《Celestial Journey》Author's Note (Poll for Devouring Sect Arc)
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This chapter will not stay more than a few days.
When I wrote this part of the story (Devouring Sect part), I had a burnout and was at a complete loss on how to progress the plot. Later, I had some inspiration to write and it ended up causing the Devouring Sect part to end abruptly extremely soon.
My question to you readers is :
Do you want me to extend it? I can do it without impacting the plot nor forcing anything special. The reason it ended was because of Alexander's sudden seclusion. I can push it back at the expense of possible issues in later chapters.
(for example, if I do and this arc last for a consequent amount of time, I may or may not forget a few parts of future chapters where it says for example "x years old" while it should be "y years old")
And to be honest, in case more people want it to be extended, it might not be extended that much. It will depend on how much I can squeeze :D
To go about this there are a few options :
First : I could simply continue as is and write side stories later, like I did during the Writathon Specials (though it might require some very slight plot editing).
Second : I could elongate this arc, at a possible cost of time. Where I might or might not need from a day to multiple days to rearrange everything.
Third : This option is to just not do it. The arc would last only a few chapters, without much going on. I also thought about bringing it back later, but it made no sense, so that is not an option.
Reminder : I can only do it now, as it would not be a forced arc. It just ended abruptly because of some random inspiration I had causing the plot to jump forward. Also, this arc was never supposed to be anything serious and won't be, Alexander said himself that it was a sect of slaves. The reason he made this sect was to quench some of his curiosity about cultivation differences between his system and the Celestial Realm's one.
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On a side note, please do comment if there is anything you would like to happen in case the majority chooses to elongate it!
Since in that case, I would not have much to work with. It can be anything from "Sect life" to "Sect war", etc..
If it is too out of place however, I would ignore it. So if someone ask for cyborg dragons shooting trees from their eyes, I would choose not to...
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