《TWIG - The System Can't Save Me, But It Can't Stop Me Either [a gamelit-portal-fantasy-poem by eric river]》Chapter 016 - So even evil gods can bleed, I guess that's good to know...
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CHAPTER SIXTEEN
So even evil gods can bleed, I guess that's good to know...
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Twig stood up and hugged his mother just for a moment
He was starting to get what the healer might have meant
“Yes, the System told me I should go now, silently
I wish I could tell you more, but I should go quickly”
System Message
Warning, do not mention what the System has to say
You must share your orders in a slightly more vague way
Any further threats to this timeline must be erased
Go now, while the source of this anomaly is traced
Twig’s face paled as he read his new message quietly
Michael had a feeling why, and he felt uneasy
“Quickly boy, get out of here before you doom us all
The System is no fairy tale, and you will heed it's call”
Twig’s father was solemn and he nodded his big head
“Listen carefully to what the town healer has said
Legends tell of System Messages preceding doom
What you read today must never ever leave this room”
Stories weren’t uncommon among veteran heroes
But the System Message myths were of the worst of those
No one dared to guess what lay beyond the realm of gods
Even guardians had never dared to test their odds
Achievement: This is Bad
I don’t know how this all went so wrong, but then, it's you
Whatever that message said, do what it tells you to
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I can’t risk you screwing everything up yet again
Bring harm to that town and you’ll wish you had died back then
Twig was almost happy to see such a normal screen
“My old guardian is back, although he’s still so mean!”
“That cruel god is still a bother to you, you poor boy?
Is torturing the innocent something gods should enjoy?!”
His mother hadn’t heard him complain of the god for years
She remembered well his messages brought him to tears
But he’d simply chosen to ignore them while he trained
Even when the cruel relentless words left his mind strained
“Yes, he never left me, but he can’t hurt me again
I will train until I have the strength of fifty men
So I’ll leave you now, and forge a unique destiny
Even gods and curses aren’t enough to frighten me”
Achievement: Nonsense
Not if I can help it, I’ll make you the weakest thing
I’ll make you so weak that you could die to anything
You’ll be slower than the slowest slug upon the ground
Now let’s figure out how to move these numbers around...
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Achievement: ...
What the heck is all this garbage, where did your stats go?!
Aren’t there only supposed to be six options or so?
Maybe it’s a glitch caused by your own incompetence
Let’s see if I can lower these, is this one defence?
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System Message
Warning, further infiltration into this blue box
May result in a low scale temporal paradox
Further attempts to alter this artificially
Will be seen as a willful act of hostility
Achievement: OUCH!!!
Holy smokes, that message hurt, it’s not messing around
Any more of that might just have put me in the ground
I mean, as your god and guardian, I’m still in charge
But the damage to your system seems to be quite large
Twig just watched in silence as the System warned his god
If he wasn't so scared he felt he might want to applaud
Such great powers were conversing in his status screen
Still he failed to understand what half of it might mean
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