《Last Flight of the Raven》2.26 - Training and Learning
Advertisement
My face was covered by a grimy mask of sweat mixed with dust. I felt the prickling of a single drop of sweat carving down its road through the dirt on my neck, reaching the blades of my shoulder and traveling onwards, along my spine. Under the mask was a red hot burning of humiliation, redding my cheeks and whistling in my brain. I was close to snapping. I would have already, if not for the exhaustion I felt. The sensation was new to me. I was sweating, being exhausted, in my mind.
The Betrayer stood before me, the imitation of Kingslayer in a curious grip, high on the hilt while his other hand rested on the crossguard. He was watching me with nothing but contempt. He had taken the sword from me, taken my balance, and sent me to the ground tumbling with nothing but a tiny movement and subtle shifting of his weight.
“I enjoyed that quite a bit.“ He said with much less emotion than his words indicated. “The part of the training I get to show you what a miserable failure you are.“
I gritted my teeth. The insults would not get to me, but the constant...humiliation on the yard. Yes, I had locked my Skills away, and yes, we were on equal footing as far as the supernatural was concerned - And he was so far above me, I could not even understand what he was doing to defeat me so easily. I had been sure to have a good eye for things like that.
“You are an awful teacher, Betrayer.“ I spat.
“Is that so? Or do you simply lack the talent to scrape together the little bit of insight even a cow-brain like you should be able to gather from watching a master fight? “
“I am not watching a master fight, I am being beaten up by one without a chance to understand what he is doing right, or what I am doing wrong.“
“True, I have never been a patient teacher, but I have trained countless knights to the ceiling of human competence in my time. A single cohort strong enough to hold back the rest of the forces of the kingdom. And all of them learned to respect their teacher the hard and...“ he looked at my dirt-covered face and clothes, "...dirty way.“
“Can we skip the phase?“ I held out my hands to the side in mock admiration. “I am pretty fucking awed by your superiority, Betrayer! Can you go on being helpful now?“
“You don‘t get to make demands in my valley.“ He snarled. “But I guess the standards of swordsmanship have slipped even more after the untimely demise of my brother and I.“
He put the tip of his sword to the ground, appraising me like a horse. “There is not much wrong with your physical prowess, I guess, even if you look malnourished. Then again, you don`t need physical strength to wield Whisper, if you have the Skills to make up for it.“
I just waited for him to continue, swallowing the urge to strangle him with my bare hands.
“There is an argument to be made for covering the basics first, developing the necessary base before going on into more advanced techniques. But you will never swing a sword without the help of your Skills ever again, so why bother?“
Advertisement
“I do need it. I have a way to lock myself out of the benefits of my Core Skills to train with the fighters and teach them what little I have learned. They, even more than me, are in desperate need of guidance. And I need to learn the foundation to teach it.“
“Even so. Teaching you the way I fought in the arena will be a futile exercise because you have Skills I did not have access to. I will think about this. But in the meantime, I guess we could go going back to the absolute easiest and most basic lessons. Stance!“ He shouted and I assumed one, holding Kingsbane with two hands upright, in front of my body.
“Wrong!“ He shouted again, slapping Kingsbane lightly with his sword, showing me the weight and leverage an extended sword as long as Kingsbane had. I immediately lost the stability of my position as I struggled to hold the swaying sword upright, just a second - but a second was all that was needed in the chaos of a real battle.
“Whisper not only is a hand-and-a-half sword, also, unfortunately, called bastardsword, it is also unusually wide and heavy. There are countless weapons out there lighter and faster than yours. Yes, you put your blade between you and the enemy, who will likely have less of a reach, but you do it when they move, not before. You'll exert yourself needlessly and your blade itself will be a target to throw you off guard. A target you will have a harder time controlling than your opponents with less weight in their hands. This means they will be quicker on the attack than you on the parry that must inevitably follow such a move.“
He returned to his position. “Stance!“
I took the same position but rested the blade on my shoulder instead, to which he nodded, albeit not completely satisfied with my display.
“Now, there are the five diamond parries, the patterns of parrying up and down and to a side respectively, resembling the shape of a diamond, and the eight angles of attack. You will show them to me. But they are subpar. Why? Because your weapon is heavy and swinging it around is a mistake punished by a quick lunge or the fixation of your sword out of balance. Instead, make small movements. Let the blade of the enemy slide upon yours, lead it upwards, and thrust downwards at the same time.“
He showed the parry into the thrust with his sword, then turned to me, gesturing to my sword. “Whisper's true strength is cutting, but the true strength of the bastardsword is its reach and versatility. Master the style first, the weapon second.“
Tortured by the snide remarks and, even worse, display of obvious competence by the Betrayer, I began repeating the same movements for what felt like hours, but what I knew to be 20 minutes, as that was the extent of time I could summon the Betrayer to the Valley of Swords each day before I had to use my Skill to call on him again.
But today would not be such a day. I could not freely spend my Mana, being the strongest fighter in Ravenport, I needed to be ready for emergencies, while the Wounded Pride was away and the Albatross gone.
Advertisement
I spent the time on repeating the forms and techniques I had learned, relearned that is, in reality, to someday get them ingrained into my muscle memory. It was a strange feeling, repeating movements I was sure to know, which I clearly remembered mastering, in a body that was very much the same but had not learned them yet. There was a significant disconnect between my mind and my body concerning the training, and I needed much more time hammering out the kinks of the techniques, in reality, then I needed to learn them in the first place, albeit in the seclusion of my Demesne.
That would be the extent of my training today, as I had a project equally as intriguing as the lessons in sword fighting had been.
Winter was approaching with giant steps, and while a part of me dreaded the hardship that would certainly entail, another part longed for the long nights at the fire and the forced calm the cold would lay over the world. Which would give me time to finally - finally! - study the tomes of the golem maker.
To that end I needed to weave, and learn to use, the Skill [Decipher the Ancient Truth], which I had learned from the Seeker in exchange for secrets of the Dragon of Darkness. It was hard for me to find a place for it, as my Demesne always had been a place of introspection, if anything, and recluse. But studying the tomes would be neither.
There was no reason for me, nor really the possibility, to do the studying in my Demesne, but I needed to anchor the Skill somewhere, and all the options I had felt wrong. Even now, looking down on the little things I had done since creating the space itself, the lake and all the statues around it already felt cluttered and mismatched.
It was time to extend the space, to create meaningful areas, so as to keep the central tree, the resting place for all the souls, free from the other influences. Widening my hands, I let the cliff grow - although it looked from where I stood as if the lake below me plummeted down. I could still oversee it, but the distance helped to detach the sanctuary of the tree from the rest.
I floated down to the lake, looking at the weathered statues surrounding it. I still liked that eerie feeling they evoked in me, of witnesses of a time gone by. And so I threw my first thought out of the window, which had been creating a grand entrance to a temple of sorts with the statues flanking the entrance.
No. I wanted a contrast. I wanted the simple. A small round door of wood in the base of the cliff and beyond not a grand library but a warmly lit room, stuffed with books and candles, a fireplace, and a comfortable chair. I anchored the Skill to the reading desk, and a comically out of place magnifying glass.
I was not a big reader, yet, but I was young. I respected the wisdom reading could bring, and I respected the learned men which lives revolved around the bound parchment, but I only needed a small space of calm. Because I could not see myself reading much besides that. Not here. So it felt right to hide the place behind a door in the cliff.
With that done, and the Skill finally woven, I returned to reality and took a place overwatching the bay. We still did not know if we had banished all danger from the bay, and even If we knew that the crystal whale was more or less claiming the sea for itself, driving off the brunt of the more dangerous beings, I wanted to be in a spot I could quickly react to anything that arose.
I sat, protected from the wind and rain by a spanned sail, in the flickering light of a couple of lanterns around me, and summoned my chest, digging for the tomes I had found so long ago. I would hate every second of what came next, but the possible reward made it worth it, I felt. Golems!
I was completely and utterly the wrong person to ask for if it came to prying knowledge out of parchment, foreign even, and the path of a golem maker was bound to be difficult to learn, even harder to master and nearly impossible to actually do in Ravenport at the moment. But the sooner I started, the sooner I would know if spending time reading the tomes was worth my while. I even was torn on the outcome. Part of me wanted to be unable to understand the books so that I could concentrate my efforts on easier tasks. Then again, I was nothing if not stubborn.
I opened the dry pages of the oversized book, after I had freed it of the neatly-wrapped protective wax paper, and activated [Decipher the Ancient Truth]. Immediately, golden fractals appeared on the page I was reading, and the letters began dancing in front of my eyes. I did not get a translation. Instead, I was feeling the intent of the author. There was a difference there, a quite significant one, as the text may have been masterfully crafted, a journal, or even a book meant to preserve the knowledge of a lifetime or made to be understood. The intent I got was raw. Unpolished. Snippets of information connected to a world of knowledge the author might have had, but that had not been transported onto the page.
I stared at the page for minutes, making sense of it, trying to understand the lights, the letters, or the fractals, but a hammering headache soon made me slam the book shut.
There was a single intent I had clearly discerned, as one precious second I was able to ignore all the other connections and focus on the meaning of the first page.
To give Skills to a golem you first have to learn to create, mimick, and adapt Skills themselves.
A mortal that had looked behind the veil and discovered what was the purview of gods? Or had the golem maker been a godling himself?
Advertisement
- In Serial34 Chapters
The Extramundane Emancipation of Geela, Evil Sorceress at Large
Darkos, holy priest of Alerion, the God of Peace and Healing, has just arrived at the castle of the Evil, Dark Sorceress, backed by his trusty, if clumsy, companion, Geela. They fling open the doors to find the place dusty and decrepit. "Oh dear, this place is showing its age," Geela sighs. And with those words, everything Darkos knew about his friend is turned on its head. Geela, far from a naive farm girl, is a 70-year-old Dark Mistress, hell-bent on exacting revenge on her ex-husband Barney for cheating on her, trashing her place, and changing the locks. Geela is everything Darkos has sworn to defeat. A bastion of dastardly deeds. A pinnacle of evil... ...so of course he finds himself tagging along.
8 173 - In Serial7 Chapters
No content
8 87 - In Serial45 Chapters
Token
Token is a web serial about four friends who find themselves playing through simulated board games in real life. Whether they want to play or not, it is not their choice, and whoever loses a game gets… re-balanced. Will they conquer this mystery before losing themselves completely?
8 93 - In Serial40 Chapters
Fate Of The Swordsmen
Anarion Ragnor struggles to move ahead in a world that is on the brink of collapse. Demons, Gods, Undead, Cursed Beings and more are all fighting for control of Terath. Anarion a student on his way to graduation from the Swordsmen Academy struggles to cope with his issues of abandonment while those around him are trying to breach through the emotional mask he wears to protect himself from becoming attached to the people around him. Anarion is forced to live in the Shadow of his older brother who has fastly become one of the most renown Swordsmen alive. Dealing with his insurecity, ineptitude and inner fears. Anarion must face the world and himself. Swordsmen are ancient Warriors who wield legendary blades that can become so powerful they could shatter reality. They also know a unique magic called Elestran.
8 110 - In Serial8 Chapters
Scorpion
This is my Mother Sharon Bouriaque's work. She passed away in 2003. I loved reading my mother's work and she got me into writing. So I'm putting this out there with full credit to her. I have made some modification to technology since there has been a lot of changes to technology from when she wrote this until now. But other than that and a few very basic edits the work is hers. Jeff Carlisle despises the alien race that has colonized his world and inter-married with some of Earth’s people. Earth’s governments are working to get rid of the Thrans when they learn that something much worse is headed Earth’s way---an invasion fleet of RiaZan. The savage spiderlike race who harvests human types for food. The government leaders are terrified. Earth has no workable defense against ANY invaders from space. However, the Thrans do. They respond to the threat of invasion with an astounding move. They remove the psi-damper from all the people and activate the Scorpion Forces, The psionic warrior who are the elite of the Thran Military units. The Thran’s must also contact a certain youth whom they’ve kept hidden. They must activate the legendary Gold leader, and Jeff Carlisle’s life changes forever when he discovers he is the long-prophesied psionic warrior the Thran’s been hiding.
8 178 - In Serial958 Chapters
Legend of the Lost Star
[More placeholder space for the next Writahon...] [Completed the October 2020 Royal Road Writathon challenge] [Completed the April 2020 Royal Road Writathon challenge] Book 1: First Light Synopsis: As a war of epic proportions enters a ceasefire, a soul from another world enters a dead boy's body. Without any memories of who he was, with only a little companion by his side, the lost soul begins his long, arduous journey to recover his memories, while unraveling the mysteries of a war-torn world. Why was he sent here? And where will he go now? Even he himself does not know. But one thing is for certain: the world will never be the same again. Book 2: Foredoomed to a Rendezvous Synopsis: As war continues to break out between the Five Lands, Gaius finds himself inheriting a legacy of ancient times. With the flames of battle spreading through the South once again, the lost soul throws himself into battle over and over, in an attempt to protect his home and those he holds dear. How will the boy, nearly unrivalled in martial might, fare in a web of conspiracies beyond his ken? Book 3: The Last and the Lost Synopsis: The boy has set himself an unbelievable target in a bid to save someone precious to him. With his former home now out of reach, he stalks the Southern Continent, inciting rebellion and revolution where possible to lure his prey out. Meanwhile, in the heart of the South, embers of war begin to rekindle. Will it be the death knell of yet another nation millennia old? Book 4: The Unravelling World Synopsis: Time is not on Gaius' side. Everyday life, already disturbed by the flames of mortal war, falls apart entirely as beings of legend once again appear on Orb. Forced to a foreign land to treat his injuries, the boy must confront the outcomes of his actions, directly and indirectly. But the tide is rising. Countless enemies are throwing themselves against the nations of Orb, cleaving a path of blood wherever they go. Gaius has to hurry...or drown with the rest. Book 5: World's End, Divines' Rondo Synopsis: The great gods of Orb have staked their claim on the world itself, killing all in their way. Each of the Cardinal Continents are fighting their own battles and making their own peace, but none are aware of the growing threat from the Wildlands, where a self-exiled legend continues to gather strength. Meanwhile, a new threat stalks the whole of Orb, killing whatever remains of the Constellation Heroes. Against such a chaotic backdrop, a boy continues to protect a semblance of daily life for his loved ones, but will he be successful when the curtains finally open? Book 6: The Frenzied Tide Synopsis: A sword hangs above the Eastern Territories. The Human God, progenitor of all life, the direct cause of the beastfolk genocide, has made his will known to the rulers of the East — make peace with the God of Water, or be destroyed in three months. Gaius, who has left the battlefield to return home, is once again called to fight, to support a do-or-die offensive upon their foe's territory. But in the background, the threads of destiny are beginning to come together. Plots set in motion long ago are coming to fruition... Book 7: Limina of Ruin Synopsis: The chalice has broken. The East is beset with turmoil, as factions turn on each other. The Great Divide, however, brims with a setting radiance, ensuring a final, transient peace. And in the midst of it all, one young boy follows the fettered winds and the unshackled waters, heading to a new land to uphold a promise. For him, the days of fighting will be a distant memory before long...and a daily event in the years to come. Uncovering ancient memories, putting to rest regrets, enjoying the last of a peaceful life...the people of the Five Lands will live to their fullest. Yet, this is but the calm before the storm. Book 8: Power Talks Synopsis: Fate. A curious word to most...and a frightening word to Gaius. Alongside the rulers of the North, Gaius witnesses frightening truths, proof of an inevitable future. Spurred by a myriad chilling revelations and urged by a god's killer, the Mortal Light Dynasty gathers both mortal rulers and divine sovereigns, covering past conflicts with a offer of cooperation of an unprecedented scale. However, can this unity, first of its kind, stand up to time, fate and mortal nature? Or will it burn, along with the Five Lands? Book 9: Homeland Song Synopsis: Gazing out at the Orb of old, Gaius ponders his destiny and the great stakes with it. Time and again, he has led a life of choices, making one after another for the sake of those he cares about. His latest choice, however, carries implications of an immeasurable scale. Charged with the protection of the future, all that awaits him is an eternal solitude... On the other side of the false world, a single star shines, one whose light is meant to protect. Gemini, who has long found a homeland in the form of Ark City, has spent years defending it with friends and family alike. However, an inexorable end is approaching. The day the Great Divide falls looms ever closer. At the crossroads of destiny, when the chains of fate bind him fully, what will the last Constellation choose? And what will his choice mean for the rest of the Five Lands? Book 10: Immortal Indignant Synopsis: As the Five Lands reel from an unexpected revelation, Gaius continues his struggle to accept his immortal destiny of eternal vigilance. Mortal fetters continue to tie him down, with the prospect of breaking them a heart-rending prospect. There is little light for him in the darkness; his emotions seemingly a poisoned apple. For him, the days ahead are one of balancing his emotions; his immortal destiny is antithetical to the aspects that make one mortal. However, he isn't the only immortal indignant at the current state of affairs. Behind the scenes, huge powers push and pull, tussling in an insane game of wrestling sanity. The Five Lands and the great gods prepare in the background, awaiting their time to strike... Book 11: Cause Convergent Synopsis: As Orb reels from an unexpected turn of events, the crumbling of the Great Divide speeds up. With time now at a premium, Gaius travels the world, addressing a particular personage's last will, while ensuring that he leaves no regrets behind. Revisiting the Five Lands with his beloved one last time, he casts his eyes to a new future, a world full of a peace forged by collective resistance. Far away from Gaius, at the very borders of the Southern Continent, soldiers train day and night, awaiting the day the rift between worlds crumble. But the battlefield there isn't just between the Five Lands and the Wildlands... Book 12: Boundary Belligerent Synopsis: The rift between worlds crumble. The moon, the sun and the sky shatter, revealing the vast expanse beyond. The cold light of the stars gaze down upon Orb, illuminating a bloody battlefield at World's End, where gods and mortals wrestle. Immortal troops charge the Five Lands, over and over again, only to be repelled by vast engines of war. For many, the moment of destiny has arrived. The Third Extermination has begun. However, Gaius gazes not at the present, but at the future beyond. What does he see there? And what will he do? Book 13: Destiny Divergent Synopsis: Bells ring, and destiny veers. Mortal miracles, having pierced a divine destiny, now turn their light of annihilation upon the legendary land of dangers and dark myth. A single being who should have slept forever reawakens, carrying out a inherited duty to protect. Under a dome of absolute law, the hulks that darken the skies are grounded, forcing the Five Lands to move ahead on foot. Hidden differences erupt, comrades turn upon comrades, and the alliance begins to crumble. What should have been a happy ending begins to fall apart. Watching from high above, the Abyss Sovereign laments his weakness, cursing the new destiny laid upon the world. And yet, he will never give up. Book 14: Abyss Ascendent Synopsis: As a future of never-ending conflict draws closer, Gaius stands at the centre of Orb, his will tempered and set. What the Wildlands has ceased to be, he will inherit. Divine Kingdoms and mortal nations clamour for peace to prepare for greater wars, but Gaius will no longer stand for that. For the sake of his dream, the Five Lands — and now, the Wildlands — must be unified against a common enemy. Gaius himself. Raising the flag of rebellion against mortal nature and destiny, the Abyss Sovereign commences a festival of creation for his new world, a paradise unimaginable to both mortal and divine minds. With his intentions made known now, there is no going back. He will succeed. Or die trying. Book 15: Terminus Transcendent Synopsis: ??? This is a story that may, depending on how impatient you are, take some time to spin up. I have enough in my mind for a long run, so it's essential that I lay out a great deal of groundwork at the start. Eleven books have been released so far, and this work will end at Book 15. Be aware of late arrival spoilers! My Patreon link is here, which allows for up to sixty-five advanced chapters ahead of the free releases, or if you'd just like to support me. Release schedule: My original promise was 2 a week, minimally, but it's been a daily release for a long time. So yeah...
8 844

