《Change: New World》A short not so overdue update
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A few people have asked me for updates regarding my situation and the status of this story, so this is my response.
The "rewrite" is going well. I've finished writing the first part, although, at this point, I'm still unsure whether it's going to end up being a simple installment to a serial, or if it can stand on its own as a "volume" for a new series.
I've also gone and edited it once over. Because I'm always biased to my work, I think its an improvement to the old, but of course, my opinion is unreliable. That's why I'm here to ask for help. If there is anybody interested in beta-reading the new work, please leave me a pm. I'm not really looking for people to proofread or check for spelling/grammar issues, but rather, for general opinions. I asked this question once, back when I first attempted to get CNW rewritten, but that kind of fell apart, so here's hoping it succeeds again.
As for other news, I'm sad to announce this, but I will have to delete the chapters to this story sometime in the near future. I'm reluctant to do this, especially considering how long this story has been on this site for, but the situation dictates it to be so. I'll probably delete it around the time I get the first volume published.
And lastly, thank you for all the support. Hopefully, I can get this off the ground, and continue the story on a different platform.
UPDATE: thank you for everyone who offered. Unfortunately, I already have enough beta-readers, so all future inquiries will be rejected.
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I don’t know what happened in my previous life but I died I guess and now I am reborn in a world with people with super powers aliens and a lot of cool shit! I don’t know what im going to do with this novel but just so you know he can see the status of other people so their superpowers or other skill like hacking or fighting and make them his own. And then he can choose to just copy them so that the owner can keep it or steal it so that the owner can not use it anymore. english not my first language i dont know how much i will upload because i have school but i will upload as much as possible
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