《Dragon: Birth of an Ancient》Not a Chapter - Info/Background Updates/changes
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Hi All,
First wanted to say a huge thank you to those that have followed, commented, reviewed and read this story.
Now we are getting into the interaction/main story a few things that have been bugging me in the raws are starting to mentally hurt me so have decided to make some changes. I do plan to go back and correct past chapters but will not do it at the expense of new releases (Just as time allows).
The first change is the timelines:
5000~ Years Ago - War between Dragons and the Gods. - The retreat of 11 dragon clans and extinction (bar Kai) of one.
2000~ Years Ago - Rebellion against the Gods (Mortal species), destruction of interplanetary travel (via portals) and loss of most technology (reset)
Present day - 5000ish Years after Kai's egg had been laid and hidden
Dragon eggs conventionally take 2000ish years to hatch, however, with Kai's mother's magic, time was distorted and his growth hindered.
The second is 'Level/Rank states for 'Creatures' (Non-human)
Animal -> Rank 1 to 10 -> Evolves into a Beast. (Natural Animals = Dogs/Cats/Cattle etc).
Beast -> Rank 1 to 10 -> Evolves into Divine Beast (Natural Beasts = Lions/Tigers/Elephants/Waterbufferlow etc)
Divine Beast -> Rank 1 to 10 -> Evolves into a Monster (Evolved and Natural Beasts, No natural Divine beast).
Monster -> Rank 1 to 10 -> Evolves into Divine Monster (Natural Monsters Basilisk, Dragon, Drake, wyvern, Phoenix etc).
Divine Monster - Rank 1 to 10 - Only Natural Monsters can reach this rank.
(This was changed from Animal -> Beast -> Monster -> Divine Beast -> Divine Monster. I didn't like the mix up of beast/monster).
Humans and their subspecies (demi-human - Lamia/Minotaur /Harpies etc) have simple ranks, in two categories.
Warrior/Mage | Copper -> 1-10,
Warrior/Mage | Silver - > 1-10,
Warrior/Mage | Gold -> 1-10,
Warrior/Mage | Platinum -> 1-10
Current Ranks:
Dryad - 10th stage Beast
Woads - Late stages Beast
Mira - Mid Rank Two Monster
Kai - Peak 4th Stage Monster
Mellisa - Unknown atm
Eldric - Unknown but weaker than Kai (from Kai's senses)
Others - Unknown ATM
Hope these changes make sense but if you feel there is room for improvement/ other ideas, please let me know in the comments below.
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