《The Abyssal Dungeon》A Map and Some Art
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Hello again! As promised, I took a bit of time both creating a map of Aby's current layout, as well as going over some of the small sketches I've created since I've started writing. I do have to say, a lot of it is not nearly up to any standards that I'd want to share it.
Map
Looking over the map, once again, I feel a bit bad with how convoluted the layout had become on paper, and how difficult it was to properly get everything to fit onto one page, despite that page being about sixty centimeters by fity centimeters when the last map fit comfortably on something not even half that. Just as it was last time, the map is wildly out of scale, though each 'level' on the lower floors is correct.
As I said, this map made a lot more sense before I drew it out, and I apologize for that. I just hope that the floors are adequately labelled and legible, especially since I plan on expanding this map as future chapters add new floors, as well as improving upon this when I have more time to dedicate to doing so.
Also, I know I promised some more art, but after going through my stuff I really only found a single thing that I remember being completed, as well as something I'm not embarassed to show, and that's because it was mostly just an experimental doodle I made way back when, before the wyvern had grown up to the point he was now.
Wyvern
Anyways, other than that, I'll put my first sketch of the little wyrmling back here too, since this seems like a good way to start having one consistent place for everything I've created.
Wyrmling
Anyways, aside from my own three admittedly lackluster bits of art, I mentioned about a month back that I got some fanart! Since I finally made a dedicated art post, I included the piece sent to me by Beryth of Aby and Sela.
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Aby and Sela
It means a lot, and I'm really happy to get anything like this, or even to just see how people like the story and what they think of how I'm doing. Over the coming days/weeks I'll probably be editing this chapter, adding in anything new that I think should be shared for the story. Whenever I do I may rearrange this 'chapter' to be at the front of the list, or maybe before the prologue? I don't know, I'd be happy to take suggestions on what you think I should do.
Now that I have time, I'm going to start going through the comments on the chapter earlier today, as well as the few from Sunday that I missed, so I'll do my best to respond to everyone. And as always, thank you for reading!
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Thrust into the supernatural world of the deep forest, Paul finds himself in a situation where he could find himself prey to pretty much every other creature and animal around. If he's to survive, he must shed his weak form to grow stronger and survive. But the forest is full of creatures beyond human understanding, that act without the need for food or shelter and that seem to exist for the sole purpose of dragging humans to the bottom of a murky river. Is it really possible to kill such creatures when your only strength is physical prowess? --- A monster evolution story based on Swedish creature mythology. The focus will overwhelmingly be on the progression of the main character and his slow increase in strength. Although many of the creatures are based on Swedish creature mythology, I have taken creative liberties in order to ensure that evolution lines and the such are in line with the usual. The main thought I had when going into this is that I want to delay the "meeting a human" section as much as possible. My plan is to get him to endgame levels of strength before even sniffing the possibility of seeing a human. Whether I'm actually able to do this remains to be seen, but I'm holding my thumbs! Also, I'm aware that there are other troll evolution stories, but this is unrelated to them. They can do their stuff and I'll do mine, but this is in no way related to any of them. That said, hope you enjoy it!
8 169Ardent Tears
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8 101AARON: THE ARCHE
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8 85Records of the Weakest Emperor
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Adventure, Action, Evil Gods, Evil Religions, Goddesses, Hidden Abilities, Industrialization, Mature Protagonist, Manipulative Characters, Mystery Solving, Mythology, Nobles, Time TravelCalvin Villanueva was once heralded as the savior of the world. His might was unrivaled despite possessing the weakest class in Las Felipinas. But in a cruel twist of fate, his achievements were turned against him and in a span of a single night, he went from experiencing heaven to plunging into the deepest parts of hell.Captured and imprisoned by the Sucklings, an alien invader who came from a different realm. Calvin became their Scribe, the Keeper of History, and ultimately... He arrived at the peak of the weakest Writer Profession and became the Author of Fate. Unfortunately, it was already too late. The world was now in ruins and Calvin only had a single choice in front of him.It was death.He may have chosen death but he had proven before his death that he was indeed the true savior of humanity.Manipulating fate, twisting time and space...Calvin went back to the past for a second chance to turn things around!After countless life and death battles, who was it that snatched everything away from me? Under the tribulation of sorrows and the tossing of wind and rain, humanity may have betrayed me, but I shall save them once again!Bringing with me the memories of my past, those who dare to block my way shall be killed!My return to the summit begins!
8 188Wet world wonderland.
A young girl of 16 years dies by drowning, and is reincarnated as a living Puddle of Water.Through many fantastical fun filled and wacky adventures our Protagonist will lead a better life than her last.Thank you for your time. Something I want to add, is that this story is written in first person, and I plan to carry on with it for a LONG time.-(Maybe thousands of chapters in size, until the story literally runs out of any potential to keep going.) So yes, there's still a lot of mystery and build up I have planned for future adventures. Wet World Wonderland is a story primarily concerned with the depth and complexity of its world and characters. So forgive me if something seems off, or isn't made immediately clear. I would love to talk, but try and consider that I might have something planned.(Not that you can't still criticize, of course. If you've got an opinion on something, I'd love to hear it.) If you plan on rating WWW, please read until chapter 20. WWW isn't the kind of story you can start judging from the first five chapters. Although, I admit I'm not so sure if 20 chapters in is good enough to judge it either, but I would still advise reading to at least that point. Also, if you have a problem with something in the story, please PM me, and I would love to talk about it. As of 1/19/2021 I have just added WWW's (Wet World Wonderland's) New Cover-Art. I know it's a bit weird, and probably sudden. And with all things considered, it may never make sense. But canonically with lore and info that has, or will be revealed in coming chapters, you might be able to put something together. Anyways, I hope you like it. Also, new symbol, at the top left of the image, hope you all like that too.As of 5/16/2022 the revised cover art for WWW has been uploaded, same as before with the first cover art. I hope you like it. Cover Art Credit goes to Itreallyisyaboi. They're on Instragram.
8 132PHILOPHOBIA (Book II) | Chanbaek,Baekyeol
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