This is my first atempt at a book sort of thing please tell me what mistakes i make and give me critisism.-

Yuuki, thats the name I've had since I've been in the ophanage. I always dreamed of being an adventurer, hunting strong demons that could destroy a country if poked wrong.... but i have no talent no matter how much I train, train, hunt, use strenthing items I never chain, but I never change. 

I was told to quit, bullied dubbed The Waste of the Adventurer Guild, but I never did.

And this is the story of my death.