(Part 1 of 3)
【EDITING TO MAKE SENSE】
**important** I know this story is a favorite of mine, and I want to keep it true to what past me wanted it to be... But as I re-read this I keep thinking I could've made it better, or it could've been done differently. So I've decided to try and edit/fix it up to make it seem... Better? I hope no one gets mad, and I'll do my absolute best to keep it similar to what it used to be, just know if you are revisiting this story there may be some differences, and past comments could be confusing. Thank for understanding, and I promise that I will try to keep it as similar as possible. **important**
Potential Fixes:
•Adding time skips such as weeks in between or specific time passsings to make the story seem a little more realistic, and not rushed
•Adding more things to flashbacks, maybe adding a new flashbacks but only 1 or 2...
•GRAMMAR AND TYPOS
•SOME dialouge, if it doesn't sit right with me
•Anything that doesn't fit or doesn't match the story
cover by: rivila_cher
"AH!" I gasped as I began hyperventilating in my new bed. For a second I thought I was at home, back in my own bed where my mom would rush into my room to make sure I'm ok. But I was left with no 'What's wrong,'s no 'Are you ok?'s, no bedroom of my own. Just the icy silence of the new place I was forced to call home.
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#10 in Yandere
#1 in Yanderexreader
#51 in Horror
#666 in Horror
#2 in Insanity
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