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Some examples of the minor changes include scenes such as the gladiator mini boss on an earlier floor, where Wolf escaped the room instead of killing it.
People were complaining about that scene, saying that he could have killed it.
So I fixed that inconsistency by having a barrier appear in between the bars of the gate, blocking anything from getting through. I also specified more that he didn't have the stamina to kill it.
There are other scenarios like this, where I fixed or corrected a minor inconsistency, along with the grammatical things I fixed, and the dialogue.
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