《Erden : Tale of a Land Forgotten》35 Age Eleven - The Day the Land Trembled part 4
Advertisement
At a wide, grassy plain laid out in front of a massive stone wall—a strong wind drowned out the sounds of tough a battle nearing its end. Amidst frosty steel meeting with thick, scaly leather, the sound of a high-pitched whir from the use of tremendous mana rang out.
“Hah...” Drops of red rolled down a stern-looking man's forehead as he was currently engaged with a massive mana beast. The beast was a size larger than the rock drake Urie and company encountered.
Aside from the sharp protrusions decorating its tough hide, four powerful limbs made the ground shudder; and the sight of the two large, distinct horns on its head drew cold sweat from the soldiers surrounding it.
“Take it down!” The stern-looking man commanded, and a mixed offense of arrows and magic rained on the beast from their encircling formation. When it was all over, the beast's hide was littered with wounds both old and fresh. It collapsed soon after and took its last few breaths with seemingly relieved grunts.
The stern-looking man unstrapped what remained of his torn red cloak and made a heavy thud as it landed on the ground. The red cloak was apparel used not to shield from the wind and rain but from jaws coming to latch onto him from behind. Seeing as how less than half of the cloth remained, the mouth that had caught him off guard was bigger than the usual.
His golden eyes shifted from his fallen quarry to a distance about half a kilometer away. There was an ongoing conflict with another massive mana beast of a similar appearance. He stood in place as he felt no need to provide assistance—the beast was taken down within a few moments.
Gideon Loeth stared at the person who had the primary role in bringing down the beast—a proud-looking man with black hair, a short stature, and chestnut-amber eyes. A heavy Warhammer with a handle as tall as he rested on his shoulder.
Advertisement
“Ya, Gideon, looks like you've had a hard time!” the short-statured man chortled before whistling with awe at the Elder Bihorn that Gideon had handled.
They had initially been dealing with one Elder Bihorn but another had suddenly rushed out from Arinndra's Forest—abducting the ashen-haired commander by his cape. The short-statured man planned to deal with first one quickly and help, but by the time they had finished, Gideon had already dealt with it almost by himself.
“Hah... It was on its death throes,” Gideon replied. “How have you fared on your end?”
“Took awhile but we brought it down,” the man scoffed. “I hate to admit it, but your boys did half of the work. How about giving one of em' to me, eh?” Pointing to two young men bearing heavy semblance to Gideon, the short-statured man displayed a mischievous grin. Without their help, they couldn't have taken down the Elder Bihorn in the amount of time they did.
“Ya, what's wrong? You look grim,” he spoke without much thought. Had Gideon taken his words seriously?
Gideon shook his head, indicating he was addressing a different matter, “Undine is unsettled. I'm trying to talk to her but she's keeping silent.”
“That reminds me—Gnomus was making a ruckus as well, though I was too busy with the Elder Bihorn to pay attention.”
“Something's going on.”
Undine had always been with Gideon. She appeared the day he awakened his mana seed and ever since, had taught him how to handle his potentially harmful aptitude for mana and improve his use of magic. Undine's advice was invaluable.
Gideon heeded her every word as they were spoken with genuine care towards his well-being, as well as that of those around him. That was why he couldn't refuse any request she had of him. One of which included a request to pick up a little girl from the outskirts of Arinndra's Forest.
Advertisement
At the moment, Gideon felt ill at ease at the silence of the greater water spirit. Was she away?
A sudden vicious trembling of the ground took him out of his musing, “Is there another mana beast!?” he quickly assumed a battle stance.
The short-statured man beside Gideon had the same reaction. Everyone turned their heads in the direction of Arinndra's Forest. The ground continued to quake but there was still no sign of anything approaching.
“Y-Ya, what was that!?” the short-statured man stuttered. “Are these the footsteps of some kind of beast?”
“No. It doesn't seem to be...” Gideon had a hunch that this was no mere shaking from a large creature, and he was right. The earthquake was felt by all who had their feet rooted on the ground.
From the magic creatures of Arinndra's Forest to the two children taking shelter within a mysterious room; this shaking was the prologue to an event that would come to pass in a few years' time.
Advertisement
- In Serial54 Chapters
Truth Seeker [OLD VERSION]
The rewrite for this story has been posted as Mark of Time.
8 250 - In Serial12 Chapters
MOTH MOUND
Eight kids with nuclear abilities get abducted from their everyday lives and find themselves in a shady government facility nicknamed 'The Moth Mound.'
8 137 - In Serial223 Chapters
Birth of an AntiHero
AntiHero's FIRST REWRITE IN THE WORKS - thanks!! :] EDIT 2/28/22 - sorry, health problems right now, but I will post after rewriting the first 80-90,000 words or so and start fresh from there! Expect the change to be uploaded before summer! So long as I can keep using my hands, that is~! ^_^ X] This story will indeed get fleshed out as my vision improves for the better. But I feel the need to emphasize that a lot of parts are written in improvised comic book format as my primary writing style, and this first book is actually the entry point and starting novel for an entire very vast series I am in the works of developing. Many side characters here will eventually be main characters with there own stories; long or short. But this one particularly will be focused and centralized around Noel. Because of this, I do plan to leave the introduction for side characters as still having a special flow for readers to witness a tad of their background, so keep that in mind after my 'obviously many' rewrites from now and going into the future! Sorry for the troubles! I will improve on my style and implementation of the story!(Although I DO plan to keep parts as 'play style' or rather, comic book style, since I find it easier for certain dialogue instances as well as the fact that the novel is inspired by that 'feeling' you get while reading comic books. But my style is still evolving, you were warned!) Thank you! - Noel Tyler Malierano. He's the youngest 'son' to receive approval from 'The Malierano Family': A Criminal Organization of hitmen and hitwomen that specialize in killing, even maintaining success within a vastly superpowered society. Noel finally manages to complete his training as the newest 'Elite' killer his family created...but, there's just one problem - He doesn't want to kill! Come along and delve into a society of conflicting morals through the eyes of a boy, desperately searching for a new path to follow. Can he even manage to free himself from his father's engrained teachings and ideals? Conversely, will killing prove a lot more difficult to ignore? --- --> Thank you very much for reading! It would be helpful for me if you all consider leaving me a comment or an inbox suggestion, a review or even a full rating wherever AND whenever you believe I need to improve on anything or if something I wrote irked you! I appreciate EVERYONE that comes to read my story, however I DO want to improve my work as a writer. I hope all of you who don't like my work will let me know somehow, so I can edit and IMPROVE my story as a whole! Thank you everyone for your time! --- JUST TO NOTE!! When a character has a cultural name like, say, a Japanese or Russian name, that is because that character IS Japanese or Russian! They don't have to be FULL of one ethnicity either - sometimes they will be mixed. This story mainly takes place on an artificial continent where all countries have sent over their respective talents, meaning characters of ALL cultures and ethnic backgrounds will show hints of that in their names. Please don't assume I'm just randomly naming characters names that don't match them. And feel free to talk to me about whatever in my story troubles you - no matter how small! I love to improve. ^-^ X] --- Just to note: Characters will slowly grow as time passes. Slow pace. THANKS for reading! Enjoy! :] --- Decided to post 2 chapters every Tuesday and Friday instead of taking a small break, but I MAY upload once in a while on different days, such as Sundays, in addition to those two. :]
8 627 - In Serial48 Chapters
Malevolent
Within a generation, the sky, once blue, bled a deep scarlet. Feral beasts roamed the lands and mutated men ravaged civilisations. They carved destruction in their wake. The spawning of new idols worshiped by cultists marked a terrible turn. Finally, a crippling insanity plagued the very few survivors left. Written in the journals of antiquity, lost in time, a scholar wrote: ‘This horrific cataclysm that we face was brought about by humans…’ However, these events are long gone. A longstanding peace has descended to Orbis. Yet, to spite the efforts of the saviours of yore, a progenitor of this calamity has been invited back by ritual. It seeks the return of these very ancient events. A silent peril is on the way.
8 84 - In Serial21 Chapters
Armageddon: A New World
Black doors, the doors of hell some would call it! They appeared from nowhere, from emptiness of the starry nightDescended on to the world changing it for ever.The alien doors that hovered above us struck fear to the hearts of many.But some did not cover, they rose, they chose to fight and so they entered!Into the world beyond the door, enters a young boy, in search of someone, in order to get back what was lost.
8 228 - In Serial32 Chapters
I died reincarnated and died again
Kreon a young programmer dies and gets reincarnated into another world, but right after reincarnating he died again and became a ghost. After that his adventures as a ghost starts. Discontinued for now.
8 140

