《The Elemental Arena》Writing Status Update
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I have written a book. That just feels so good to say. :)
I'm glad to finally have the epilogue published. It was actually the first chapter I wrote almost two years ago, during the NaNoWriMo challenge in 2018, which started my attempts at being a writer. Of course, I had to completely rewrite it, and every thing else I wrote, since my first version was... fairly novice, to say the least.
Now where do we go from here?
Book Two Status:
I have already been working hard prepping book two. I have partially revised my outline, fleshed out my game system, and have already written the first chapter.
That being said, I would like to be at least a few chapters ahead before I start posting. So there will be a short break (maybe a couple months) before book two officially begins. Unlike my previous hiatus, where I did zero writing due to time constraints, this break will be filled with writing.
One thing I regret about book one was the rushed nature of a few of the chapters. Towards the latter half of book one, I fell behind on writing, even finishing the chapters the very morning I was posting them. That was stressful, and counterproductive to my writing process. Considering I am writing for fun as my hobby, stressing myself out doesn’t align with my intended goals.
Book One Edit:
As I mentioned in my previous update, I am currently also doing an editing pass on all the currently posted chapters. So far, I have edited and updated the first seven chapters. This editing is mostly focused on improving the prose, tweaking the dialogue to feel more natural, and removing repetitive sentences. I am also making a few minor tweaks to cheesy scenes here and there.
There are a few reasons why I have decided to do an editing pass, even though it is not the common practice of some of the most prolific web serial writers.
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Firstly, I want to change Iliya’s name to Iliana. I have had many readers express that Lilly and Iliya’s names were too similar, and they couldn’t tell these characters apart, which is a shame given they are nothing alike. Additionally, a few of my Bulgarian readers have mentioned that Iliya, is in fact, a masculine name. While there is nothing wrong with this, it was unintentional on my part, and I would rather she had a traditional feminine name, such as Iliana.
Secondly, I need a refresher on the material. It’s been 8 months since I posted my first chapters, and I have forgotten some of the small details, foreshadowing, etc. I honestly need to go over my story again to ensure I maintain continuity. I will also be fact checking my stats, ensuring my numbers are all straight.
And lastly, and most importantly, I enjoy it. Going back and editing a chapter in between sessions of writing helps keep me fresh.
Thank you so much everyone who read, commented, and supported my story. I really appreciate it, and I am excited to reveal more of the arena world to you.
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