Zjjan Master Fantasy Mystery Action Adventure
Teaser: I've retired for my freedom and to find peace. I was born a knight with no inheritance. What could they expect from me? —Jaino. I've tried to purge the catalyst. Is my strength not enough? —Jesifer.
Blurb: Including his guild master, many lives had lost to end a calamity. Jaino feels guilty. Still, the first prince of Jelfyr assigned him as a higher official. This has made him hiding to avoid conflicts.
Wanting to find peace, he accidentally meets Criselia, forcing him to accept an agreement. Consuming many lives, her demonstration has left him no choice.
Meanwhile, Jesifer, the queen of Jelfyr, she receives an urgent report from the JSA.
Attempting to end the battle in the wide plain while avoiding casualty, she instead meets Dandia’s ruler, seeking for the strongest.
The outside world now slowly unfolds.
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BTW, since the review title wasn't edited. I have to say, my work is not a poem compilation. I'm writing fiction. But I'm not a writer, I'm just a reader. :) P.s
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Story Progress:
1. Blurb is fulfilled on Chapter Three and Chapter Four
2. Story Arc One, The Savior is fulfilled on Story Arc Five
3. Yes, there is fighting scenes. Three Calamities have been Eliminated in Dandia -- The wide island.
4. The prologue is nearing to begin.
5. Too many conflicts.
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Past tense - When I just narrate a past without much actual actions. I mean like a news, or just telling or reporting the past.
Present tense - Current event. And flashback with actions.
I love flash fiction so world building is not on this story, like narrating a room, narrating a character's traits, etc. As possible, I want them to think, have their decision, etc. etc. etc. etc.
Hallo guys, Help me locate my typos on Story Arc 5. I still don't want to edit Story Arc 1-4. I can't wait to reach story arc Chapter Six(I won't spoil). My outlines and very huge flowcharts are waiting. Sorry, about that, I can understand English without format so, each time I'm looking for typos I was hooked in my story and I didn't realize I forgot about them.
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1. sp00 01, Prologue
2. sp00 02, Glimpse to Prelude
3. sp01 00, Chapter One
4. sp01 01, Jaino
5. sp01 02, Jesifer
6. sp01 03, Help
7. sp01 04, I'm in Hell
8. sp01 05, Failed Advice
9. sp01 06, Coward
10. sp01 07, Who is She
11. sp02 00, Chapter Two
12. sp02 01, His Entities
13. sp02 02, Sky's Rejection
14. sp02 03, His Background
15. sp02 04, Bye Kilie
16. sp02 05, Abrupt yet Severed Start
17. sp03 00, Chapter Three
18. sp03 01, He meets her very weird
19. sp03 02, Altrass and Lladamak
20. sp03 03, Raume and Sai Mea
21. sp03 04, His Might
22. sp03 05, Introduction of the Story
23. sp03 06, Invitation
24. sp03 07, Prelude to a Fight
25. sp03 08, Altrass Brief Identity
26. sp03 09, Princess Vilyarin
27. sp03 10, Yaume Mea
28. sp03 11, At the Throne
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