《Lone: The Wanderer [Dropped Version (includes original draft of the rewrite's first volume)]》[Rewritten] Book 1 Milindo & The Holy City: Chapter 56: Massage Success and A Heroic Encounter
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"I actually got a skill..." Lone muttered in disbelief as he looked at the system notification hovering in the corner of his vision. "I've had Massage Mastery for ages, so what's the difference?"
The host has developed the passive skill: Basic Massage Technique
Lone chuckled softly as he continued to rub Sophie's feet. She was tempted to kick him in the face for randomly laughing, but his fingers had suddenly started to feel a bit more skilled, so she let it slide... this time.
Lone gently caressed her tiny soles and toes as he checked the skill's information.
Passive Skill: Basic Massage Technique Increases the host's ability to relieve muscle tension via a hand massage by 5%. Cost: N/A Mastery: Beginner Level 1
'Huh. So it doesn't exactly feel better, but it's more effective? Well, I guess those two are kinda synonymous... right? I suppose this is just more aimed at tension relief rather than general pleasure like the mastery is,' Lone wondered.
He continued to service Sophie's feet as he pulled up Crude Fireball's skill information.
Active Fire Magic Skill: Crude Fireball
An incredibly rudimentary application of the common [Fireball] Fire Magic skill.
Due to its crudeness, 50 [-50] lines of Ancient Magic Speech must be chanted either verbally or mentally to invoke this skill. These lines will automatically be spoken or thought by the host when the host intends to use this skill.
The MP cost to invoke this skill is moderately [down from substantially] increased due to its inherent flaws.
Cost: 2,500 MP [-2,500 MP] Mastery: Advanced Level 1
'Bog-standard, as I assumed. I hope it'll get a nice buff like Crude Lightning Bolt did at expert rank. Thicker and faster bolts, right? What would the equivalent for a fireball be? Hotter and faster? Maybe smaller but still just as powerful?' Lone's mind was racing as he worked his way up from Sophie's foot and started massaging her calves.
Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Basic Massage Technique] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 2. Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Basic Massage Technique] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 3. Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Basic Massage Technique] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 4.
As he soothed Sophie's body and helped her loosen her joints, his skill continued to level-up. By the time that he had reached her thighs, he finally looked at his newly-updated status.
Status Name: Lone Immortus Sex: Male Age: 24 Level: 74 Species: Foxkin Rank: G Race: Golden Foxkin HP: 9,100/9,100 [+310] SP: 7,424/15,950 [+680] MP: 1,230/16,010 [3,900] Basic Stats Strength: 867 [+18] Vigour: 901 [+31] Dexterity: 595 [+102] Agility: 590 [+173] Vitality: 1,595 [+68] Luck: 72 [+4] Secret Stats Charm: 77 Charisma: 46 Magic Power: 1,601 [390]
Consciously trying to not annoy Sophie, Lone spoke with his inside voice. 'Fuck yes! Almost four-hundred Magic Power from only four overgrown spiders? Don't mind if I fuckin' do. Wow. They're pretty dextrous and agile too... The other stats are a wet disappointment, but we came here for more MP, so I hardly have the right to bitch.'
"Mmmm..." a sensual moan leaked out of Sophie's lips.
Breaking free from his thoughts, Lone looked up at her only to see a flushed face. Sophie's mouth was parted as she panted lightly and her body was trembling.
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Putting on a cute frown, she slowly peeled her clothes off and then grew into her twenty-year-old body. "If that's what a massage feels like, then you should give us one more often," she said as she wrapped her arms around Lone's neck.
Pulling herself closer to him, she kissed him passionately. A trail of saliva separated them a few moments later before the girl said, "Take off your clothes."
Lone, while very clearly stimulated from her actions, decided to raise an eyebrow. "Here? In the living room?"
Sophie slapped him very softly. "Here, or nowhere."
Lone laughed then held the girl by her thighs and spun her around to be sitting on his lap while he occupied the sofa. "You're getting kinkier by the day."
Grinning coyly, Sophie replied, "You are to blame for constantly teasing us."
"Maybe I am," Lone replied as he began unbuttoning his shirt. "Well, gonna help me, or are you just gonna watch me strip as you sit on me?"
Sophie leaned in and licked his exposed neck. "We shall watch."
The next morning, Lone awoke to a mildly painful sensation. he opened his eyes to see the tiny Soph snoozing on his chest as she strangulated two of his tails. "Why is it so easy to tell which personality is in control without even looking at your face or hearing you talk?"
He very carefully slipped out of her grasp and placed a blanket over her. Looking outside through the fort's windows, Lone could see that it was still a little bit dark. "Hmm. About four-AM? Maybe five," he muttered as he scratched his fluffy ears and started making breakfast after tossing some boxers and a tank top on.
About ten minutes later, still nude and now clutching a blanket, a very dreary Soph stumbled into the kitchen. "Food?"
"Haha, yes. Food. You're always so adorable in the morning, aren't you?" Lone commented as he served a freshly cooked omelette and two slices of buttered toast to the girl.
Picking up the fork and knife off her plate, she dug into her food very ungraciously. "You know I'm not a morning person..."
Lone nodded as he served his own breakfast, a simple bowl of cereal and hot milk. He sat next to Soph and grinned before saying, "Not a morning person, afternoon person, or, would you believe it, an evening person."
Soph frowned even despite the big bushy tail that had coiled itself around her waist and was now resting on her lap. "Sleeping is fun. And... And I feel safe sleeping around you..."
Lone felt his heart melt a little bit. "That's awfully sweet of you. I feel the same. You know, despite how much I bitch about how often you sleep, you do wake up when you have to, so that's a good thing."
"I... I don't wanna be a burden to you," Soph claimed as she bit into her toast.
Lone nodded. "And you're not. You never have been nor never will you. Any burden you put on me is immediately countered by how helpful you are for my mental stability. That's a weird compliment..." Lone stroked his chin in thought for a second. "Anyway, you're great, so no need to push yourself outside of your comfort zone if you don't wanna. I don't mind you sleeping for longer if you want. In fact, I can go hunt the spiders myself if you want? I can just unsummon you then resummon you if I'm gonna die or something."
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He shovelled some of his cereal into his mouth and savoured the sweetness for a second before he added, "We already know I can do that from range thanks to our testing, so if the spiders bother you like they do Sophie, and if you wanna laze about a bit, feel free."
Soph smiled faintly but shook her head. "I... I wanna be helpful. I-I'm not scared of spiders like Sophie is, but she's still brave. She, um, she wants to help you today, if that's fine?"
Lone nodded. "That's perfectly fine. Well, feel free to rest until about noon. I'm gonna start training my shitty Crude Boulder, Crude Waterball, and Crude Wind Blade today. I'll use each skill once then rest until my MP's all back, which should be around lunchtime."
Soph liked the sound of that. "Mmm."
"We assume you are ready?" Sophie asked as she approached Lone in the fort's garden.
She was fully dressed from head-to-toe in her armour, meaning that she'd gotten into it all on her own for a change.
Lone gave her a curious look as he finished off his water and put the glass he was holding into his Dimensional Storage. "Sure. I'm good to go. No quip about last night? You were pretty passionate."
"Don't remind us. We might get in the mood again. Let's just go and hunt the spiders, yes? We can talk of sex upon our return, though it is Soph's turn tonight, not ours," Sophie replied sharply.
Lone chuckled at that. "You two have a rotation system in place? First I'm hearing of this, but yeah, let's get a move on. The day ain't gettin' any younger."
The pair quickly made their way into the forest, and, naturally, with Sophie's unbelievably reliable Mana Sensing, killed an even fourteen spiders as the night was descending upon them.
Having almost four-thousand mana more than yesterday, as well as the fact that Lone's Crude Fireball only cost half the price certainly allowed him to murder far more of the creatures today, which the foxkin was very thankful for.
Lone checked his notifications and his skill Crude Fireball, which had Ranked up once again, as he was retrieving the corpse of the Manasilk Spider in front of him.
Congratulations! the host's active fire magic skill [Crude Fireball] has levelled up! It is now Expert Level 1. Congratulations! the host's active fire magic skill [Crude Fireball] has levelled up! It is now Expert Level 2. Active Fire Magic Skill: Crude Fireball
An incredibly rudimentary application of the common [Fireball] Fire Magic skill.
Due to its crudeness, 25 [-25] lines of Ancient Magic Speech must be chanted either verbally or mentally to invoke this skill. These lines will automatically be spoken or thought by the host when the host intends to use this skill.
[New!] The fireball's base temperature and its size have increased by 0.25 times.
The MP cost to invoke this skill is slightly [down from moderately] increased due to its inherent flaws.
Cost: 1,250 MP [-1,250 MP] Mastery: Expert Level 2
'So I was right about it being hotter, but bigger? I guess that makes sense looking back on it now. That first goblin who hit me with it, wasn't his fireball big enough to cover my entire body?' Lone wondered as he straightened his back and cracked his neck.
"Lone, there's trouble," Sophie suddenly said as she grabbed his arm, ripping him out of his thoughts.
"What? Loads of spiders?" Lone asked in a hushed voice.
"No, worse, people," Sophie said as she looked in the distance.
Following her gaze, through the trees, Lone could barely see three figures, two shorter than the one in the lead.
From the looks of it, two were children in rags while the centre-figure was a young man wearing somewhat gaudy armour and his features looked almost... Asian.
"Is that a foxkin and an... elf? Her skin is a bit darker and crisper than the ones on the island, but those ears, while shorter, they are definitely pointy..." Lone frowned as he focused on the other child. "A red tail and crimson hair..."
Sophie glanced up at Lone's face with her head still covered by her helmet. "A friend of the twins?"
"Maybe... The rags and metal collar, on top of those hopeless expressions, aren't exactly the best of signs," Lone said.
Sophie frowned under her headgear very much like how Lone was. "Slaves?"
"So it would seem, and I've an inkling to who the man is..." he replied as he fixed his posture and made sure to stand slightly behind Sophie's right side.
Within a few seconds, the Asian-looking man, the foxkin girl, and the elf, were within a few meters of Lone and Sophie.
A scowl covering his expression, the man asked, "Why are you in this forest and who are you?" directly to Sophie, completely ignoring Lone for the moment.
Sophie kept both of her hands on the hilts of her shortswords as she answered, "We could ask the same of you."
The man's face noticeably brightened when he heard Sophie's crystal clear voice and high-pitched tone. "That's fair, I suppose," he replied as he nodded his head. "I'm Tamiko Daisuke, or just Daisuke. This is Harem Member One," he said as he bobbed his head to motion at the elf, "and this is Harem Member Two," he claimed as he gestured to the foxkin.
A second of cold silence filled the air as the man narrowed his eyes. "Now, answer me. Who are you and why are you here?"
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