My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion Chapter 70
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The others also glanced at Ao Longyu.
Most people did not pay much attention.
There were some who had some understanding of Ao Longyu, so they paid close attention to her.
Dragon Race.
This was the first time a dragon tried to enter the Jade Pool.
Jiang Lan was also watching. He didn't hold much hope.
The Jade Pool looked easy to enter, but it was actually very hard in reality.
It was definitely not a matter of cultivation.
Was it the Jade Pool choosing the people to enter? Or was it someone who was choosing who could enter the Jade Pool?
There was no way to come to a conclusion at this moment.
At this moment, Ao Longyu was walking along the path, waiting for the fog to arrive.
In just a breath's time, the fog swept across from the lake.
Faced with the fog, everyone knew that it was going to be a powerful attack.
However, most people would be able to resist it as long as they persevered.
The remaining time after they had resisted the attack was their only chance in entering the Jade Pool.
Woosh!
The fog swept toward Ao Longyu.
Ao Longyu also attempted to resist.
A gentle breeze blew past. To Ao Longyu, this was an irresistible hurricane.
But when she resisted, everyone realized…
Ao Longyu didn't seem to be doing her best to resist.
Her hand seemed to be reaching into the fog.
"Was she not in a good condition?"
The others were curious.
At this moment, Ao Longyu was retreating in defeat. Retreating here meant that she was getting further and further away from success.
Failure had the upper hand for now.
Jiang Lan saw that Ao Longyu was indeed retreating, but she seemed to be doing something.
But from this angle, he couldn't see it.
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However, he seemed to have seen Ao Longyu unleash some kind of spell technique.
"Aren't spells useless?"
He had seen quite a number of people attacking the fog just now. It was completely useless.
Was Senior Sister Ao that irrational?
Woosh!
While Jiang Lan was still in shock, Ao Longyu was sent flying.
The fog remained in place.
It was as if it was also surprised that Ao Longyu had been sent flying.
Was she trying to scam it?
Jiang Lan frowned. He saw Ao Longyu landing not far from him.
If she retreated any further, she would fall out of the mountain.
Doing so was equivalent to failure.
Ao Longyu was also a little surprised. It seemed to be different from what she had imagined.
However, she did not hesitate at all. Taking advantage of the momentary pause, she transformed into a half-dragon and began to resist the incoming fog.
"It seems like she indeed is not in a good condition. In theory, a perfected Golden Core shouldn't be sent flying."
"What was Junior Sister doing just now?" Hong Luan felt that her Junior Sister had done something.
That was why she was knocked flying.
Lu Jian was slightly surprised before letting out a frown.
"Was it an illusion? I felt that Junior Sister was pushed out by some invisible force."
Lin An was also quite surprised to hear this.
"Array formation? But it doesn't feel like it. This junior sister of the Dragon Race sure has some tricks up her sleeves. "
Jiang Lan had some time to think now.
"The situation just now was abnormal and I seem to have seen something similar somewhere. Could it be…"
Jiang Lan looked at Ao Longyu and thought of a possibility.
If Senior Sister Ao managed to block this attack…
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Then after that…
She might really have to enter the Jade Pool.
If she could enter, then his Goddess Diagram would be able to activate.
However, he was unsure of what would happen next.
So he could only watch calmly.
The fog whistled past. Although Ao Longyu retreated a little, she did not fall off the mountain.
She had not failed.
However, everyone instinctively thought that Ao Longyu had failed after seeing her getting swept away by the fog.
She was too far away.
It was impossible for her to succeed.
Hong Luan also knew that it was impossible.
It was not about speed at all.
She was always in the same position, and her speed increased every time.
Yet, she could not escape the palm of the fog.
However, she also wanted to see if Ao Longyu could reach the Jade Pool even though she was at the edge of the mountain.
There were also some others watching, but most of them were no longer paying attention.
This was a foregone conclusion for many people.
As Jiang Lan watched, he felt that there really was a chance of a comeback.
Those who were still paying attention to Ao Longyu were shocked to discover that she did not run forward.
In the next moment, everyone saw Ao Longyu turn around.
Her back was facing the Jade Pool.
This…
What was she trying to do?
The others didn't know, but Jiang Lan knew what she was doing.
Geniuses were indeed geniuses. She actually thought of using such a small trick here.
Furthermore, she wanted to use this little trick to turn the tide.
"Has Senior Sister given up?" Lin Siya was curious.
She felt that something was amiss.
But she did not know what exactly was wrong.
"Not necessarily. Keep watching," Mu Xiu said softly.
"No way, no way. It feels like it. Can it even be used like this?" Jing Ting also thought of something.
Although they had never seen it before.
But Senior Sister Ao suddenly retreated and now her back was facing the Jade Pool.
This was obviously the theory that she had sought consultation with them previously.
Was she really going to rewrite the records?
Lin An, Hong Luan, and the others didn't know what was going on, but they could sense it.
They were all looking at Ao Longyu.
What was Ao Longyu trying to do?
They felt that something was amiss.
Ao Longyu, who had her back facing the Jade Pool, looked at the fog in front of her and slowly raised her hand.
Success or failure depended on this.
An array formation appeared in front of Ao Longyu.
It was a very ordinary array formation.
It seemed to have no power at all.
Not many people could understand Ao Longyu's actions.
However, Jiang Lan looked at Ao Longyu.
He understood what Ao Longyu was trying to do.
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