Snake Evolution System Chapter 21
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When Shivam enters in The Red Blood pool, He Felt like His consciousness is Started To Fading away, His body is Started Burning like He was Enters In Some kind of Boiling Oil, Which is melting his Whole Body, His scream Echoed In That Whole Place, Even Lisa Felt Pitty For him, He Gritted his Teeth And try to Subdue his Pain, but alas The pain Become unbearable as the passing Times.
"I Think I Am going to die here, It's Hurting Raphael, it's Fucking unbearable " He mumbled While crying in pain.
"You Have To Suffer Through this pain, in order to achieve a Greater Power, Just stick with your senses, This is only beginning as time pass it will be more difficult for you, think about why are you here? why are you Doing This?" Raphael responded to Shivam's pleading.
Meanwhile, something very unusual event started to occur in the whole surrounding and this type of event happening in various places, in the whole continent, on the Shivam's sides.
Suddenly A vortex Started to Appears in The Blood Pool, and the next second Shivam was sucked by that Vortex in the Depth of Blood Pool, he tried to resist but alas he was not that powerful to resist this kind of greater power, he started to lose his senses and fell in the depth of blood pool, on the outside of the pool, The Surrounding Weather started to Becomes Chilly, The Wind started blowing Very Fast, And The Whole Region started to surrounded By the Dark Clouds, Thousand's of lightning Could be Seen Striking in the Whole region. like The World is going to Crumble in Millions of pieces. Lisa Gulped The Mouthful of saliva and her Heart Sank While seeing this kind Of Phenomena, The Whole Ruins Started to Shaken Very violently.
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meanwhile, somewhere in the Ruins, a lady could be seen sitting on The Throne in Quite a Beautiful place, surrounded by millions of lights, she senses this kind of change in her surroundings and mumbles something"Its related to Region of the S Class, why all of sudden during The Ritual" She sighed And disappear from that place and next moment a mysterious Women Appears on the Ritual ground, This individual is wearing a black robe and Dragons embroidery could be seen on Her Robes, She was covering Her Face with a large hood, only Her Red lips are visible, This lady was the one who was sitting on the Throne in that beautiful ruins, Even Lisa couldn't able to senses her presence when She arrived, but she regains her senses and Kneels towards this mysterious women.
"I pay my respect to, Master of Memoir Ruins, it's my Honour to see you in person, I am Lisa The Guardian Spirit of The [S class] Region," She said those words while still kneeling on the ground.
"Get up Young lady and tell me What is happening with The blood Pool, And who lead to this kind of phenomenon," This female Hooded Lady Asked Lisa. Lisa Comfort herself and she open her mouth to reply to this lady.
"Master I was leading one of the candidates to Complete the Blood Rituals, and when He enters in the blood pool, he was sucked by Blood Pool in the Depth, and then this type of climatic incident started to occur in the whole region" She Replied in a respected manner.
"how much time is passed, Which Race That Beast Belong To," That woman Asked and the instant she appears beside where Lisa is standing. Lisa Gulped The Saliva.
"He entered in The blood pool about two Hours Ago, and He Was Looking Like a Giant Snake, but He Has Two unusual Big Horns on his Giant Head," She said to This lady While slightly sweating, Lisa was nervous while talking in the presence of this mysterious women.
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"A snake With Horn, Huh...Well, it's Quite unusual, Hmm...Let's wait And see What Is going On here, I hope He Still alive, it's already thousands of years passed that no one entered in the blood pool." she sighed While saying Those words.
Meanwhile, A Giant snake is Floating in The Depth in Blood Pool, Surrounded By infinite Space with a Red Misty aura, This Aura is Gradually started to enter the giant snake body like his body was feeding on this Aura.
Ding,
Unknown to his circumstances Shivam Felt nothing, He Was Surrounded By The Darkness, but He felt Quite Warm Here, Like He Belong To This Darkness.
Ugh...
What's going on?
I remember I entered, in the blood pool For completing the ritual and awakening The class. But then That vortex sucked me deep into the blood pool. and Then I just fell asleep and couldn't able to resist the desire to sleep.
Now, why does my body feels As Stiff as A Rock?
I try to open my eyes, but I can't. It is as if I was sealed in some kind of dark place.
It feels a bit Dark.
Wait, is this Darkness?
I am sealed in Darkness…
I try to exert my strength, and it surprisingly works I feel very good as if I was born a new or something.
I guess I slept quite well.
But what with the darkness? Did I cover myself on it before falling asleep?
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