《Dah Ork Life!》Important Decisions
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Hey all. So, I finished reading through my notes and plans, and found that my last few chapters were really rushed, and just didn't sit well with the overall pacing. Too much happened, too quickly. This was partly due to the release structure, making a relatively short amount of pages seem much longer, given the time it took to create them. Also, I noticed some portions that didn't quite make total sense, lacking context that only existed in my own head, and not on the page.
As such, I've decided it would be best to simply cut off the last few chapters, and resume from Chapter 25. I already have a basic plan to redirect this last portion of the story in a better way, giving it a full Arc feeling, before meeting back up with the Landing on Armaggeddon plotline.
I just wanted to let you know ahead of time while I'm working on the new chapters, so you would have some context as to why chapters have been removed, and to help clear up any confusion you might have when returning to the story at an earlier point in time.
Expect further chapters in the next few days, as I get back into the flow of things. Thank you for your incredible support, and I hope you enjoy the coming installments of Dah Ork Life!
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