《Loki’s Successor System 》Chapter 24: My first kiss
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Flint looked at Jin, "Go get 'er, Cowboy!"
"I-I don't know…how to dance," he stuttered, still sitting at the table whilst Alura stood there, with a hand out for him to grab.
"Jin," called Sylvia, peering at Jin with a smile on her face.
He turned his head to face her, "Sylvia?"
"Remember what I told you about being a big baby? Come on," she winked, "Go get her…"
Having heard Sylvia; Jin's guts expanded. He held Alura's hand; and she quickly pulled him up to his feet.
She stood in front of him, her face reddening. Looking down at her, he gulped down the air in his mouth as she held both his sweaty hands.
"Relax, Jin," she cooed, smiling lovingly.
He heaved, "Okay…"
She then released his hands; and continued to peer up at him. To him, she truly was attractive. Slowly, he leered down at her waist, and started to become even more aroused in the act.
'Come on, pinky the pipe; chill!'
Her hips were curvaceous; and the grey yoga pants she had been wearing allowed him to see this clearly.
She looked down at her own waist as well, "Go on," she grinned, "I'm sure you know that you're supposed to hold there…"
Jin then deliberately carried his hands to her waist. His shaking hands inched closer. Still, her waist hadn't been ahold by him. His trembling hands hovered over her lower body, not drawing closer.
She slowly looked up at him, "What's wrong? Just go ahead…"
He had always been meaning to touch a woman's body since he had become curious about it in his recent teenage years. But it always was a mere pipe dream to him.
He placed his hands on Alura's waist, and could already feel her seducing warmth. And boy did it feel heavenly!
As he brought her body closer to his; his heart beastly throbbed.
Then, clearly on purpose, she deliberately leaned her chest against his. Her breasts were upon his body, and he could feel her heartbeat throbbing like his own.
They shared a heart-beat, as a hand edged away from a single side of Alura's waist. She slowly looked up at him, as he tangled his fingers in a hand of hers.
They then both raised the hand where both their fingers were gently laced. They raised their connected hands to the level of their colliding chests.
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People in the bar had been silenced by the scene before them. They were so drunk that they could not focus on what they were seeing entirely—yet they watched on.
Alura and Jin were cheek upon cheek; chest on chest, hand in hand. Both their faces were tinged as they acknowledged each other's warmth.
The DJ suddenly put on a romantic song for them; and it was now that Jin felt like he was actually in love with this woman who had only just met.
The sweet music in the background lingered, as they danced in a swaying motion. Jin kept pushing her away from his body while keeping ahold of her hand as if he had been rolling out toilet paper.
Then, he would pull her back in his arms again in a spinning motion in flow with the melody. He had been brimming with ecstasy right then, and at that moment.
'Am I…'
'Am I in love? Can't be right?'
He spun her around.
'Is that what it feels like to be in love with someone. Are we going to be a thing?'
He brought her back in his embracing arms.
'Is she feeling what I'm feeling? Or is my sudden obsession for her unrequited?'
He gently pushed her away from his body while holding her hand.
'I feel like kissing her right now. But I'm scared. I've never kissed someone before. I don't know how to do it.'
'My heart is raging; and for some reason, it hurts—yet feel so good at the same time…'
'It definitely isn't love—I don't know this girl. What is this feeling!'
He brought her back into his arms again.
'I could do this forever!'
***
After Jin and Alura had grown exhausted from a few minutes of dancing, they stopped with their bodies still colliding and delivering warmth.
Everyone immediately rose up from their seats, and started clapping their hands loudly, applauding the magnificence their eyes had unbiddenly feasted upon.
Flint whistled, "That was amazing!"
Sylvia smiled at them, "And Jin said he couldn't dance…"
Both Alura and Jin then walked back up to the table where Flint and Sylvia were. They both had smiles stretched across their crimonsed faces.
"You guys were like light itself out there," complimented Flint.
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"Thanks," Jin smiled.
"Are you guys gonna sit here or…"
Alura held Jin's hand, and looked at him, "Not yet. We'll be back in a minute. We're going outside for a sec…"
Jin looked down at her, "We are?"
"Yes," she giggled, "We are…"
Sylvia raised her brows at the same time as a smug look took Flint's face.
"Okay, then we'll leave you two to it," said Flint, smirking widely.
"We'll be back soon…"
Jin was taken outside of the bar, and to yet another alley; where two walls opposite each other were close.
As soon as they had left the bar, even Jin, as drunk as he was, could tell how late it had become. It was still light outside, but it was clear that dawn was beginning to say its temporary good-byes.
Sweat began to trickle down Jin's face, "Alura?"
With a seductive expression on her countenance, she drew closer to him, "What?" she pursed her lips, "I'm not gonna bite…"
Jin edged away, drawing closer to the wall behind him as she closed in, "What are you going to do?"
She walked closer, "Nothing…much…"
'Is she going to kiss me?'
He shifted on his feet, "Uhm…"
"I really, really," her tone stretched, "like you, Jin…"
Jin's back began to lean against the wall, "I…like you too but—"
She placed a finger upon his lips, "Shhhh…"
His back was pressing against the wall as she pushed her face closer to his. He quickly turned his head away from her. But then, she held his chin and pulled it to face her again.
"Jin, I don't think you understand," she pushed her breasts against his chest.
He grimaced, "What don't I understand?"
"You clearly don't understand," she placed both her hands on his face, "that," she quickly bit her lips, "I want you…"
Jin felt as if his heart had exploded in his chest. He looked down at her as his heart painfully throbbed, and he promptly started to get aroused.
"Kiss me, Jin…"
Jin couldn't move; and so, she brought her lips closer to his. Her tempting red lips were the embodiment of seduction for Jin.
It definitely wasn't love. So what was it?
'Is this really happening?'
She closed her eyes, "Kiss me…"
Inhaling her sweet perfume, Jin felt obligated to kiss her now that she forced herself upon him.
'I…can't…'
His eyelids drooped.
'Hold out…'
He then slowly carried his lips towards hers. He carried it closer and closer; his head shuddering nervously. Their lips moved towards each other until they touched each other.
Their twisting lips began to embrace each other lovingly. Jin closed his eyes as he shared saliva with her. As he shared his nervous breath with her.
While kissing her, he felt her tongue slip right into his mouth; and he quickly opened his eyes again in shock.
And as her tongue wiggled and fluttered in his mouth, he simply closed his eyes again, and gave her his tongue.
He continued to kiss her as their heads danced in a slow motion. He could hear their lip-smacking, sucking and their tongues moving about in each other's mouths.
It was disgustingly beautiful.
To him, Alura's mouth smelt and tasted like cherries when it should clearly be tasting like alcohol.
[Spell Detected]
[+2 Resistance]
Jin peeked at the screen grimacingly.
'Spell?'
Having felt a halt to his lips' motion, Alura moved her head away from his and looked him in the eyes, "You liked it?"
Rubescent, Jin nodded his head in approval and they continued gently kissing each other with closed eyes.
The screen disappeared when he had shifted his attention.
They only stopped when Alura heard something coming from behind them.
When she had turned around, she saw Sylvia walking away.
"Sylvia," she called.
Sylvia, with her face becoming tinged, turned around and peered at her, "What?"
Alura grinned, "Wanna join us?"
She raised a middle finger, "I'm going to the bathroom, Flint forced me into drinking, and I need to get the taste out of my mouth…"
She walked away.
Jin then broke away from Alura.
She looked at him, "You're a natural…"
He scratched his head, "Thanks…"
She smiled, "Meet me inside again when you're ready, alright?"
"Yeah, okay…" he drawled; with his eyes remaining calmly slit.
Alura walked away, leaving him there.
With his back still against the wall, he then dragged his body down on it until he was in a sitting position.
He sat with his hands on his knees, his eyelids drooped in serenity.
'So this,' he loudly exhaled, 'was my first kiss…"
He closed both his eyes.
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