《Haven in a Dangerous World (Old)》Cover
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Tell me what you think of the cover. Made it in photoshop. It's a bit of a rather edited collage of a couple of pictures I found off google (I can't draw ice to save my life). Does it make it feel more like a dungeon reincarnation story? Thanks for reading, peeps. I'm have fun. Hehe. If you have any ideas of where you think this story is going, or even just stuff you'd like to see happen, I'd love to know for comparing notes and all. I have a general idea, but input is always nice. Also, anything I could do better? How's the pacing? And what do you think of all the flavor text? (I'm actually trying to get this up to 50 words so I can post it, lol, mostly want to know about the cover, but hey, other stuff's fun too. Peace out)
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