
In SerialAlviona (undergoing Rewrite). Fantasy Romance Adventure Drama Slice of Life
This fiction is going to undergo severe Editing and a Rewrite over next few months. Here is what it hopes to accomplish:
1) Fix the glaring issues from Style in every chapter 1-31 (Dialogues, POV switches and Head-hopping too much)
2) Add some new chapters in and justify the development between Sofia and Anita
3) Remove the info dumps and make it more organic
4) Finalize the genres that this fiction belongs to
5) Create warning in the synopsis relating to the contents of the fiction.
6) Overhaul and show what Mira's view on Alviona is (slowly)
7) Introduce new characters
8) Show chapters the way they were intended, as clues apparently were not visible at all!
9) Make Alviona a bit more serious.
10) Make me (Author) enjoy reading my own work more (yes! :))
Hi. I have been gone for quite a long while. With heart surgery and such that has happened two months ago, I had not had a chance to log on RR due to being hospitalized. I had some other issues that the admins were kind enough to deal with on this fiction. It's good to see everything in one piece.
The synopsis has been removed. Chapter 1 should be coming out sometimes before christmas. A lot has changed. I hope for the better. Instead of edits, I have re-read every single chapter and found it to be unsatisfying. A lot did not make sense and unless you have previously speculated what Alviona is, many things she does won't fall into pieces. Well then, time to address all of this.
Ladies and gentlelmen, this fiction is undergoing a full scale re-write. While the characters and developments stay the same, it's being done differently. So much that the world should feel darker as it should have been.
For those who have stuck around and know the story: Awesome. I worked hard on this, and hope that you will like my re-write.
For thos that are new: Welcome. Give me some time, as I am super sluggish. I don't know much time is some time, but I gurantee chapter 1 will be up before Christmas.
This said, again, thank you and know that I am back. And that this fiction will be completed. AT ANY COST. I will update synopsis after I post chapter 1.
I might post Alviona (revised, as this current one is far too.... simplified, watered down, and dissapointing version of it) seperately. Those that want this, here. But I don't want to add chapter 40. It won't make sense without the backup and world-building of re-write. It will piss myself off.
Now then, let's write hm?
*This beautiful piece of art is provided by Charee from DeviantArt*
https://www.deviantart.com/chalii
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1. Chapter 0 - Prologue; When old dies, something new is always born
2. Chapter 1 - A pure-blood named Alviona
3. Chapter 2 - Complications
4. Chapter 3 - Haven denied
5. Chapter 4 - A well-deserved rest
6. Chapter 5 - An unusual meeting
7. Chapter 6 - A condition for haven
8. Chapter 7 - Not an ordinary child, part 1. Sheltered - at last
9. Chapter 8 - Not an ordinary child, part 2 - Let's go out a bit
10. Chapter 9 - Not an ordinary child; part 3 - Let's play with water
11. Chapter 10 - Solomon's death
12. Chapter 11 - Out of sync
13. Chapter 12 - Awakening
14. Chapter 13 -
15. Chapter 14 - Rise of the Cursed Man
16. Chapter 15 - Let me protect you
17. Chapter 16 - It takes time to sink in
18. Chapter 17 - Mira's awakening
19. Chapter 18 - Solution
20. Chapter 19 - A talk between two mothers, and Alviona's departure
21. Chapter 20 - Arrival to mainland and declaration of pursuit in magic
22. Chapter 21 - Criminal
23. Chapter 22 - An interesting turn of events
24. Chapter 23 - It’s just business
25. Chapter 24 -Death and Ascension
26. Chapter 25 - Gearing up and setting out for adventure
27. Chapter 26 - What is your limit?
28. Mistake and an update
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