The Abandoned Hunter Chapter 16
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"..."
"What the fu*k!!!? Can't you let me be happy even for a minute?"
Jay shouted at the top of his voice and on hearing this the nurse from the next room came dashing in and vent out anger in Jee.
"Haha, okay sorry I won't shout again."
"You better not!" (Nurse)
"..."
"Damn, now I'm worried, even if today is the best day of my life, it might become my last day if I don't complete this mission." *thinking*
And when he was thinking this, he noticed something.
"Hmm, it's not as if this system is not working. There is improvement in the sleeping hours."
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#2 - Sleep 24 hours. [18/24]
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"Previously it was 16/24 and now it's 18/24. If my memory serves right then I have indeed slept for 2 hours and that's why it improved." *thinking*
"Hmm... then why isn't the drinking water one increasing?"
Jay started to think hard about the method for completing the mission.
AFTER 10 MINUTES...
"Sigh, I can't find any clue to compel eye the #1"
Then suddenly he got an idea.
"Well, I can complete the first one later, before that lemme complete the second and third missions."
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#2 - Sleep 24 hours. [18/24]
#3 - Eat Medicines. [2/8]
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"Okay so I have to eat 6 more medicine to complete the third mission."
And in order to complete the missions quickly, he became careless.
He took out 6 pills from the packet and swallowed them immediately.
"Good... now let's see."
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#2 - Sleep 24 hours. [18/24]
#3 - Eat Medicines. [8/8]
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"Nice!!! So that's what happened when we complete a miss...miss...mission..."
"Wh-what's happening? My eyes are getting blurry and my head is paining... my body feels heavy...."
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"Zzzzz... Zzzzz..."
Then he suddenly fell asleep on the bed. He ate 6 sleeping pills directly which were supposed to be taken at night.
1 sleeping pill is enough to make anyone sleep for 4 hours while rendering him completely unconscious. Jay took 6 pills and that would make him unconscious for 24 hours!
And the expected happened but due to his extraordinary body the effect of the pills was a bit less.
AFTER 20 HOURS AND SOME MINUTES...
"Waaa... that was a nice nap. I have never felt so refreshed. But for some reason I'm hella sleepy. It's as if I will fall asleep any moment!"
And while he was thinking this, something starting ringing and making sound.
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[WARNING] - Less Than 30 Minutes Left.
[MISSION(S)]
#1 - Drink 2 glasses of Water. [0/2]
#2 - Sleep 24 hours. [24/24]
#3 - Eat Medicines. [8/8]
[TIME LEFT] - 00:29:59
[REWARD(S)] - Complete Activation Of The System.
[NOTE] - Death Upon Failure.
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Jay Down suddenly grabbed his head while trying to cover his ears.
"What is this God Damn noise!!? Be quiet! STOP!"
And as soon as he told 'STOP' the System stopped ringing and the warning disappeared.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Hey all, I'm not sure if I'm making any mistakes so please leave a comment. And do vote PS.
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