《Cursed Era》Note and Feles family tree
Advertisement
I'm really sorry everyone who is reading and enjoying this series.
It's just that I have a lot going on in my life and compared to the first stretch, my daily output has just been dropping a lot.
So, I have to apologise and tell all of you that I really appreciate the support, the ratings and the comments!
And that I'm sorry the revisions took way longer than I expected.
...
Anyway, now that we're caught up, I will be releasing chapters with new plot! So I hope some of the original readers of Cursed Era have stuck around or come back and I promise there won't be big revisions like this... for at least a while(?).
Summary of changes in the revised version
- Tilvrade is younger now, only 7 as of the latest chapter even though the events after the time skip remain largely the same
- Tilvrade's swordsmanship ethos was flipped. Tilvrade is really excited about his technique and skills and is aiming to take after his dad, who he respects and hopes to emulate
- Tilvrade has only done the sharpening experiment and is planning to do a stasis rune experiment over the summer. The heat rune has been removed.
- Note the magic system matured a bit, and I swapped out most references to arrays with runes. Both runes and arrays have a part to play, but runes will be more common.
- Earlier on in the story the time spent in the duke's palace in Gristol was cut from 2 years to 1 winter
- There were a few additions of minor evens such as the peddler getting mad about a shipment of wheat and appealing to Lord Scafel and Viscount Ikburr
- A new fairy tale was introduced with references to the Church of the Sun to lead into the discussion with the Klisimian
Advertisement
- The days of the week system was removed in favour of plain english. The titles were also phased into english versions.
- Some of the memories were smoothed out a bit... though I'll probably have to do more work on this when I revise Cursed Era next. Hoping to do this later rather than sooner so that I can advance the plot somewhat first.
- The character Naenie who was only mentioned in the original draft was replaced with a male character called Nayen who is training to be Tilvrade's valet and apprentice
Release rate
I'm aiming for 3 chapters a week... but I'll have to see how it goes. I don't have any chapter reserve, so I'll see what I can write and update you with how it's going in the chapter notes.
Pacing
If you think that now we're getting over Tilly's early years and it's going to get exciting... think again! Pacing shall continue as it has. Tilly has a long way to go yet.
That being said, I do intend to plan some more action in the spring time, when Tilvrade is 8. If you see opportunities for more action or suspense, please tell me since this isn't my strong point!
Family trees
I've been asked to do some family trees for Tilly and some of the other characters so you guys have a quick reference and I think it's a really good idea! Thanks Zazablord and Killashard for the suggestion.
Now, important bit:
Do any of you know of a good family tree visualisation tool or guide I could use? If I'm going to do this, I'd like it to look good, at least... Please tell me!
Update: Here's a family tree for Tilvrade's family, as described to-date. Doesn't include all the characters, just the ones in the family that are mentioned at some point or another.
Advertisement
Edits and reviews
Thanks so much to all of you who have provided me with notes on typos, grammar errors or inconsistencies. I really appreciate that and have applied everything I could!
Special mention for Skooting and Dosithee who both did a ton of work helping me edit Cursed Era!! And notable mentions to Eersc, Validar and blackfear2!
Also, a super big thanks to all the reviewers! I've really appreciated each and every review on Cursed Era and wanted to thank you for your encouragement and the time you took! I hope Cursed Era continues to meet your expectations and gets on a bit after this long time spent on review >_>
Advertisement
- End190 Chapters
Dungeon Hunter
I failed and will challenge again. There is no room for failure in my second life! 72 dungeons and their owners that appeared on earth. And the Awakened. I am a hunter that will devour all of them.
8 823 - In Serial29 Chapters
The Trespasser
Synopsis Following his di—instincts, David finds himself in a weird situation; the next thing he knows, he's in a different world, dying, and manhandled by a big-ass alien. When the Source comes to his aid, granting him the access that—like every other sapient—he's due, David barely manages to get out of the fight with his life intact, but is that enough? Of course it isn't. The very Source giving him powers is also poisoning him to death. Oh, there she is, the petite female alien. Will that be enough to save him? Of course it won't. If he wants to be saved, he has first to save himself. The only way to do so is by getting to know the world around him, but even before that... Why the bloody hell did I have to be called Deviant!? *** Blurb? Blurb. The Trespasser starts slowly, I believe I've written a decent world, and I want you to find out what it's all about, won't just throw it in your face because of *levels*. I do not like stories that don't make sense. David is not a murderhobo, he respects life and answers to the world and the weird situations thrown at him with irony and sarcasm; so you are looking for easy killing streaks, you will not find them here. So, a man finds himself into the wild? It's a different world, and yet he can breathe its air? Finds himself in a lucky-low-level zone? Oh, look at that, people speak English—how likely is that? So, nope, not for me, gentleman. You won't find anything of the likes here. Again, a man finds himself in a new world but only thinks about the system? Yeah, that's not exactly how it works. David will try to find out what it's really all about, what the aliens want, how they work, why is that Fay really helping him? You can kill somebody to get levels, and yet there is not even a form of police? Not gonna happen here. Man becomes suddenly overpowered in a world where people can live for thousands of years by having enough luck to face only lower-level people? Hahaha—nope. Lastly...Spaceships and fantasy with LitRPG... say what!? Well, what's wrong with that? Let's make it happen, shall we? *** You want even more info? Really? Alright... David will start from the very bottom of the food chain, so there will be a settling arc—it's inevitable. David will find true companions, with personalities and backstories, and they will have a life of their own. There will be enemies, and those enemies will have a life of their own, too; there will be no evil just because. The world-building will have true depth; it will not exist just because the protagonist visits it. There will be both Fantasy and (Soft) Sci-fi—yeah, you heard that right. There will be rationality to every action taken, as long as the characters are aware of what is going on. There will be a godly system. You will come to read because of the world-building, but you will stay for the characters. The dead stay dead, and you will weep for them. There will be no action without a reaction. Lastly, there will be laughs. Are you still up for it? Then get in but fasten your seatbelts because it's going to be a wild ride. *** Release Days: Twice a week Release Time: ~09:00 PM UTC Words per chapter: ~3000 This web novel is also available on other platforms.
8 181 - In Serial50 Chapters
Apocalypse Progression
While Forrest Ward is on a black ops assignment, electricity is knocked out. His friends begin to turn on him, and not in the friendly betrayal sort of way. More like, they want to rip his chest open and steal his life force. Forrest has to assemble a new team of rookies and learn about this new world where power can be earned through fighting and killing monsters, and others. Above all, Forrest is a family man, and he will protect that family. No matter who – or what – gets in his way.
8 129 - In Serial27 Chapters
Idle Dreamer: First World
Eyes open, cosmos form. The dreamer spins a new reality from his idle mind. Follow the story of Enkyall, a primal and alien world. Watch it rise from the chaos of creation to the evolution of its first life. Molded by a hidden hand, its epochs give rise to spires of light, writhing all-consuming plagues, and finally sentient peoples. For generations, the Dauver have farmed and carefully cultivated the Domi like cattle, but entropy demands change, and a new generation of the Domi have risen against their masters. They are The Kin, and they demand survival.
8 232 - In Serial7 Chapters
Odditorium
Creativity is power. Creation is power. Arax is empty, he has no personal attribute and his parents have left him out in the dark. By day he suffers through a mid-level university trying to convert people into Masters but it's given him no luck, nothing will stick. His only momentary joy is the games of Harshings that he plays every night with the members of the Armament Club, ten of the highest level Harshings players of all-time, Arax is the only one under three-hundred years old. Anyways, after a harsh game of Harshings (pun intended) one of the members of the club contacts him with a solution to his emptiness problem, Mimir's Well. Anyways, this story is about God's and creativity and bonkers off the wall (expletive) and rituals and God's and sex jokes. I probably got inspired by like all of the mythos stories that have been popping up on here. It's in a VERY rough form because I've just been getting back into writing. I've written like fifty thousand words already so I guess have fun.
8 163 - In Serial118 Chapters
Sin (Wattys Winner)
On the flip of a coin, people die around Sin. Escaped from a lunatic asylum and haunted by his dead sister, he must find out why, and discover who is trying to use his power to destroy everything and everyone.*****Dead, dead, dead. Say it enough times and it becomes just another word.What would you do? Could you kill a killer? Does the death of one appease the deaths of a hundred? What about that hundred against a thousand?What if you had no choice?Meet Sin. No, not that sort of sin, but Sin, crazy as a loon (you ask Sister Moon), and proud of it. Sin locks himself away in an asylum and, every so often, badboy he's believed to be, gets violent. That's only so they'll give him those nice drugs, though. The ones that help him forget.It's a pity they don't work.Sin, you see, has a serious problem. Well, it's not so much his problem, as ours - yours, mine and everyone else's. People die around Sin. He doesn't like it and there's nothing he can do about it. But someone else knows, and Sin has to stop them... and himself...Flip and catch...--This story is now available on YONDER, your next-generation reading app from the Wattpad family. Join me on YONDER today! Find it now in your app store.WATTY WINNER!!Includes a special BONUS CHAPTER commissioned for Amazon Prime's Panic, and bonus chapters set in Sin's asylum! Featured on the following amazing lists!*The @fright profile for Top Horror Stories selected by movie The Ring!**The Top Psychological Horror reading list for The Boy movie!**The Terrifying Thrillers reading list for The Purge: Election Year!**The Sinister Stories reading list for movie Sinister II!**The Best of Thriller reading list for the Unfriended film!*#4 in MysteryThriller#6 in Horror#6 in Mystery#2 in Psychological#1 in Chiller#1 in Psychological Horror on Amazon!
8 170
Prev Chap
Next Chap
Chap List
Boy
Girl
