《Fantasia》Comments and Suggestions (And announcements)
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Please post any comments and suggestions (including ideas for monsters and adventures Fey could go on) here. I especially want to know if you notice any typos, grammatical errors, or places where I missed italicizing the main character's thoughts (I had to do it manually after I pasted the story here).
Also, if you liked the story, I'd love to hear from you. There's nothing better than praise :)
Please refer to the chapter and place within the chapter you're talking about so I can find it easily.
EDIT: If you think you know what's special about the NPCs in Fantasia and want me to tell you whether your theory is correct, please send me a PM. I don't want to spoil things for people who want to figure it out for themselves.
EDIT2: I'll use this thread to post any announcements I have related to Fantasia. Comment either here or directly in the chapter you're referring to.
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