《The Empty Valley Cries Unheard》Deliverance - Part 1
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Chapter 14: Deliverance – Part 1
I think it was yesterday.
I got home from work at 7 PM and finished with my business before booting up my PC.
It took some time to start; when the login screen with the motherboard's logo came out, there was a bit part which got 'corrupted', causing the sections of the logo and texts to scatter 'round the screen.
As it went by, the corruption got even worse; some of the words became unreadable and when it came to the Windows login screen, the display kept flickering; with each of it, various ripped flesh starts to appear on the screen. It was kind of surreal somehow.
it might be a virus. Yet, I didn't recall ever installing something or doing anything which would cause such a malicious thing to appear. Some moments passed and I realize the pieces of flesh somehow got assembled together when I didn't pay attention. It was a mostly rotted face of a human corpse along with the remainder of its flesh, cut off on the screen. From the shape so far, it's most likely a female.
Let's see here--what should I do? No matter how much I stared at the screen, even for a long time, it didn't show any sign of moving. The jumpscare I was expecting did not come.
Maybe if it's female corpse, I could remold her into a cute girl! The question was: how? Normally I suppose I'd be scared if I saw a gory corpse like this but, it's honestly too unrealistic for me to feel anything. Might as well go with it.
As if there's someone giving me hints, I moved my mouse around and there appeared a cursor shaped like an actual human hand.
When I clicked the face with my mouse, a male hand appeared out of blue and caressed her face, which direction also depend on where I dragged it, in this case, it was back-and-forth. Albeit subtle, I could see signs of it coming back to life and colors seem to return to its mostly rotting flesh. Although the injuries weren't healed in the slightest.
Although the hand in the screen were now filled with messy blood and other things I could not describe, I released my mouse and the hand was also gone. When I clicked it again, the hand were all clean without a trace. Let's see here, ah—I didn't notice there was a toolbox in the edge of the screen.
Brush? Eraser? Move? Bucket? Eyedropper? Magic Wand? There's also color palette, plus the Hand tool which I used earlier.
Hmm...this might need a delicate operation. I reach out to my drawing tablet and plugged in my USB port.
It worked!
First of all, maybe I shouldn't use the eraser to remove all the gory mess in the skin. Apparently, all it took was a click from the magic wand tool and delete. It also discarded all the gory part of the skin in the head, eyes, lips, arms, torso, legs and feet etc. Some of the things that simply rot in darker color couldn't be removed though.
For the repair, I used the eyedropper to pick the base skin color. Using the palette which fortunately had the gradient wheel, I shifted the color to what my intuition said, a healthy white skin color. I put the magic wand and used paint bucket; it turned out more surreal since she became more human-like but at the same time had several missing parts of her body. It's just like the results of bad Photoshop.
Though, for the good part, the restored skin had perfect shading. It was the same when I tried applying the new skin. The resulting figure had a blank face and the head was a bit weird but the godly auto-correct fixed its shape instantly, in addition, the ears also got added on its own, although she had no chest, nipples, and vagina--I could see the other contours like her body lines and armpits.
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Her body shape wasn't voluptuous so I'd work on them later.
The eraser was also great, as I magic wand the hair when I erased it--leaving the girl bald--it did not erase the head under it.
Since I mostly start with the hair when drawing, I decide to go with black color and used the brush to draw the outline. Wait, there's a new layer function? Alright, I made another layer and named it 'hair'. No need to magic wand every time I need to redraw some parts.
After about half an hour of lining and adjusting by erasing the parts and redrawing them, I felt like an actual artist due to how lifelike it was. As soon as I was done with outlining the part, it was rendered automatically—from the gradients, the shading and the highlights in one package.
I used my phone to search for the reference, I used the good girl/girl next door hair type in JAV. A shoulder length hair with long rectangular bangs. Whoa, her black hair's so pretty with the rendering. I couldn't help but rush to detailing the face.
Next, I made the cheeks bit plump and rosy, plus narrower chin—going for a feminine, baby-face look. Continuing with the eyebrows that are quite apparent but not that thick. Next was the nose, I made it rather thin and small to accentuate the cutely features.
For the lips, I made it bit wider than her nose, gave it a bit of pink color, like a thin glossy lipstick.
It's still a bit creepy, but if I imagine her with the eyes, she's so cute.
The eyes were the tricky part as I wasn't really experienced in drawing an actual real-life eye. I mostly focus on the anime-styled ones, which most likely look weird in her case.
Do I have to redo this from the scratch? What if the proportion of the hair, the head, the eyebrows, and the eyes were all wrong since I used real-life eyes? Ah right, the autocorrect.
Just in case, I used another reference picture. Made it somehow anime-ish with black outlines and lighter grey irises. The detailing was done by the system. When I took a glance again, it's just like an actual photo of a JAV actress with shiny black eyes and which drew you in and fresh youthful look; a barely legal loli--if you just look at the face.
Just as I was staring at her for a bit, I could see her blinking through the screen and her lips moved. Instead of speaking Japanese like her appearance, she let out a fluffy high-pitched voice like an Asian speaking fluent English.
"Umm...where am I? Wasn't I supposed to be dead? It's all dark. Is anyone there?"
I seriously jumped at this. Realizing that adding 'lively' eyes to her just made her look perfectly alive, I dismissed the fact what happened all the way was totally absurd, this outcome was beyond my wildest imaginations.
"Hello, big brother. Thanks a lot for bringing me back to life but I realize my body wasn't complete yet. I also lost all my memories aside from the fact I used to be dead. I will suspend myself until you feel you had finished. I had the feeling if I was awake, I'd be experiencing some hard-to-describe pain with all the alterations you made. Even now, I felt very strange; it's like my body wasn't my own or even a human's anymore.
I don't mind if you shape me as your ideal girl or anything if it makes you happy. As long you could restore my body, I'd be content. As of now, I could not see my face since there's no mirror but when I felt this silky smooth skin and plump cheeks, you really like younger girls aren't you?"
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"I'm not, it's just."
"Hey, please answer me. Judging by the lack of response, you probably hadn't possessed or plugged something which sends your voice into this world, but that's not important. Maybe if you fill me up with enough love, I could exit this dimension and go to your world. Maybe we could be together, but I don't know really.
Well then, I had said enough, feel free to take your time and work on me."
The girl returned to the same smiley expression she had when I just finished with her eyes.
Hmm..I'm not really sure, she talked a bit like a yandere. Do I really want to be with a girl like her? It's not like I would get any other girl judging by my lack of initiative.
Oh well, let's just leave that for later. I kinda feel bad when I saw her body in such an incomplete state.
Okay, let's work on her body line.
I made her neck shorter, with narrower shoulders and wider hips. Trying to get the perfect hourglass figure for her; trimming the excess fat on her arms, legs, and torso and adding a bit of muscle in place. I also made her breasts around H-cup, with big pink areola and perky nipples. For her genital area, fortunately, there's a rotate function and I could use the hand tool to spread her legs. I made her pubes clean shaven and gave her a vagina with intact shapes, like that of a virgin's.
Looking at her pussy, coupled with her innocent smiling face made me feel like a criminal, but with such voluptuous body--I could barely get away.
I nearly had my heart left me when her back area was still similar to a corpse beside the skin color; I took a deep breath fixing the thing and giving her a big, bouncy ass, with an incredible swaying motion when I slap it using the hand tool.
As the finishing touch, I have some thick to the feet and it was done. She was very similar to the JAV actress I used to whack my dinghy with. From the very moment, she looks more and more erotic, my penis was continually hard and it kept releasing pre-cum.
Sorry, but I wasn't done yet. With her spreading her legs with such smile like that, I couldn't hold myself back. I used the hand tool and move it back and forth on her massive tits.
The hand appeared again, crudely fondling the melons and making it shift shapes.
"Ahh! Ahhhnnn! So rough....yes..."
Huh?
Wait a minute, I hadn't even finished yet, but as soon as the hand tool fondled her tits, her face came to life right away and she made it like we're currently doing foreplay—well it's true to some extent.
"Not going to continue? You're such a tease."
She laughed cutely and with both her tender arms, she moved the hand and made it cup and fondle her breasts.
I kind of notice, those teasing and moaning sound and looked a bit fake.
Though all reason left me since I was totally mesmerized by the girl I molded completely from the scratch.
"Big brother, do you want me to lead you? It's okay. If it's you. I felt so loved when you reshaped my body—so, please—give it to me.."
I think I was about to cum right now. Even if we're separated by a computer screen, when such a cute girl with a lewd body teased me like that, I...
"...sigh, I hate it when you could not respond like this, big brother! Come over here!"
When she pulled the male hands over here, my whole body was forcefully pulled into the screen; the suction was strong it caused my body to float and enter starting from my hands. Even if my body were wider than the screen by itself, for some reason it went through easily.
Yet, the moment I arrived in the other dimension, I felt something incredibly sharp at my neck and my consciousness instantly blacked out.
I could not even feel my body at all when I regained my sight. I was floating in the same room, seeing my own body with a decapitated head and blood splashing all over. The JAV girl held a bladed weapon and the room was completely unlike the blank space where I 'designed' her body.
Fornication!
To think, my inability to read others had resulted in my downfall or more like, I got too obsessed since her body was tailored according to my strike zones, I lost all rational thinking.
As if the world was laughing at me, the words, covered in blood, did not say: you died—instead:
[Nice boat.]
..still had the time to make a meme.
Was this supposed to be the end? Would my pitiful life be concluded so abruptly?
I didn't care if I was still a virgin even though I'm already 25 years old. All that would assure me was I'm able to get to another world with cheat powers.
[Respawning in 23 seconds.]
No?
Huh?
So, was all of this an illusion after all?
Even so, those 23 seconds turn out to be the longest 23 seconds of my life so far, especially when I saw the horror reflected in the eyes that I created for her.
That's right. No matter how beautiful and innocent-looking she was, deep inside, she's still a monster.
In that short span of time, I saw her mutilating my corpse and shredding it to bits and pieces. Which made it unforgivable was, how she repaid my love and dedication to create a beauty from the scratch this way.
I was grateful she did not give me any sort of pain but what she had done needs to be repaid. At least, I wish to know her motive.
As 23 seconds had passed, I end up in a dark room. Waiting for a few moments, a 'ding' sound akin to the elevator beep rang in the surroundings.
In front of me was an automatic steel door, just like those of an elevator's and beyond it was just a place filled with white and nothing more. I waited for a good moment and nothing seems to change. The strange thing was, when I walked further and further from the door in this boundless area, the size of it still stayed the same and the distance didn't seem to widen.
Giving up, I finally stepped into the door and I found myself—back in my room, with my computer still not powered up.
Looking at the clock, apparently, I had gone back in time as well.
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