《BROKEN CHAINS》FORWORD - PLEASE READ
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Welcome, everyone! This the story about Yun Kou! I'm a giant xainxia/wuxia fan! I just love Chinese fantasy novels!
But I've always wanted to read one about a female MC, without her being an awful human being, Black-bellied and self-centered.
None of the art used are actually mine, I suck at drawing things ^-^
What you can expect.
You see those stories with females about some super ninja/poison whatever that get reincarnated into some useless trash - become beautiful - and are pretty much just a trophy wife for some super arrogant devilishly handsome husbando? While becoming the blackest of bellies - and crushing people left and right just because they looked at her funny?
This is not that kinda story.
This story also won't involve any cheat items like "Hey you have this thingy - it can stop time for everyone but you."
It's a story about an abandoned child, a child that spend the first years of her life in the gutter fighting with rats for scraps, a girl that steals, a girl that wants to crawl her way up in the cultivation world - because it gives her the chance to choose her own fate. (It also brings delicious food.)
What you can expect is a simple-minded straightforward - overly suspicious girl. Some funny moments, some sad moments and some comfy moments. There will be face slapping, and there will be fighting and adventuring.
I don't know about romance yet - but if that becomes a factor later in the story it won't be an abusive devilishly handsome man. That forces his will on her - people like that will just get a blank stare.
Toward people that come here talking about other stories.(Forge of Destiny)
Oh yes I've been taken a lot of tropes and even names and puns from other stories - while wrapping them to my own liking - I do not copy anyone, I've read almost every story you can find on wuxia-world and I intend to continue using the common tropes over the course of the story while giving this my own spin.
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It has been brought to my attention that my story is eerily similar to "Forge of Destiny" To that, I can only say I've not read it - I've not read anything from this site prior to making this account and start to write. I don't plan on reading that story since it will probably just crush any motivation on continuing my own - as there are many people defending it.
I have great respect for any other author but - Cultivation system generall set up, all the things that are in my story you can find in some way or another in ANY cultivation novel!
That being said - I would appreciate it if people would not leave bad reviews because my story is similar to something else, it's a bit heartbreaking. Since I really do not want to just change my story up from what it is intended to be just to be "Different" from stuff that already exists that has nothing to do with me
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