There's a couple of things I'll be looking to change in the second draft, since I more or less didn't really plan anything in the story.

- The rather sudden revelation that Ein is a Songweaver. I'll be looking to sprinkle in some foreshadowing in act 1

- More emphasis on the 'legends' of people like Lady Reyalin and other Fateweavers in Act 1

- I might do a major restructuring when Evaine and Ein/Merrill split paths. At the moment she pretty much goes off on her own for 2 chapters after the Draurig part and then they're all back together in Caerlon again. Keeping them split up until Aldoran might make for a better read (I'm told the Caerlon to Aldoran part which will be up shortly is rather slow).

Minor spoiler, but they split up once again after Aldoran.

- There's a bit of an issue some with Ein, Merrill and Evaine (and Garax) all being important people who come from the same place. I don't really have a fix for this yet, though I may consider one in the future. It would either come in the form of some plot point revolving around why Felhaven produced these three Fateweavers, or I might just edit it so that only Ein and Evaine are "important." In either case, they are but 3 of many important characters in the world. The rest have yet to be revealed and will join them along the journey.

- Speaking of which, there will be some more name changes planned. At the end of the book I'll be changing 'Raginrok/The Throne of Destruction' to 'The Muzzle/Nanak Tur, Tomb of the Ninety'. Some other stuff like Fateweaver and Heart of the World will also come under review.