The Abandoned Hunter Chapter 21
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[CONGRATULATION]
You have found the secret artifact - THE BLOOD SWORD.
Characteristics cannot be determined. Please activate the system.
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"This system, always gives one good news and one bad news. Buy one get one free offer!!! Sigh, but now how do I activate the system?"
Jay was now frustrated.
"Tsk, if I'm not wrong the system should have been activated by now! Why hasn't it been activated?"
He was engulfed in rage and started to swing the The Blood Sword with all his vigour.
He was accusing the system to be faulty when he didn't even notice that he himself was not perfect.
"Well, I did receive the reward then why hasn't he system working? Lemme call it out..."
He started to call out to the system after thinking about it for a moment.
"System Open!"
And the moment he said that, the blue coloured system appeared out of thin air.
Previously whenever he looked at the texts, they were either Black Coloured or White but now the texts were Red coloured.
Jay was quite happy when the system responded to him, at least that's what he felt but the moment he took a look at the notification he exited his dream world.
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[ERROR] - Conditions not met to retrieve the rewards.
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"..."
The big sword that he was holding suddenly fell on the ground. Basically he let it fall.
"Are you for real? You are supposed to help me and give me good news but every time I see you the only thing I get is bad news!!!"
His face was red due to anger and it was obvious to be angry since he couldn't get anything even after doing many things.
"Damn, there's no use in blaming the system. It's my luck that is bad."
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Jay covered his face with his hands and squat down for few minutes.
Then he suddenly stood up and had a dedicated look.
"Now the only thing that I can rely is on this system. I have to learn the method to use it and everything about it."
After deciding that Jay called out to the system once again.
"System..."
The system appeared yet again and was just in front of him.
He calmly took a look at the system which was showing 2 things at present.
One of them was about the mission at hand and the other one was about the error.
He opened his mouth after taking a deep breathe and said, "System, show the requirements to claim the rewards."
2 minutes passed by and still there was no response.
"..."
"Damn, even this doesn't work? Then what else can I do to make the system work?"
Jay started thinking hard. He kept on gazing at the system and thinking and while he was doing that he suddenly noticed a small button like apparatus present in the system.
"Eh? What's that?"
He moved his hand towards it and immediately pressed it.
Then suddenly a list of options appeared.
"Ye... Ye.. YES!!!!!"
He screamed with joy.
"The Menus option!!! It has many othe options, good! I got the basic way to use it. But how come I didn't notice it before?"
He cursed himself for not being able to discover it earlier. But regardless of that now he wanted to discover other things about the system.
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