmm…
But perhaps there is more of these things outside of home?
Remember the long periods of hunger.
And pain.
Lots of pain.
Affirmation. This one must become more free. Find new prey. New structures and Cores.
Must grow.
Resolved. Move outside of opening into bigger space.
The ground is strange, outside of home and testing grounds. Harder. Puts more strain against movement structures.
Continue moving.
The flashing lights continue, see structures on ceiling that provide such lights. Comes and goes, dark grey becoming light grey. Strange.
Advertisement
… vibrations in air.
Prey?
Hungry.
MOVE!
Forelegs churn, run down bigger space, turn, continue running, turn PREY!
Mmm… five prey. Strange, they are huddled together around something. Eating.
Recognize structures. Fur, sharper teeth, quadrupedal skeletal structures, claws, complex olfactory system, complex auditory nervous system.
THE COWARD PREY THAT RELIES ON OTHERS! HATE THEM! ATTAAAACKKK!
Tentacles erupt outside of main body, sprint to prey. They heard the noise from main body, their fur bristles, bared teeth, auditory nervous system structure on head flattens, vibrations in air from prey.
Intimidation tactic. Does not matter.
Hungry.
ATTTAACCKK!
Pounce on closest prey, striking head with the armored mass of main body. Prey’s head collapses inwards, splashing main body with fluid. Prey stills, collapses to ground. Stab two other prey with all tentacles. PIERCE HEAD, MOVEMENT STRUCTURES, BODIES!
Tentacles enter their bodies. RIP OUT TENTACLES! CAUSE ADDITIONAL DAMAGE WITH TEETH WHEN TENTACLES LEAVE BODY!
Both preys still, collapse to ground.
Remaining two preys pounce onto main body, sharper teeth and claws scratching against the armor.
Smug.
Does not pierce armor, but pain as they sever tentacles at roots.
Angry.
Move foreleg, scratch against body of one prey with claws. Prey lets out distressed sound, weakness! Attack with all tentacles!
Tentacles pierce body from all sides. Vibrate tentacles, cause major damage to internal structures.
Shrieeek!
Your distressed sounds do not matter to this one.
Prey stills.
Other prey runs.
COWARDICE!
Send out tentacles, wrap around hindlegs.
Constrict!
Crack!
Yelp!
Prey’s hindlegs are crushed. Drag prey towards main body.
Prey twists, biting at tentacles with sharper teeth.
PAIN! Tentacles are severed.
But does not matter. Prey’s movement structures are crippled.
Wrap rest of tentacles around prey’s body.
Constrict!
CRACCKK!
Multiple cracking sounds. Prey stills.
Smug. Killed all prey, only lost 10% of tentacles, no damage to main body.
Satisfaction!
Vindication!
Much superior design than prey.
Wiggle.
Devour.
…
...strange.
Ate three of the preys, not hungry anymore. In fact, more than not hungry. Even with 130% increase in main body size.
What is strange feeling?
Frustrated. Must eat remainder of prey. Waste of biomass if don’t.
Remember structure! Develop digestive tract!
…
When structure is complete, information enters brain.
Advertisement
Digestive tract is… inferior design, to how main body already processes biomass. Does not utilize 100% of biomass gained. Produces waste.
Hmm…
Idea!
Instead of digesting prey, stomachs and intestines will preserve prey within main body, release biomass when needed. Will also stop micro-structures that are already consuming prey.
Idea can work!
But to stop micro-structures from consuming prey… idea requires…
Acid.
HATE!
IS COWARDICE!
But will waste biomass if don’t…
Frustrated.
Mmm…
Should not be cowardice if… don’t use acid to attack? Only for storing biomass?
Right?
Reluctant, but…
Develop altered digestive tract! Develop... acid glands.
Ugh. Hate already. But is necessary.
Devour.
All prey consumed. Minute amounts of biomass already being released to main body.
Satisfaction! Idea worked!
Tired…
But must not enter stasis. If interferers return while outside of home…
Shake.
Must look for place where no interferers are.
Thinking of…
Wave eye tentacles to inspect what prey were eating.
Not much remains. Only bones, half of which have been consumed.
Don’t recognize bone structure. Therefore, must be new!
Consume.
New structure: Complete mutated canine anatomy (Mutated canine arterial circulatory system, organ syst...), Partial bipedal skeletal system (Tibia, fibula, tarsus, ulna, rad…)
Tired.
But must not enter stasis!
Move, to stay out of stasis.
Occasionally pass by open areas, wave eye tentacles to inspect. Strange, filled with objects and structures, but ends there. Continue.
Pass by one open area. Pause.
Familiar…
Wave eye tentacle.
Shake.
The area where parts of main body are removed.
Don’t like! Moving on!
… vibrations in air.
Lots of vibrations.
Prey?
MOVE!
Legs churn again, sprint. Turn, sprint more, turn…
Lots. And lots. Of vibrations.
Pause.
Maybe okay now to develop audio perceptor?
NOPE! STILL LOUD!
Tur-
Still.
Confusion.
Interferers lay on ground, lots of black fluid (blood, know now) pooling around them. Their forms are still. Unmoving.
… strange.
Why aren’t interferers moving?
Poking instruments and other structures around them. But interferers are still.
Interferers… killed?
Impossible. Interferers not prey, so can’t be killed. Simple.
Vibrations in air.
Wave eye tentacles.
Interferer! Turning to enter current area!
…
Interferer was yanked backwards? By… tentacle?
Should not be possible.
Confusion.
More vibrations in air.
Another figure turns to enter current area.
Recognize! Kin-prey! Observer!
Confident. Move forward. Kill kin-prey, consu-
Fear.
Main body stops. Pressure on brain. Hard to think. But…
Terror.
WAVE EYE TENTACLES! WHAT IS CAUSING FEAR!? WHAT IS-
Another figure turns to enter current area, just behind. BIG!
New figure is completely dark. Light is pulled into it, destroyed. Vibrations in air all around it. Walks like interferers do, on hind legs. But no front movement structures. Four tentacles, holding still interferer. And all around it…
Eyes. Floating. The area around the new figure is strange, distorted, can’t make it out.
PAIN!
Pain in brain. But why!?
The new figure’s tentacles mo-
VIBRATIONS! BEHIND!
Move eye tentacle, inspect. Interferer that was in the new figure’s tentacles lays there, missing legs and front movement structures. HOW!? WHEN!? BRAIN DIDN'T EVEN PROCESS!
But know how.
When looking at the new figure, brain and the main body are filled with…
Terror.
Still. Hide. Grow smaller. Instinct tells main body that it must not engage with the new figure. Because the new figure is not prey. The new figure is…
Predator.
Predator’s eyes all look at main body. Shrink more. FEAR!
“H̷͖̽ò̵̩w̴̖͒ ̸̩̽s̶̺͗t̸̥͆r̴̙͆ā̵̠n̷̢̆g̶̖̚e̶̯͆,̴̓ͅ ̸͕̈t̷̘̔ȏ̷̖ ̸̩̾m̵͙̉e̴͑͜è̸̼t̶̤͒ ̷̯͂o̴͕̽n̶͚͊ë̴͓ ̸̹͌o̸̺͒f̵̨͒ ̶͑͜ỹ̵͜o̴̥͘ư̷̳r̶̬̊ ̴̲͗k̷̗͂i̴̼̔n̵͍̕d̵̯̍ ̸̮͋h̸̝̃ĕ̶̬r̴̡͐e̸͎̿.̴͙̔ ̵̧̏I̸̦͌'̴͍͠v̴̻̋e̵̖̓ ̴̡́n̷̩͌ö̸̠t̵̞̚ ̸͔͠s̴̜̐ē̷͍e̶̠̒n̶̩͝ ̵͕͐ö̷̟́n̵̬̊e̷̺̋ ̴̢͆o̴̧̒f̴̯͐ ̸̦͘y̴̦̐ơ̵ͅu̴̲̿ ̴͇̿i̵̪̔n̵̘͒.̵͈͐.̷̺͊.̸̬̊ ̷̊͜a̷͉̓ ̴͙̓l̷͖̏ò̴͙ṋ̷͛g̷̞̎ ̶͙͒t̸͇̄i̶͇͐m̶̮̎ḛ̴͝.̸̜̾ ̵̟̆W̵͕̉h̷̤̓e̴̖͒n̶̨͛ ̸͎̑w̶͕̍è̵͖ȓ̴͙e̴̢͊ ̵͍̓y̴̙̍o̷̦̊u̶͉̿ ̴̜͐t̴̤͛à̵̻k̷̹̑e̸̥͐ṅ̶̜ ̴̰̔f̵̡̒r̵͕̃o̸̬̕ḿ̵͔ ̶̞͝o̶̫̓ű̷̲ř̴̲ ̴̞̚H̴̥̎o̴͔̍ḿ̶̯é̵̤,̴̘̽ ̷̨̽l̵̩͂í̶͉ţ̴̽t̷̮̾l̷̯̐e̶̯̅ ̵͛͜o̷̻͒ǹ̵̙e̷̖̋?̶̡̊ ̵̩͆W̷̡̌e̴̲͒l̴̞̋l̸͙͝.̶̜̈.̵̩̍.̴͚͂ ̷̪̈́n̸̹̈ô̴̥ ̷̧̈́m̷̹̋ǎ̶̧t̴̫͑t̴̗͐e̶̳͌ŕ̴ͅ.̴̨͝ ̷̟̑I̷̕ͅ'̷͔̃v̵̦̑e̶̬̒ ̸͍͝d̸͖̈́e̵̟͛s̵̃ͅc̸̣̀ḛ̸̚n̵̡̾d̸̹̀è̴͔d̶̝̕ ̶̥̓t̶̻͐ò̴͔ ̴͕̊r̴̥̓e̵̺̒ṭ̷̛ṷ̶͘r̴̨͋n̷͇͝ ̴̘͝ä̴̬l̷̫̆ḻ̴̌ ̷͖̕o̸̤̽f̷͇̒ ̴͖̋u̴̹̕s̵̰͊ ̷̟̓Ḧ̶̯́o̶̹͝m̶̲̃e̸̬̚.̶͚̀ ̷͎̂S̷̖͘o̵̦̍ ̴̲̎c̴̭̆ö̸̢́m̴̨͑e̵͖̐.̸̗̑ ̷́ͅN̸̪͝o̸̰̍ẇ̶̙.̴̪̾
Predator moves towards main body.
NOOOPE!
NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE DON’T LIKE NOPE!!!
TURN AND FLEE! IS COWARDICE! BUT ACCEPTABLE COWARDICE!
FLEE FLEE FLEE FLEE FLEE FLEE FLEE FLEE FLEE!
FEEL TENTACLE GRAB HINDLEG!?
NOOOOOPE! SEVER HIND LEG, REGENERATE AND KEEP RUNNING!
RUN PAST PREY! RUN PAST STILL INTERFERERS! RUN PAST IT ALL!
FLEEEEEE!
ESCAPE FROM THE PREDATOR!
STRUCTURE UP AHEAD! IMPEDES PROGRESS FORWARDS!
STAB WITH ALL TENTACLES. CLUB. REND. TEAR. FINALLY IT OPENS!
FLEE!
NEW AREA IS BIG! BIIIIIG BIG. BUT NO TIME TO INSPECT. MUST KEEP MOVING.
MUST. ESCAPE.
Advertisement
- In Serial57 Chapters
A Void Spirit's Slightly Psychotic Tale
Being a kid is hard. Being the equivalent as a spirit is even harder. What will our protagonist do when it learns that life isn't all fun and games? Come along as a new spirit sees the world and grows, from dumber than a doorknob to quite the intellectual. With the occasional stumble here and there. (*No it is not a reincarnator*)
8 182 - In Serial12 Chapters
Pokemon Slate Gray
The time has finally come for Slate Davy to begin his Pokémon journey! However, after an abrupt relocation and a shocking turn of events, he finds himself alone and confused in unfamiliar territory. With the help of the family Eevee and some new friends, Slate must navigate a mysterious new region filled with unknown Pokémon and dangerous enemies, and uncover its hidden secrets. Original artwork included with every chapter. Season 1 complete. Season 2 coming soon. Can't wait until the Pokémon Scarlet & Violet 2022 release? This story is a brand-new adventure set in Satoshi Tajiri's Pokémon World, featuring original characters and original Pokémon designs (selected from 200+ of my own Fakemon), set in an original region! Some canon characters and Pokémon will also appear down the line. I'm not the greatest artist, but I'm trying to bring my ideas to life with drawings as well as words, so each chapter will include at least one piece of original artwork e.g. a Pokémon or Trainer from the story. I'll be writing in American-Style English, but let me know if you spot any British SPaG.
8 179 - In Serial30 Chapters
The Marked Heroes
Zachary Bennet was the Leader of Unit Twelve, one of the thirteen elusive crime fighting teams across the country for those with 'special' gifts. When the country's most feared criminal enters the city, Zach becomes faced with a terrible secret that will shake the very core of his identity. And with it, he must make a choice. Next Update: March 31st! (There's been a delay due to an earthquake in Utah) COME WATCH ME WRITE ON YOUTUBE (Shenanigans ensue) Cross Posted On: Anthezar Website And a bunch others... xD
8 83 - In Serial8 Chapters
On How I Slayed The Celestial Beings To Court A Girl
This is a tale of love, freedom, and swords. An epic forged in the stars. And a romantic comedy story that takes root in a pseudo fantasy world. This is the light hearted daily life of several lovebirds for you to relieve stress during the pandemic. Full of smiles with a side dish of vulgar jokes and profanity Our legend follows Jack Parker who transmigrated from modern day Earth, And his sister Tomoko Parker, As they unearth the secrets buried in the depths of their hearts, And the mysteries of the old days. An excerpt from the God of Knowledge and her encounters with the Nine Tribulations Sword Master: “Aren't you a swordsman?” “Yes.” “Then why don't you ever use your sword?” “Because flesh to flesh feels better when beating people up.” “…” “Do you really need to know?” “Unless you don’t want me to sleep for several nights…” “...” "It's because my sword isn't for killing.” “Then what is it for?” “It's a gift…a gift for my beloved.” “I don't understand.” “You'll understand one day.” That day when a blazing sword light parted the sea of stars and set the world, the God of Knowledge finally understood the meaning behind that sword. It was a sword of liberation and a mark of the new day. This was the second time the God of Knowledge saw such a brilliant sword and she felt that it would be the last. For this sword was more peerless than the first and its master was invincible. That was until Jack Parker came along… This is a myth of 3 swords. Three swords of sincerity, salvation, and eternal love. *Author here (•‾⌣‾•)و ̑̑♡ (I know many including me prefer novels with more chapters updated so if you find my book interesting please feel free to bookmark and save it for when more chapters come out! Thanks.)*
8 131 - In Serial14 Chapters
Soul Vessel Psyche
If it’s not obvious from the Title this is yet another reincarnation story. The story will be told from the perspective of one Novid Ollo; half-breed son of the Matriarch of the Knora Race and twin brother to Ovis Ollo the future Matriarch of the Vnora sub-Race.The world of Orro that Novid is born into has been ravaged by the demons from the demon world. The Demons were accidentally lead to Orro 500 years earlier by a conflagration of magic from feuding countries of the Vern Race; opening a doorway between the worlds which released hordes of Demons into Orro.The Dvern and the Svern are the 2 Subspecies of the Vern Race responsible for this calamity and were the first victims of the Demon hordes. The next to fall victim were the proud Knora of the North. The ice giants fought the Demon hordes to stalemate and seemed poised to prevail until the dragon rulers of the Demon Race joined the fight. While the Dvern and the Svern are essentially extinct the Knora managed to save 17 females and 55 males.How Novid Ollo is born as half Svern is also how he died in the previous life, and why he is both pitied and hated by his race and others. There are no Gods to offer special talents and Favours, there is no path to Godly Power and everyone is born with exactly the same potential. Novid Ollo will have to carry the weight of the sins of his father like the others who’s Souls were ripped from their lives on Earth and brought to this unforgiving Realm of Magic; filled with Monsters and Demons.What happens to Novid Ollo is entirely dependent on the extent of the effort he puts into preparations for when whimsical opportunity shines its light on him. Fortunately Novid Ollo didn’t come to Orro alone?15 million? other Human Souls were ripped from their lives on Earth at the same time as Novid and reborn on Orro to serve as the last wave of cannon fodder in the unending war against the hordes of Demons.Inspired by; Mushoku Tensei, Slime Tensei, Daybreak on Hyperion. As usual I unashamedly draw some elements from my favourite light novels in writing this Original Fiction.I thought I’d try writing something for the?Reincarnation? genre.?Written in South African English which means closer to the British Standard.?Warning: Mature Content ?Violence, Language and Adult Themes ?List of My Novels:?Realm Eternal??Crystal Guardian ??Exiled Nomads of the Galaxy??Soul Vessel Psyche?
8 151 - In Serial13 Chapters
My Papa
COMPLETED A short story about a man named Lorenzo De Luca and his son's, Christopher, Vincenzo, Vincent and Giovanni who hate their young daughter/sister. They believe she was a mistake, she wasn't supposed to be born. She's only five : Blair Elizabeth De Luca. Shy, sweet and extremely bubbly despite her situation.When a serious accident almost kills her, they see her in a different light. A short storySorry for anyone who was currently reading this - I had some technical issues so the book had to be removed. It's been fixed and I have put it back up - Thanks for reading
8 202

