《Black Titan》Discussion and Flaws
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As the Title says this will be a discussion about the Series itself as well as its flaws. Please do comment below what you find so that I can hopefully fix it.
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The Descent of a Star | Xing Xue Jiang Shi
Danmei // Xianxia The Descent of a Star || Xing Xue Jiang Shi Lai XingXue was the unfavored second prince of Laixu. He was considered a stain on the name of the prestigious royal family. Shoved into the darkness of the palace, he became a useless bastard synonymous with bad luck. But everything changed when he met his Master. Shen QuanLi had been a half step to immortality, lofty and frigid, but he was the only person in the entire world who would spare the second prince a shred of kindness. Lai XingXue was ready to give Shen QuanLi everything he could. He won martial competitions to win his Master the glory he deserved, he cleared his name and became a prince his Master could be proud of. As he cultivated closer to immortality, Lai XingXue believed: maybe one day, once he was powerful enough, competent enough, he could confess his unfilial thoughts to his Master. But then Shen QuanLi died. Lai XingXue had once decided to give his everything to his Master, the one person who had brought him out of the darkness. Thus, even if it meant cutting off his own future, Lai XingXue will defy the fates to bring Shen QuanLi back! Disclaimer: - This novel is a slow-burn original fiction, you're in for the long-haul if you're expecting proper romance... - This novel was written intended as a BL / Boy's Love / Danmei. (LXX is the top, don't get on the wrong boatヾ(_ _。）) - I actively take valid critique and criticism and to an extreme will even rewrite scenes if the draft posted was not up to standard! I would like to present a story that I'm proud of. * More tags will be added as the relevant chapters and plot points are included in the story * Gratefully thanking all my friends for proofreading, editing, and revision suggestions~ HIATUS
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Reign of the Wallenstein
Born as a child soldier in a war-torn country, Joey was destined for bloodshed. He spent half of his life on the battlefield, trying his hardest to stay alive. Unfortunately, fate has another plan for him. Joey was involved in some unfortunate accident and died without glory to his name. And yet the death he was expecting didn't come for him. Reincarnated as a boy with the same name as him, Joey Wallenstein must make sense of his new reality while trying to evade his airhead mother's attempt in suffocating him to death. What happens when MHA meets Danmachi? Let's find out, shall we? Though I'm warning you, some characters might have their age altered by the whim of the author. So it might throw you out of the loop. Expect the unexpected!
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The Lost Crest
It started in the research building when a black hole appeared and devoured everyone in it. Finn, a wealthy boy, was one such person. He finds himself in the middle of a desert, naked with only his friend by his side. He soon has to realize that he is in a completely different world when people force him into slavery. His missing sister only adds to his troubles, and his cowardly best friend, packed with a group of delusional slaves don't help him either. But it won't take long for him to realize that nothing is as it seems, loyalties are put into question and add in a few conspiracies and you've got your back against the wall doubting those you trust most. Will he escape the hopeless grasp of darkness, or will he succumb to the brutality of this harsh reality? Can he find his sister? Follow his tale, as he digs deeper into the unknown of the Continent of Kies. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------Any and all criticism is welcome. Will release 5 chapters a week, Monday-Friday. My Patreon has the most up to date chapters free, but are unedited. You can also follow my story on my website at thyfilthynoob.wordpress.com Any and all criticism is welcome, thanks for reading my story. The cover is mine an original creation all copywrites reserved.
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Saints and Suffering: A Naruto Fanfiction
Synopsis: Naruto and Sasuke were unable to defeat Kaguya the first time around, and suffer immensely for their failure. They travel back in time to right their wrongs, but struggle with the repercussions of their failure and the unintended consequences of their actions. Author's Note: This is fanfiction, I am a first time author, and I make no claims nor guarantees to quality. I have another story floating around in my head, but I am writing this first in order to practice my skills and gain feedback. Please feel free to give constructive criticism, I will try to read and respond. No guarantees to upload schedule or speed will be made. I work a full time job, and I am not particularly fast at writing, though maybe speed will increase as I become more practiced with my storytelling. This work will essentially be my playground moving forward; I'm going to write about scenarios that tickle my fancy, and the overall story may suffer from it. I will endeavor to keep continuity though. I have an outline that I am working on, and there is an overall arc to the story already. Furthermore, as of the beginning of this novel, my intention with this novel is to explore negative emotions and use my writing as a form of meditation/therapy. When I am sad, I will write sad things, and when I'm happy, the story will be happy. Lastly, there will be religious undertones every once in a while. Hopefully nothing too heavy handed though.
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The Vampire & The Mistress(Yoonmin) *completed*
Yoongi is a 700 year old vampire that does want he wants without caring about anyone. His father believes that he needs a bride, which Yoongi disagrees with but a certain person changes his mind.Side ships*Namjin**Taekook**HoRu*Contains*crossdressing- mainly dresses**boyxboy**male pregnancy**language**violence*
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Cars: Next Generation- The Story of Alex
Alex was always a little...sour...with her race car dad, the racer that everyone has known and loved since what felt like forever--at least, according to Alex-- Lightning McQueen. For the past few years, she's never wanted anything more than for her charismatic (and over-enthusiastic) father to stop nagging about wanting her to join the racing leagues, but in a twist of fate, Alex decides to join secretly, going under the name "Storm Swift", racer number #22. The secret is kept between Sally, Alex, and the known next-gen. racer, Jackson Storm, who makes a deal with Alex to keep the secret, as long as she agrees to keep a relationship with him, if only as a way for Jackson to gain more publicity than he already has, as a new generation racer. What will happen? What if the secret gets out? Find out what happens in the story of the next generation, filled with your favorite characters, such as Lightning, Sally, Jackson, Cruz, and the new girl on the track! ---- Note- Though the events in this story deal around the plot of Cars 3, please remember that this is only a fanfiction that I created for your enjoyment! Happy Reading! -I.K.
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