Female Protagonist Is A Blackened Villainess (GL) Chapter 58
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Chapter 58: System Qian Qian’s Analysis
Translator & Editor: Nothingisit4me
Proofreader: Illya
(TLN: Thank you to the several donors who sponsored these 2 extra chapters!)
Her elder sister’s skin was so good!
This body seemed to be very different from before. The distribution of muscles was more uniform and the strength contained within it was extremely powerful. But sensations of touching it got better and better.
Originally, Zi Linglong wanted to be spoiled a few more times, such as asking for a kiss, etc. But before she could, an illusory shadow slowly appeared and solidified into a mysterious fairy.
So she was still there. She knew that after Long Shiyan died, the system left for a while.
“Yes, yes, is there anything that you needed?” System Qian Qian yawned deeply with a kind of yawn that displayed how much she wanted to fall asleep.
Long Shiyan frowned. “You’re tired?”
“What happened in this short amount of time?”
“Nothing!” Long Shiyan decided not to investigate the matter any further but instead asked, “I have a very important question, but since you seem muddleheaded, it’s better if you washed first.”
“Okay!” System Qian Qian examined the situation before suddenly taking off her clothes and dipping herself into the water.
Because of her curiosity, Zi Linglong couldn’t help but fish the system up and place her in her palm. “Are you jealous?” The reason why she asked this question was that this fairy was not the same as the previous fairy. This fairy grew up a lot.
Her body was fully developed, but still only the size of a palm.
“So it’s you!” System Qian Qian sighed. “We haven’t seen each other for a few months, but I didn’t expect your body to grow so well.”
“You too. In a blink of an eye, you became an adult.”
“My form is the same as before. I can change shape at any time. Since the host had changed her form, I had also changed, otherwise, I wouldn’t be able to help conceal her identity,” System Qian Qian replied.
Long Shiyan prevented them from continuing their dialogue. “Don’t talk about these matters first. I wanted to ask you why could Linglong control her berserk state? This is very unusual!”
“I already knew that you would ask this question.” System Qian Qian sighed with sorrow. “How should I put it? Ever since you died, this girl remained in her berserk state, but only in her mind. So her body had remained unchanged. During this time, because she missed you, she kept her consciousness, which completely prevented the Red Yin Demon Body from surfacing.”
“Later, when she was inadvertently went berserk, she discovered that she could control this berserk state. As a result, she became like this. Anyway, this is a good thing, and there is no need to worry about her going berserk and not recognizing friend from foe. Your efforts have borne fruit.”
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“Exactly!” Zi Linglong held her elder sister’s hands tightly. “In the future, I can safely stay next to my sister without worrying about my constitution.”
She wasn’t afraid of her unusual body?
How could that be!?
Zi Linglong was extremely scared of the things she didn’t know about her body. Every time she went berserk, she was forced to hurt her elder sister. She became anxious about it on a regular basis. She was worried that she would one day cause her elder sister’s death.
From when she was small to large, her strong elder sister had always watched over her in case she went berserk. Her elder sister gave her a sense of security, and she wished to do the same for her elder sister.
Therefore, she could follow her elder sister at ease, but she still felt terrified from time to time.
Now that she had returned to normal, she felt completely reassured as she could also stay closer to her sister.
“If this is the case, then will there be any side effects?” The fact that this was so different from the original plot was Long Shiyan’s most worrying issue. In the original work, Zi Linglong had devoured the powerful Red Godly Stone to fully control her berserk state and freely use the power of the Red Yin Demon Star.
In the end, she seized the will of the God of Creation and devoured the God of Creation’s power. Because of this, Long Aotian could not win against her. Even the mysterious “old man”, who saved Long Aotian, seemed incapable of stopping her. Eventually, the book ended with their disappearance.
But since Zi Linglong could control her berserk state right now, Long Shiyan was worried about how far they had diverged from the original plot.
People were often most afraid of the unknown. When she discovered that Zi Linglong could not be controlled by her, she became extremely worried about the bad things that may occur in the future.
Long Shiyan was not worried about how Zi Linglong may potentially hurt her; she was concerned about the butterfly effect.
“Don’t worry, there won’t be any repercussions.” System Qian Qian dispelled her doubts. “In the future, I will help her find the Red Godly Stone right away so she could refine her constitution.”
The Red Godly Stone. Zi Linglong remembered hearing about this thing, but this was the first time she heard them talking about her body’s secrets right in front of her.
Her elder sister and the fairy seemed to have a particular understanding of her physique.
“Basically, it’s a fine item indeed.” Long Shiyan suddenly smiled, although her smile was shallow, her stiff and indifferent facial expression was colder than usual. The discrepancy between her small appearance and adult-like expression was great.
“Currently, Zi Linglong’s qi circulation is great and very smooth sailing. I’m not sure about how many times better she is than you in qi circulation. Her present mentality is also good. With your help, she doesn’t have any of her original darkness, and after you died, her willpower has become very firm. At this point, I think it is impossible for the God of Creation or any other thing to brainwash her. What you have to focus on right now is how to solve the school’s crisis,” System Qian Qian said.
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Long Shiyan was glad, and her words seemed more relaxed than usual. “This should be no problem for you. While you go solve the problem, I will protect the school.”
System Qian Qian wanted to say something, but she chose not to say it. Instead, she said, “The school must be protected! As for ‘that person,’ his threat is no longer noteworthy. If you suppress him this time, he might never grow in strength.”
“As long as we can keep him in control, will his abilities become equal to an ordinary person’s?” Long Shiyan’s eyes brightened. She had to say that this was a nice surprise. If the enemy she had always feared could be labeled as an ordinary person, then there would no longer be any
She would also complete her mission.
“That’s not necessarily wrong.” System Qian Qian had a complex expression across her face. “But you should still pay more attention to the school. If the number one school in the continent can’t establish its reputation, then the world will be thrown into chaos. On the other hand, if you can properly do that, then there will be many benefits for you.”
“I already know.” Long Shiyan smiled weakly as she also realized what the system explained. If she could protect the number one school in the continent, then she might be able to wield the school’s authority. Her power would become so great that even if the Saints return, they would no longer be able to stop her.
Zi Linglong did not speak. She cleverly remained silent as she sat beside them, listening to their strange conversation. In this situation, she felt as if she had returned to being a child while they were acting like adults, talking about things that she did not understand.
However, even as she grew up, she still didn’t know much. On the other hand, she could guess a thing or two. Although she didn’t know what Long Shiyan and System Qian Qian were planning, she understood that this was all for their sake.
In fact, at this point, Long Shiyan already had no intention of concealing anything from Zi Linglong. She discreetly brought the conversation with the system to a halt. After all, she wanted to slowly discuss with System Qian Qian in front of her so Zi Linglong could prepare herself until the time was ripe to tell her everything.
After all, there had been no meaning in hiding everything from Zi Linglong.
Long Shiyan asked, “Who are the twenty-four female harem members who have already broken free from becoming captured?”
System Qian Qian did not reply. Instead, a screen popped up in front of Long Shiyan, displaying the names of the female harem members:
Long Yuqing Long Shiyan Yu Qingrou Zi Linglong Yu Shu Nangong Lingli Ling Qingwu
8 and 9. Nikaela and Shirley
Sharon Alto
11 and 12. The unfaithful girl and the admirer
Dragon race Shuang Yu Library Manager Wenyu Elven Princess Ollie Elven Queen
17 and 18. The twin cat beastwomen
19 and 20. The Long Family’s two hidden guards
A nine-tailed fox that could transform. Ice and Snow Goddess The Radiant Saintess The Dark Goddess
The recent developments of those twenty-four female harem members were visible to Long Shiyan. With this, she understood the next course of action. She glanced at Zi Linglong and noticed that she was staring at the screen with curiosity. Because she couldn’t understand Chinese characters, she simply stared blankly. She couldn’t help but try poking at it, but her finger completely passed through the screen. When she noticed Long Shiyan’s gaze, she timidly withdrew and shrunk down.
She sat down properly like an obedient child and didn’t dare to fiddle with it any longer.
She was a very well-behaved baby, or at least she tried hypnotizing herself to think so.
“This is the result of the host’s plan. Because of her, Long Aotian could not capture these women. I have to admit that the host has saved their lives while also indirectly helping Long Aotian! Therefore, the host must continue to work hard.” System Qian Qian paused and said, “Changing the fate of others is a very dishonorable thing to do, but your actions are the most righteous because you are saving the world, and therefore, becoming the world’s true guardian.” Those people who tried acting dignified yet could only spill bullcrap can’t compare to you.
She did not say that last sentence out loud.
Long Shiyan did not care about being a guardian of the world since she was still being suppressed by the will of the world!
“Right,” System Qian Qian seemed to recall something. “Although Zi Linglong can now control her body even after becoming berserk, you still shouldn’t allow her to use it freely. You must keep this in mind; this skill should only be used in life-or-death situations.”
“Linglong, you should bear Qian Qian’s words in mind; it is very important. So never become arrogant.” Long Shiyan parted from Zi Linglong’s embrace and walked out of the bath.
The time for rest was over; now she had to start moving.
“I know, Elder sister.” Zi Linglong stood up, took System Qian Qian, and followed Long Shiyan’s lead.
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