《Warrior’s Promise》Warrior's Promise
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Bang!
A short time had passed. Su Mo stopped as he stumbled into the First Time Divine Hall.
"It is really true!" Su Mo opened his glistening eyes.
A while ago, he had guarded his mind and was oblivious to the external surroundings. He focused on his flying and reached the First Time Divine Hall.
Immediately, Su Mo heaved a long breath and strode into the Divine Hall.
As he entered the hall, his eyes blurred from the glare of the lights. There was no one around, nor any non-living things.
"Where are the people?" Su Mo was puzzled. He stood still to scrutinise his surroundings.
He had made no discovery. Instead he had found that the place was filled with an amazing aura of righteousness.
No!
It was no righteousness, they were rules. The rules of heaven and earth, also known as the Great Rules.
"Where the Rules of Time govern, I wonder if there will be any changes?" Su Mo wondered.
It was said that within the Thirty-Three Holy Divine Halls, there existed a powerful ability to reverse time.
This might have been exaggerated. However Su Mo believed it could be done.
"With the flow of time, one can turn back time!" Su Mo muttered to himself. Subsequently, he gradually sat down in a cross-legged fashion.
His mental perceptivity floated around to having a good sense of the rules of space and time.
Rules surpassed righteousness under the Great Rules. It would be almost impossible to be enlightened.
However, circumstances left him with no choice. Su Mo focused on meditating to seek enlightenment. He tried to sense the transformation brought about by the rules of time.
"Time… rules…control…changes…!"
Su Mo thought about it over and over.
He had figured that the numerous rules had already formed an independent world around him such that he had lost connection with the real world.
Within the space, time had been reconstructed, and became very precise.
It was as if time had become tangible and he could grab hold of time within his palms.
Such a feeling was amazing and unable to be described in words.
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"I understand finally. The Rules of Time in this place are not meant for our enlightenment. They are the fixed rules and need to be controlled. Only then can one endearvour to control the rules of this place!"
Su Mo reckoned that this was as if there was an illusory object that had been condensed. He would need to just grab the object.
In other words, as long as he had control on the rules, he would have the ability to control the time in this place.
Of course, such an ability only existed in this place. The enlightenment he had gained in the outside world was useless in this regard.
Su Mo attempted to grab the rules, not by using his hands, but by using his mind power to control.
His mind power had expanded and enveloped the entire space.
Feel the rules… get close to the rules… control the rules!
Su Mo spent almost an hour on achieving the outcome.
Swoosh!
Su Mo opened his eyes. They twinkled. He had succeeded.
"This is..?"
Seeing what lay in front of him, Su Mo was stunned. Because at this moment, there were transformational changes right before his eyes.
The initial translucent light shadows within the First First Time Divine Hall dissipated. It was now clean and clear. There was a vast palace.
At this point in time, there were only several people in the palace. They either stood still, or sat cross-legged. All were in an enlightened state.
As for the other folks, they had obviously entered into the Second Time Divine Hall.
Within the chambers in the First Time Divine Hall, there lay a couple of skeletons on the floor. They were decomposed and no one knew how long they had existed.
"Take charge of time!"
Su Mo was not bothered by any of this. He had already achieved enlightenment.
Once he was able to take charge to the Rules of Time within the First Time Divine Hall, he would be able to control the time within this place.
However he was unsure as to the span and duration of his control.
He flipped his palm and out came a remnant of an unused spiritual senses. He threw it outside the Divine Hall.
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The spiritual stone flew out of the palace door and had a free fall downwards. Within half a breath it had reached the ground.
At this moment, Su Mo was struck by an idea. He would like to try to manipulate the force of the rules within the Divine Hall.
Subsequently, Su Mo heard clearly that whilst the velocity of the descending spiritual stone was decreasing at an alarming rate. It became excruciatingly slow.
Peng!
It took around three breaths for the spiritual stone to land in front of the palace door. It was affixed to the ground by the Empty Space Energy.
"Around six times!" Su Mo was delightfully. He was able to control the flow of time within the First Divine Hall. Through his manipulation, he was able to adjust time by six times.
In other words, when he remained in the Divine Hall for six days, it was merely a day in the outside world.
"What an amazing Rule of Time!" Su Mo was impressed. However, he discovered that he had managed to manipulate time with a radius of half a yard.
The other folks within the palace remained unaffected.
"With such a speedy time flow, six days inside the palace is equivalent to one day in the outside world. This is a brilliant place for practice and cultivation!" Su Mo was elated and excited.
He had been unable to find the time to practise and develop his skills further. That had caused his lag in learning a lot of ultimate supreme skills.
However, when he was there, he would be able to use the time difference to catch up on his skills development.
He took a few deep breaths. Su Mo did not remain at the First Divine Hall for too long a time. He headed towards the Second Divine Hall.
The Second Divine Hall was even more intriguing than the First Divine Hall. He had wanted to explore further.
At one end of the Divine Hall, there was a wide and spacious passage way. It was formed by similar energy of the Empty Space. The force travelled directly to the Second Divine Hall.
The passageway was only several yards in length. Su Mo arrived at the door of the Second Divine Hall by following the passageway.
Within the Second Divine Hall, it was pitch black darkness. He could make out nothing in the hall.
Swoosh!
Su Mo lost no time in entering the Second Divine Hall.
Similar to the experience in the First Divine Hall, he came into an illusory space. Lights twirled around him and caused him to lose his bearings and sense of direction.
Without hesitation, Su Mo applied the same method to make sense of the Rules of Time, and made an attempt to control the rules of time.
There were some differences in the rules of time within the Second Divine Hall. He struggled for an additional half hour to resolve it.
However, the rules of time within the Second Divine Hall were vastly different. Time flowed very slowly. It was retarded by as much as ten times.
Such a flow rate had no use for Su Mo. What he needed was for the time flow to accelerate at super high rates.
The duration of nine days would allow him to multiply several tens of thousands of times.
Perhaps he would be able to turn back time. Despite his disbelief, he would like to be able to make an attempt.
Many folks remained in the Second Divine Hall. He counted the numbers to be over a hundred folks.
There were as many corpses on the ground. The numbers far exceeded those seen in the First Divine Hall.
Su Mo did not know the reasons for such deaths. He entered the Third Divine Hall.
He experienced the same scenario. This time there was a huge modification in the Rules to Time. That excited Su Mo.
After struggling for quite some time, Su Mo managed to control the Rules of Time within the Third Divine Hall.
Almost immediately, Su Mo was able to activate his ability to control time with ease. That exhilarated him.
Because what happened afterwards was unfathomable!
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