God Of Soul System Chapter 1
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Chapter 1
In the marine headquarter , Marineford .
you can see a large number of the headquarter’s recruit running and training in a wide square .
A group recruits seperated from the other and continued to widen the distance from the others at the back , “how to catch up to them?” a young handsom youth thought .
while looking infront of him , Luo Ya made a tired expression .
“Even a group of the Marine recruits are catching up this joke is just too much” .
Just a month ago , Luo Ya found himself inexplicably in the world of one piece , he also became a the Marine hero Monkey . D . Garp nephew , that is Luffy’s uncle .
This is eleven years after the great age of pirates .
Luo Ya was so scared when he arrived here , well it isn’t that surprising . after all if you suddenly found youself in another world suddenly anyone would feel scared . The world of One Piece is his favorite world . he couldn’t help but get exited when he thought about the devil fruits ability and the sword that could cut a mountain like nothing .
Well , Luo Ya think this is a perfect start . after all his Garp’s nephew . He was close to the world’s strongest people .
But who would’ve thought that just two days after coming here he would be thrown into Marineford’s training camp .
Originally Luo Ya wouldn’t feel great about going to the Marine training camp . he estimated that all the people here don’t know about Rokushiki .
But the problem is that they don’t understandt it as much as Luo Ya , the problem is that all of them are more powefull then him .
The others have been here for a month , even when he worked hard to catch up it was still hard to do so .
This made Luo Ya helpless .
“Here is the Marine’s headquarter , in this camp almost all recruit are elites . The admirals like Kisaru and Akainu all started from this training camp” .
thinking to here Luo Ya felt the heavy duty . he also felt helpless .
Just … if he cannot be outsanding in this training camp , he estimated that if he was to go out and face any normale pirate he would get slapped to death so Luo Ya thought about quitting .
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Just why didn’t he have the const . i . tution of the Ds , why didn’t he inherit it . Is it because he’s not a direct blood relative ? .
He is now the big cousin of Monkey . D . Dragon . But in future the government will confront the rvolutionary army . Garp chased the pirate king roger who was strongest of the world , there was also luffy Luo Ya’s nephew the original protagonist in One Piece .
(Tl : probably luffy is 6 years old now)
Every one of them is so outstanding .
With such a background It’s no wonder that Luo Ya feel so pressured . after all the Marine , The Pirate and the Revolutionary army possess great power . Further more even mere recuits are stronger then him and maybe someday they will just start bullying him to vent there anger .
Even the Marine headquarter is not safe …
Even the Marine headquarter is not safe , in addition the futur wars if he joined he will just be suiciding if some day did something wrong he will be dead . He felt so wronged .
He shook his head while trying to forget all this messed up stuff .
“Those things are in the future let concentrate on training and getting stronger” .
He felt so heavy after the training finished . Luo Ya sat and closed his eye . He stayed like that for a while . he started to see a hazy s . p . a . ce .
In the center of that s . p . a . ce he could clearly see a sword suspended in the air .
It exists in his head . It was like this after his soul fused with the original’s body . Luo Ya call this the Soul System .
If you look carefully you could see that this sword is cracked all over . as if it will break at any time .
With a thought of Luo Ya a thing like a property bar directly pops out infront of him .
The first stage: broken sword of the soul +10 (did not meet the strengthening conditions)
Attributes: Attack Power +”0
Stamina: 10/10
“Why did the stamina stop raising even after all this training ? Is 10 the limit ?”
looking at the property bar Luo Ya talked to himself .
And it seem there isn’t any system sister that will explain to him . This system didn’t even talk to him once .
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Luo Ya was trying to Know of it’s function alone all this time .
At first it was like this : the first stage: the broken sword of the soul +0 .
After that Luo Ya found that prcticing and fighting will increase the energy point and when those point reach a certain value it will strengthen The broken sword Of In his soul .
And the strengthening goes from the broken sword of the soul +0 to into a broken sword of the soul +1 and so on .
At first Luo Ya didn’t feel any change but when it reached +5 he could feel that his fist power increased significantly .
Until it reached +10 , although Luo Ya still in the bottom of the camp but you could feel that he isn’t someone who just entred here .
Luo Ya thought he could rely on this system and strengthen himself infinitly so he could stand above the four emperors and the three admirals .
Who would’ve known that the strengthening will sease at +10 . It seemed like it reached the limit of stengthening and could no longer go on .
But in the property bar there was those words “did not meet the condition to strengthen” .
Luo Ya could feel that if he fullfilled that condition It would produce a qualitative change to his powers .
But he didn’t find the way yet .
“What is this so colled ‘condition’ ? What is it ?” .
Luo Ya looked at the words and started to meditate again .
The rest time was over . Luo Ya still couldn’t think of anything while the commanders voice reached his ears so he opned his eyes and returned to train .
Soon after , another day of training was over .
Luo Ya and the other recruit are not as weak as normale people . But his performance was poor so even if someone looked down at him he will just ignore him .
After The end of the training . Luo Ya will leave the training ground .
The Marine headquarter has a huge harbor and could accomodate hundreds of thousand of people training in the square . also there is a place for the soldiers family to live and that is the fortress below .
Of course Romya didn’t live here .
( Tl : Romya probably original here )
He was taken by Garp to Marineford . this is his home now .
Garp wasn’t home . Luo Ya didn’t know where his uncle went . Well his too lazy to care . he took a shower and resumed studying the sword in his mind .
However , Luo Ya rushed out of the bathroom to see someone on his sofa . His uncle was missing for a week now . He didn’t know when he will be back but here he is .
This guy … Luo Ya sighed helplessly . this guy suddenly disappeared for a week . If he didn’t know that Garp is the hero of the sea . standing on top of the seas , he would’ve reported him as a missing person .
At this time Garp was sitting there playing with something . When he saw Luo Ya he grinned .
“Haha Haha , how have you been in the last few days?”
“Does it matter how i did the last few days . You just want to touch where it hurts”
Luo Ya mumbled and then smiled a little while watching Garp and said “I didn’t see you for a week . I was so worried . i am glad your okey”
Garp’s expression instantly solidified and almost sparks of blood shot out .
This sentence is really well said , it didn’t seam like an insult at first with his nephew smiling expression . It resulted in ten thousand points of internal injuries .
With his mouth twitching , Garp with black line on his head looked at Luo Ya . Gestures to his huge fist and said “Luo Ya , You smelly brat , do you want to kiss my Old lady’s iron fist ?” .
“That is still left to you to enjoy it” Luo Ya said then shrugged his shoulders at Garp and went to his room .
But at this time Garp suddenly jumped at him and said “Luo Ya come and kiss my fist” .
This guy really want to beat me now .
In Luo Ya Mind this idea suddenly appeared, to tell the truth he already experianced his fist of love several times .
But when he turned around the thing that was infront of him wasn’t Garp’s fist but …
a simple and exquisite sword!
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